Black Belt vs OneMeanSaltine
 

Aight, checkin in

Whose dis kid, mista Black Belt, pull out the gun and let the mack+melt,
Given poker chips and no opponents, still couldn't stack+wealth,
You belong on the back+shelf, you messin with elite, don't tempt+me+dude,
No one hears you "Ecko" in a hole 19 by seventy+two, *
I come at you holdin heat, scoldin wit beef,
Bury you under pavement so you can hold down the street,
Black belt just a number, theres plenty more addin+up,
Takin on OMS, this boy ain't man+enough,
You had it rough, from the openin bar,
Ain't you read my occupation? I'm tendin bars.

* Ecko clothing established in 1972=dimensions of a grave

times up yo, better urry up and pos it right quick...hate to win by default...so hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry uppppppppppppppp dawg!!!!

The raps that you spit are there just for show/
I'm going to rip you so hard you'll feel my flow/
Each of my lines are like ten drops of acid/
I've got the gift kid and you wish you had it/
You say your the Saltine but I'm an English King/
Don't bother rappin' you'll do better if you sing/
Im a Black Belt bitch you couldn't handle me in the ring/
Saltine says he's one mean bitch/
I'd leave him face down droudin' in the ditch/
He's more of a bug that I just had to itch/

vote up plz .................................................. .................................................. ......

aight bolth were not that great but OneMoreSaltine came wit more multis and was just all around better thou bolth need to step it up fo real. Pritty wack battle all together...

Vote Saltine

aight, uppin for more votes...let's do this so it is over with....ready to move on in life...lol....

CAN I GET 2 MORE VOTES SO I CAN GET THE KO! I NEED TO WIN SOME DAYUM BATTLES SO I CAN MOVE UP IN THE WORLD! LOL! HOOK ME UP YA'LL!

vote - Onemean

wordplay - One
punchlines - one
structure - black
opener - one
closer - one
rhyme scheme - one
overall - one

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