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Lewd 12-19-03 11:53 AM

I Was Thinkin
 
just decided to write somethin ...no reason.no real topic just thinkin.




hear it is a story of untoled proportions,
mistold contortions and ugly distortions,
is it misfourtune or just bad luck,
not bein able to focuz cuz star struck,
does god give a damn,or not giv a fuck,
how many prayers can he hear,
when hes deaf to the devils fear,
or does he just cover his ears,
cuz hes tired of untrue tears,
stears us in the right direction,
but we always go astray,
gives us the path to perfection,
but we always turn to disaray.
and we wonder why we all misery(mis-a-ray)
wait till the next tomorrow day we say,
we'll turn it around and go the other way,


not done just fuckin around...tell me waht u think

LastPoet 12-19-03 12:11 PM

...Hmmm...I don't konw why...but..I enjoyed reading it..??..^^

Lewd 12-19-03 12:29 PM

thanks...

Replied to
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99162

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99087

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99007

Lewd 12-19-03 01:14 PM

hey give me some feedback on this shit

Lewd 12-24-03 03:21 PM

Throw me some feedback on tthis please.,,,,,,,,,,,................................ ........................................

Maven 12-24-03 03:25 PM

you have to reply to three open mics, not three battles you herb.

Edicius 12-24-03 03:49 PM

^Lmao


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