~Rythmic Hints~ .:V.S:. 007
 

10 lines
no crew,
d/r
b/s
1 ;ien
etc etc votes

good luck

no hate

mic check one two............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

take your time................................ im just makin me tea............................................... ...........................

I Hate To Say This But Your Wackness Is Outrageous
Dont Want To Attain This So Im Movin Down Incase Its Contaigeous
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*Ahem*
Right-off the bat, I can tell ya rhymes are “watered down” n tasteless
know your places kids.. don’t bother bluffin, I know ya hand is ace-less
ya played phrases wont getcha nowhere wit me.. givin u the cold-shoulder
putting the mic through torture, battlin the master, guess hes grown-bolder
like old-stoners.. ill make da 007 senile, through a memory lapse
to be retired no doubt, hip hops a concept this dick choker barely grasps
you’re ill fitted as an emcee.. like marathon runners stuck-on-crutches
my hunch-is, u like getting bullied, the way u love to munch-on-punches

yo yo im keyin up right now, sorry i was eatin i got proof i'll take a pic if you want i'll drop as quick as i can!!!

dowg just drop i aint no whinny bitch..............drop so we can get deez votes in good luck playa................holla

words seperate your hearts chambers, split the pulmonary veins,
expose your anemic brain, n the 'matter of facts' which it contains,
'hint', erase you merk list, they the worst 6 cats on rb alltogether,
yous like weak wrists, stand no chance after being freshly severed,
a reasonable doubt, needs to be proved to convince the RB jury,
evidence, even gods, and mortal men couldnt take my fists of fury,
rythmic attempts, to throw a punch leaves himself, in a confused state,
police leave him exempt, because judges cant charge, for verbal rape,
intricate precision, to take out this 'hitman', theres some advice,(sig)
left life-less, the tunnel which u see shinin bright, signifies the end of a life,

uppin...........................for votes............................................. ...................................

ooohhh not a bad battle..
both have elevated immensely
especially 007 w/ his structure
BREAKDOWN--
Punches-tie
Flow-tie
Structure-Tie
Metas-007
sustainment-tie
Complexity-007
Enjoyment-Both
Multis-007
Overall-007
jus had that air of complexity which
gave a good set up 4 punches
Props to both

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99336

opener R
closer 7
punches R
personals 7
wordplay R
overal R


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wow emerge you have such a crazy votin system,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

second time uppin............................................. .........................................

Opening: R
Punches: R
Personals: 7
Flow: R
Structure: 7
Vocab: 7
Closing: 7
Overall: Damn a close battle but I gotta go with 7...

Repay the favor by voting on my Battle(s) in the sig thx-

uppin............................................. for the 3rd time.............................................. ....................

Breakdown...

Punches-Tie
Personals-7
Wordplay-Rythmic
Flow-Rythmic
Multi's-Tie
Meta's-7
Creativity-Rythmic
Overall-Rythmic

Vote on this battle yall its been up for a week with only 1 vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98550