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J*Miles VS Oc Lotto
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no crew u drop first |
this nigga garbage time to do my job/
j*miles the "j" probly means you jog/ clown back to the circus wit the rest of the fam/ i aint even tryin you aint get the best of me man/ got that recipe stirred up you fiending to taste/ you only tastin lead wit red beams on you plate/ get a degree before you try approachin the bench/ you battle me thats like tryin to breathe wit rope on your neck/ imma finish this off wit a smirk on my lips/ only because your girl know how she be workin her hips/ |
i'll drop lata cause i got shit to do but i'll drop by today
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ai holla at me lata.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................
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Nigga tryna get big.. gonna get snatched up quicker than saddam//
As small as lotto is u no he cant survive wit my type of lyrical bomb// My punches are devastating leavin this bitch malfunctioning// ……this cat lotto…couldn’t elevate if he had a pair of wings// U should change ya name to mc loco cause battlin me u crazy// Fuckin wit me ur eye will end up like B.I.G’s crooked and lazy// This is a no win situation theres no chance that ur gonna proceed// My gat will make u bleed, put a patch on ur head bigger than rasheed’s// In this game I’m in it to kill u can go hide and my bullets will seek// Sorry to do this kid but ur tha second emcee to be assassinated in a week// |
:The BreakDown:
opener= None (yaaawwwn) closer=J*Miles (cuz I was the first lol) his closer was ill peeps, don't sleep flow=J*Miles (way better) personals=J*Miles (if any) punches=J*Miles (on point, but soft) structure=NONE (try using these , . ? ! ") there easy to use, and make your verse easy to read and flow the way it's supposed to! Vote = J*Miles |
opener: tie
closer: miles punches: miles structure:tie vocab: tie wordplay: miles overall: miles aiight, nice battle but miles came a lot harder that OC lotto. peace PLZ WILL YOU DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, SEEMING AS I HAVE TAKEN MY TIME TO VOTE ON YOU BATTLE, THANKS http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6069#post996069 |
Uppin 4 votes
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closer: J
opener: uh boring punches: J structure:J wordplay: J overall- J ok battle, J's closer was ill vote on this shit help get it closed http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99100 |
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i thought that was Santa Claus, lol anyway.... closer-j miles opener-j miles punches-j miles structure-j miles wordplay-j miles flow-tie entertainment-j miles(easily) vote-j miles |
J Miles just got the best of Oc Lotto with his wordplay, and everything although Miles could've did better.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99472 poll vote on mine |
i will when i hit 100posts.......................................... .
Uppin 4 votes............................................. ............... |
opener: miles
closer: miles punches: miles structure:miles wordplay: miles overall: miles Yeah, a bit lopsided. Ah, Lotto, remember to punch in battles. But you both have potential, elevate and good luck. |
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