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13th Disciple 12-19-03 01:41 PM

Why'd u Do It?
 
this is a real situation goin on in my family right now....its a deep
drop....peep



http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/nicknamemusic.htm

Nick Wilson 12-19-03 01:52 PM

Sorry about the situation, i cant imagine what your family is going
through. Best wishes.

About the track, the first thing i notice is your voice overs are off,
and i feel if your voice overs are not perfect, dont use them at all.
Lyricaly, it was pretty solid, real. Flow was alright i guess, and the
mic presense was on point. Overall the track was pretty good,
but sounded fairly amature. (Prolly because of the voice overs tho)
Return the favor homie.

Cise

MethodZ 12-19-03 07:50 PM

WOW!

sorry about whats going on....i cant really say anythin cause i dont know what its like to have that happen...sorry bout all the shit i been sayin, NO hate...

anywayz about that song...

at the start your flow is off a little because ur going too fast for the beat...if ur quality was better it would be dizzope...beat is nice lyrics are deep...overall this track was good,...keep droppin tracks...

Pz

13th Disciple 12-19-03 09:01 PM

appreciate it yall....no doubt

whitelightning 12-20-03 06:19 PM

Same things as everyone else..

Sorry about the situation...

Your flow was off...didn't really feel it too much...

Peace

MeNTiLL 12-26-03 06:29 PM

Pretty nice track here man ... Im feelin' the tower of babble beat a lot ... I wanted to do sumthin' to that beat but couldn't find it no where ... LoL ... Lyrics are pretty dope ... Voice is dope on this track man ... Flow is on point ... Dope track here man ... Keep doin' U ... Peace

KaaS 12-28-03 12:13 PM

some deep shit, sorry bout the situation, but overall not a bad track

SiniX 12-29-03 12:16 AM

flow was off....wasnt feelin it....

but i wouldnt even have the heart to flow after that....so mad props to 13th...keep ya head up dawg.

Muddy Boots 12-29-03 01:50 AM

-Clicks hi -


wow .. man this is felt. . flow could use some work, content was nice and felt .. delivery wasnt bad could use some working on but overall it wasn't a bad track.

13th Disciple 12-29-03 01:17 PM

i forgot this song existed..cuz at the time i spit it...it was all
emotion...i didn't really care about how it came out....i kinda
avoided hearing this track again becuz of the things i would feel..
but for the cats who responded...good looks....


the favor will be returned...


ghost

Straie 12-29-03 05:24 PM

deep shit...........yeah voice overs was off, but people dont understand , some people actually do that on purpose,lol..extra presence.......real nice track.I liked the flow and the lyrics...........keep ya head up

PostMan 12-29-03 11:32 PM

dog.. you elevated like a mufucka.. the flow is hot on this mufucka....... sorry for that shit man. i feel ya......
quality is kinda bad. but i aint gonna say much cuz this come froms the heart.

good shit.


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