Yungheadwrecka vs Shady16
 

10-12 lines
No freeposting
No crew d/r hate votes
30 minutes to drop
Good luck

Yo hold up hey! We know ya fake, I numb senses like Novacaine /
Shady ain't from the Windy City, But about to get blown away//
Yung'll cut ya ankles and put them behind you with speed/
Then push Shady backwards and let him really fall on his feet//
Shady Has No Protection, like Poverished Counteries he's defenseless/
You Could Battle me in "Teepees" & Still Wouldnt Know What "inTENSe-Is"//
Kid I burn ya hope, Better learn ta cope or just stand firm & choke/
cause your styles more underdeveloped than the sperm in ya throat//
Dang blang it I'm back, Insane with rap shit, damagin' tracks/
Hand you your ass so fast I'm back in the past, handin'it back//
Yung fucks with ya head like Wet dreams and stay on ya mind/
I just left Shady in awe like dentists takin thier time!//

There ya go that took me like 10 minutes...haha drop ya verse and lets get votes goin...

Alright ,


Just Know This , When I Grow Up I'ma Be So Rich //
And Just Like " Cross Dressers Playin Strip Poker " Your Gettin Exposed Bitch //
Your Boggess, And It Aint Even Hard To Notice //
You Couldnt " Flow " If You Were In The Nile And Your Name Was Moses //
Im The King , Your A Useless Peasent //
Only Good " Rapping " your Gunna Do Is On Christams Presents //
I Always Stay Deep In The Game , Your Just A Level Im Beating Quick //
You Cant Get On Fire , So Your Heating The Wick //
Your Misleading My Dick , Im Comin At you Cause you Easily Mistaken For Pussy //
Your Just A Woosie , Im Hard , Your Like J'lo Tooshie Your Mushie //

No comment .... But yea nice versE? Uppin fa votes .

what u mean no comment lol ... did u say nice verse sarcasticly..im lost lol?


yeah uppin for votes

this was close in my mind, thou I think Head Wreaka got this one wit a lil bit better word play Ive seen better from you thou wreaker. come hard next time. Shady needs to up his game had a few good lines but over all was not as hard.

Vote Young Head Wreaka

Thas 1-0...Uppin #1 .

uppppin

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peace

heres the breakdown yo!

Complex:Young
Flow:young
Structure:young
Punches:both
Personals:young
Oveerall vote: young

young got this by far....Shady u need to elevate your flows dawg if you wanna be good just practice ur flows offline and get a beat...Going...thats how i elevated...just my 2 cent$

Vote=Young

hit up my battle young since u got 300 posts....I need the battle closed!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99337

2-0....Uppin # 2 .

this was a average battle..nothing reallt stood out

Shady16:
you started off like its not a battle but the second line was creative...but i felt you didnt come strong enough and you had stretched lines..and played ones that i think u bit like this:

Only Good " Rapping " your Gunna Do Is On Christams Presents //

^^ive heard that about 100 times...which lost u this battle even more...try come stronger and more creative...one creative line is not enough...and fix your structure a bit keep it lenghted right...

YHW:
your verse was alright....nuttin eye popping, but it was enough to win this battle for you

vote- Yungheadwrecka


BOTH ELEVATE

Wordplay:Young
Flow:young
Structure:young
Punches:TIE
Personals:young
Entertainment:young
opener:young
closer:young
vote-young

can you guys hit up my battle[s], i need some vote, plus
i voted on yours

~peace~
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opener: young
rhymes:young
wordplay:young
closer:young
overall:young

this was an alright battle both cats had some alright lyrics but young just came harder

i would appreciate if you all would vote on

HotRod vs Matt Dillon
HotRod vs McNookie

thanks man be sure to make the vote honest like i did

1 more vote and this is over so can we please hurry with it? .

BOTH ELEVATE..

But..

Punches- Tie
Metas- YHW
Multis- YHW
Personals- None really
Flow- YHW
Enjoyment- Neither :)
Overall- YHW

Get better structure.. Read around.. Elevate..