eMiNeM MiNis Vs. blak woods (don't sleep, need votes)
 

10-15 Lines
Simple Rules
No hatin
No krew
No Dickridaz

Drops 15 min afta check in...

checkin in..................i did it in the otha battle but ill post it in here.............................................. ............

.........:::::aight:::::............
yo yo look at this kids battles only three
yet he thinks hes got a win against me
fifteen battles for me but losses make me blue
but im gettin serious now n gonna win....startin wit u
ima put this kid into a midlife crisis
gotta show him wat the price is
aww shit now im startin to sound like bob barker
blak woods? damn straight them woods bout to get darker
wit ery blow u take ur gettin weaker
now ur waitin for tha end gettin eager
but i gotta few lines left so ima use to my advantage
ima use each one to cause more damage
for me: 1 vote 2 vote 3 vote four
aight im done, ur gone, walk out that door

***AIGHT***

ayo,

Check ya handle, while i dismantle ya whole name//
ya fame is none, I just begun this shit for fun//
I'm da one that bring da gun to a knife fight//
you get piped right in da back of da head//
cooked ya meat ta keep me fead.. i smash ya ass like bread//
I defeat you when I creap through, and leak you//
“seep through” ya pores, like chemological nerve wars//
I heard yours, then re-worked it, just so it sound right//
I pound like, ya moms last night, I come fast right//
na playa you just slow, i let ya ass know, you come wit da past flo//
you gassed ho, at last, show you how to work shit//
put one through ya shirt, you get merked, cause i jerk shit//
I lerk, hit, hidden in da blakest part of ya heart//
I'll flood ya brain wit lyrics, tear you down, break you apart//
MINIS you a fag, I think i wasted my time, skills is what you had "MINISED", line fa line//


people get ya votes in

that was a nice verse man.................lets get sum votes............................................. ...................................

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im gonna say eminem minis got this because of better personals and punches. the woods gettin darker thing was hott

my vote-minis


return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99005

and my battle in the front lines

uuuuuuuuppppppppp this shit goes wwwwwwaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

emienm minis took this one better flow, punches, metas, multis...
wrodplay wus better n better structure...
eminem minis u elevated alot since the last battle i seen u in....
My VOte-EmInEm MiNiS all yall hit up the Battle(s) in my sig ThanX
Peac3_____________-----------------------_________.................

Oh my god. This battle was shitty.. It deserved to get slept on. But all in all there was a good punch here and there,Multi's good. but the battle would have to [B]Minis[B]..

Ahhh, vote goes to Minis for having punches. Kind of a weak battle though guys, elevate. Try to use metas and just overall add complexity to your verses. But punches decided this battle and that went to Minis.

Repay the favor and copy and paste the battles in my sig and drop some votes. Thanks.

wasn't a bad battle but i think em took this shit with his verse... but both y'all verse i wasn't feeling em need to elevate

vote-em

thats 5-0.................................still need another vote on the poll come on................................................ .................................................. ..

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Breakdown============
punches-em
flow-both
structure-same
sustainment-jus about em
enjoyment-both
metas-em
multis..wasnt feeling
overall-Em

keep elevatin both of u...
stay at this level of opponent..that was to both pz

MAKE SURE YA HIT THAT UP SEEN AS THO I HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98331