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Nyte Fire 12-16-03 08:18 PM

Dropz
 
Me n Dropz writin all the time...layin down rhyme after rhyme
Lyrics so thick that the cops consider it a crime
No one drops lines like we do just ask
after readin 4 verses feels like your inhalin nerve gas
Dropz..this son can really harass
lay beats down quicker than anyone in his class
This kid cant be outlast the style of his lines yet to be surpassed
dysfunctional families..mothers that try to beat us as they please
but we still goin full blast


Dropz
Gene Pool
Handcuffs

Menik 12-16-03 08:20 PM

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

Nyte Fire 12-16-03 08:23 PM

Lets get some feedback playaz

Dev 12-16-03 08:23 PM

work on ya structure, it will help the flow along......try and add a bit more complexity to ya drops....and some of the lines could use some better vocab...but by ya posts it looks like it is ya first...so...it aint too bad.....jus take into concideration what i said...and work on it.add more length to them aswell..pZ

Nyte Fire 12-17-03 09:18 AM

Come on people, can I get some feedback???

Se7eN 12-17-03 10:54 AM

it was alright but hey Dropz look at watcha got on this open mic from me Se7eN, a nice diss


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