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mental illness vs X Ecution
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blind spit 30 min check in..1 |
Touch a Star? Rush your bar Above I, Asterisk
You own a Lose.. but some how managed it Vanish quick, Then Repeat the Same Rhyme Twice Just Remember This L Tossed Came From Trife A-Like, Right? Cloned My DNA Still Cant Write Gems Your Mic's Left With More FeedBack The Mike's Flesh Nice Text? Cut Your Text Short Like a Slight Breath Your Repears here, Let's See iF you Can Fight Death Quote Shit, And Leave Mods Asking For A CallaB Trife Stabs Text And Leave X Froze Like Ice Packs Ease! |
sry didnt see this ma verse will b ready in a couple, i was waitn for a check in but i guess u decided to just post ill have mine up soon.......1
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Yall shud kno by now, that im so sick even aids donations go to my address
u posted 1st the way u say X's verse was below average ur battles aint savage plus the fact that ur shit is plain dont mean it'll fly its a simillie the way i never liked ur ass so ill be damn if u make me die i'll fry this bitch..my text is blunt i expected this vet to front but G'll open his chest like old Pirates in a Treasure Hunt the only reason i searched ya battles was to see how hard... NOT to try your ahead of me the way u embeded biggie's cd..cause u ready to die like i washed jeans over n over, after this battle ull be faded stick to the basics, leave em gone in 30 seconds like TWO nicolas cages |
people lets get votes common..............
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opener=tie closer=x(week) flow=tie punches=x personals=x enjoyment=x x=not a bad spit man seen u hit harder but gd, mentil=work on personals and punches. hit this with an honest vote plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8309#post998309 .....thx...............................pz |
Opening: X
Punches:x Personals: x Wordplay: x Vocab:x Flow:x Structure: MI Closing: X Overall: X |
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yo wut the fuk!
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X Please return da favor on my 2 Battles..The links are in da sig or u look in elevated~ .
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opener - both wack
closer - X punches - X kinda played though personals - blah wordplay - X overal - X weak battle this should be in regular herbish ass frontlines |
^ Whut he said
Punches: X..PLAYED TO THE MAX Personal: None Wordplay: X Flow: X Verdict: X Front lines Hoe. |
overall - arrite battle. mentill came pretty good, verse flowed well and had metties which was nice to read, although he lacked strong punches which would have made the verse even better. x ecution had the punches, average hittin` punches, pretty good from him also. since you both focused on different aspect of verses, it made this vote difficult. x ecutions aspect, punches, are always needed in a battle verse, but as mentill illness had some also, it almost evened out. x ecution didnt have the metties, but mentill didnt have the punches. this is a tough decision because of that, but vote. . .x ecution. nice verses.
vote - x ecution and THAT^. . children, is how you are supposed to vote. |
LMAO@ triflin
Breakdown.. Punches-X Wordplay-MI Flow-MI Personals-X Multi's-X Meta's-X Overall-X Can yall vote on this battle wid me n diverse please??? :) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98550 |
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