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NtBrave1tN 12-17-03 02:58 PM

Brave Vs. sphere
 
Battle






Me::laugh:
You::banghead:

Sphere 12-17-03 03:00 PM

Check

dont take to long to spit

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100 characters

NtBrave1tN 12-17-03 03:01 PM

Yea Yea ...........Newtestament
Check 1-2
KeepIng -RapBattles- alive............


Every One has to Vote Lets Do This.............................................. ...

NtBrave1tN 12-17-03 03:24 PM

....................Newtestament.................. ..............

Yo jesous crist Turned blood to wine, And walked over water in ''sandles'';
Then I have Enough power in One Line to turn Sphere into A ''Triangle''../

NtBrave1tN Is my -RapBattle- Handle Hit me up far a lyerical ''sample'';
I Cop Out Cases like the O.J Scandle,My rymes are~ Um-Um
Good Like ''Cambles'' // (*Cambles Soup Comercial)

Like Iraq You cant Figger Out How You got ''in this mess'' In such ''Distress'';
My words I left are Sure To Bring ''Death'',My ''Text'' Is like sending Anthrax Over the Inter-Net ///

This New~B must be Kidding me, He must think its a Big ''Joke'' ;
He Wants to Battle One of the best And Only has three ''Posts''\\\\

Im Going to Close It off Quickly, And keep It ''Air-Tight'';
You Can Up For -Votes- In wishing,But Simply this wase'nt a ''Fair-fight'' \\\\\

This Kid Likes Nursrey Rymes Only Five ''Bars'';
My flows So Sick, you Gota send Him Get well ''Cards'' \\\\\\


NEWTESTAMENT PRODUCTIONS"~COPYRIGHT
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Sphere 12-17-03 03:32 PM

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Brave at hearts a bad movie..battles aint makin 100 characters
So hes started bitin on my lines..thats the bitch of parameters
Jesus..fucka new testament.. theres enough evidence ya wack
Brave¡¦s sein shit that¡¦s smokin..guees hes jumpin off this track
Battle aint even started yet..n hes already countin up his loss¡¦s*
Brave aint got the balls..its whys hes gettin eatin like a sausage
Imma have to snap ya pencil..to stop ya pointin out each punch**
Fuck it..im nice..I got ya back..now ya aint gone hold a hunch
Guess brave just straight od¡¦d..cus shit..it was over in 10 lines
Ya don¡¦t even needa ghostwriter cus ya copywrite each rhyme


*checkin = check 1-2
**¡¨ ¡§ around each punch

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B.I.Detained 12-17-03 03:37 PM

hmmmm..Sphere ya dont need to explain
BREAKDOWN-----
punches-sphere
flow-sphere
structure-sphere
enjoyment-sphere
wordplay-both..other guy stop pointin it out
Sustainment-sphere
Metas-sphere
Personals-sphere
Overall-Sphere-Big merking here pz

Canuck 12-17-03 03:40 PM

Each of you go vote in the UnderRated :vs: Canuck battle. thx


The Breakdown:

opener= None
closer=Brave (looks as though Sphere was feeding off him)
punches=Sphere (way more solid punches)
structure=Sphere (easier to read)
vocab=Sphere
overall=Sphere

Battle was good, but punches need more weight.

Vote=Sphere

NtBrave1tN 12-17-03 03:41 PM

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^Your a fag^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Sphere 12-17-03 03:44 PM

thanks for votes :)

uppin

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good battle brave

Canuck 12-17-03 03:47 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by NtBrave1tN
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Learn to type retard, it's not my fault you suck at pretend rap.

Sphere 12-17-03 04:04 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Sphere
thanks for votes :)

uppin

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good battle brave

Sphere 12-17-03 04:55 PM

uppin number 3

quit sleepin

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Sphere 12-17-03 05:42 PM

fucka sleeper

uppin 4

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Dominator 12-17-03 07:43 PM

sphere in all categories.... MizErkinnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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prophacyz 12-28-03 06:13 PM

brave i like ya line about turnin sphere into a triangle, but thats about all u had..heres da breakdown...

Flow sphere
Punches sphere
Opener brave
Finisher sphere
Creativity sphere


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