DropZ Diss The Revival nigga
 

I master- tactics, and DropZ ~bates(masterbates) faggots
Shagadelic, flow, homo - u dunno what u up against
Who bump that shit? I bump that new hit
You poppin shit off the mouth from 3 years ago - biter
Just a desire, but its pretty sad, you got torn up by Nyte Fire
Peep your IQ, it got u changin I's into Y's, like 'shyt'
Yea lemme do that to, 'DropZ is a BYTCH'.. NOW IM GHETTO
Let time settle, log back on in a few years ~
Or just goto a new Forum, daughter go hit up some new queers..
Hes 16 years' old, im hungry, this cats a full-grown-meal
You'z a phony-steal, lets be real..
You didnt get one positive hit on ur diss on me
Heres the reality... you'z a played fuck, searchin for his sexuality
But like the Grim Reaper, your my next fatality
This cats' a faggot - see? He'll post back that he was bu-sy
And Couldnt' respond, but the real reason is he poped his cherry on his tampon..
Oh snap, im wrong - he was gettin shot-at
Then bitch, weres ur glock-at? wheres ur block-at?
Either way u gettin ur ass-kicked
From the net, to the street, im the realest nigga, who will leave u in the casket
Yes, mother fucker - over net-beef..
peace

That shit was hard, Vis you ripped his ass

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

I replied to the following people:
Camarc
BornToKill
-Technician-

uuppp

..LOL!!!..I must be fair and wait for Dropz piece to judge..but..this was pretty funny..LOL!

^hey shutup.. I dont care what BITERS think..
go somewhere that does

GO BITE CANIBUS SOME MORE FAGGOT

first of all, you upped this thread one minute after you upped it the first time. second of all, I saw a few of your replies, and they really sucked. In the future, leave links to your replies, or the thread gets closed.

Now, onto your rhyme. You really need to elevate. I mean, half of the words didn't rhyme, you didn't really insult him in any original way, and your wordplay was poorly formatted. Most of your insults either said "you're gay" or "You're a woman", neither of which are very insulting. Your flow was totally off. Try to even out your lines, that way the flow will usually follow. Another way to do it is to have the same number of syllables in each line.

And if you want to be mega cool, write about something that is good to read, cause noone gives a fuck about your petty beef. ;)

we can have a rematch bitch but ya first need topost in our 1st battle dumbfuck

Shut the fuck up yourself homo. He commented on your piece which last time I checked is what you want people to do.
Anyway, in some parts the flow and structure but the punches were there, they just needed wordin differently.
Overall 6/10 coz I'm feelin generous.

Now go on....tell me to shut the fuck up and put out a diss piece out bout me!!

Anytime someone votest against Visc or doesn't give him a good reply he calls you a biter, hater, or a dickrider...look at his fuckin rhyme..almost all his fuckin punches were about gay shit...seriously man, does this look like fuckin kindergarten?