Viscosity - Rap created in 7 days, journal of the creator
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99771

i like this piece because of the thought he put behind the piece

This was a different approach on the song Comman did "I love H.E.R." or something like that

His rhymes were not lyrically the best but i think the content behind the lines made this a great piece

well...it had a good concept, a bit of orginality you don't see as often any more, but it was not legendary. half the words didn't even rhyme.

i guess i just loved the concept...

but yea, lyrically it wasnt that great

ohh well, i still like it

sorry to waste your time

None of the lines rhymed. They werent supposed to, shit was spoken word.


Dumbass maven!

Actually it did rhyme, just in the form of multis.

yes, I slur a few of my words..
I'd just like to thank TR for even nominating it into RB Legends
that means alot.. i keyed it up for shits n giggles on alil topical
Not all the words were supposed to rhyme, some where...
But thanks anyway

not legendary .

i felt the piece was really good actually....nice work

-1-

same, what does a peice have to be to be legendary these days.....??seems so long since a peice not donte by cam was in there

word^^^
And im not trying boast or anything...
Its an honor for this to be here, but Ive read some of the Open Mic's in the legendary section... some aren't even that good....
NOT SAYING MINE IS GREAT... just saying... seems like cuz there a vet anything they write is automatically dope...

word...I think some new peices needed to be added

tho a good piece...legend it is not.....stay up tho

ight thanks.. peace

lol, then why was it in open mic?
spoken word=poetry
and how can you even call it a spoken word without it being audio?

as for the legends already put in, I totally agree that a lot of them should not be there. the reason very little gets in now is because I want it to be the best of the best. Why put a whole bunch of medicre stuff in?
the reason I haven't taken anything out of the legends forums except my own piece is because I don't think it would be right for me to do so, without the author permission or the admins.