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Forum: Poetic Scriptures 02-10-04, 06:31 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 237
Posted By Tourniquet
I didnt feel any emotion in this... At least not...

I didnt feel any emotion in this... At least not as much as I would expect given the content. You've done the same thing here as with your 'My People' piece Lyrical... Taken a powerful topic and...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 02-09-04, 09:03 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 356
Posted By Tourniquet
Your holding yourself back. Your limiting your...

Your holding yourself back. Your limiting your abilities, disrespecting yourself. You ask why I say this? Because of the way in which you have written this. Youve taken a strong proud message and...
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-29-04, 08:12 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 451
Posted By Tourniquet
For these theories to be discussed its kind of a...

For these theories to be discussed its kind of a given that you are more inclined to believe evolutionists theories of how we came into existance, over creationist theories. That being said, we must...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-27-04, 07:29 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 341
Posted By Tourniquet
Count me in.. Im 4th year into a triple major -...

Count me in.. Im 4th year into a triple major - Ancient History/Archeaology/Religious History. My main strain of Ancient History is Egyptology, my favourite period also being the Middle Kingdom,...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-27-04, 01:13 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 237
Posted By Tourniquet
Very nice Maven. It is sometimes hard to portray...

Very nice Maven. It is sometimes hard to portray depth with such strict guidlines as V has stated, but there is obvious growth here, and the journey taken is evident. Traditional Haikus and its what...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-27-04, 01:03 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 341
Posted By Tourniquet
Wonderful Senryu Bounce. Very thought provocative...

Wonderful Senryu Bounce. Very thought provocative in its own encrypted way, as per your usual style. The decay of our society is a sad thing indeed, especially when such hatred is spawned from...
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-25-04, 12:07 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 428
Posted By Tourniquet
130,000 British and American troops are in action...

130,000 British and American troops are in action in Iraq from a total force of 250,000 in the Gulf.
The Allies have launched 725 Tomahawk cruise missiles, flown 18,000 sorties, dropped 50 cluster...
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-23-04, 10:55 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 363
Posted By Tourniquet
www.dictionary.com Look up - egotistical.

www.dictionary.com

Look up - egotistical.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-23-04, 10:48 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 363
Posted By Tourniquet
Incorrect. Until we prove we are alone, we must...

Incorrect. Until we prove we are alone, we must assume we arent.

That, is rationality.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-23-04, 10:43 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 363
Posted By Tourniquet
Of course they do. What do they look like? Do...

Of course they do. What do they look like? Do they go to school? Do they eat Ham and Eggs for breakfast? Hell, who knows. But there are other life forms... from microscopic bacterium to highly...
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-23-04, 10:36 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 325
Posted By Tourniquet
I was raised in a predominantly Buddhist Society....

I was raised in a predominantly Buddhist Society. I do admit that I have taken alot of that with me in my journey thus far through life, however since moving to Australia I have also broadened my...
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-23-04, 09:57 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 556
Posted By Tourniquet
Dont be so ignorant.. shes a child, and probably...

Dont be so ignorant.. shes a child, and probably knows no better. I have a 10 year old daughter myself and while I am very open to her about sexual organs and sexual relations etc, she doesnt really...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-19-04, 07:16 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 251
Posted By Tourniquet
Ahh Shawty is correct. Your count is wrong for a...

Ahh Shawty is correct. Your count is wrong for a Haiku. But further than that, if the count was right this would actually be a Senryu (A Haiku written about subjects other than nature).
Here, I will...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-18-04, 11:57 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 287
Posted By Tourniquet
While its impressive that you are trying new...

While its impressive that you are trying new things, this isnt quite Haiku..
The Haiku, or Hokku,use the count 5-7-5.
Traditionally Haiku are about nature and generally a 'Haiku' written about...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-12-04, 09:43 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 328
Posted By Tourniquet
I got the feeling of supermaket, small one, with...

I got the feeling of supermaket, small one, with checkout counters lol And a lady standing in there who has worked there a long time, daydreaming. Thinking about what it is that makes her happy, the...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-11-04, 09:30 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 265
Posted By Tourniquet
Thanks for the feedback. Necro, you are correct...

Thanks for the feedback.

Necro, you are correct in mentioning existentialism... When I first went to Uni I did 1 semester of Psych before changing my second major, and the existentialism theories...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-10-04, 02:51 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 265
Posted By Tourniquet
Existence

My name is not important
As my life is unimportant
I have no fixed, determined
Or knowledgeable future,
Only death is promised.
I am alone in a world
That is meaningless
Full of...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-07-04, 08:00 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 388
Posted By Tourniquet
Im sorry, but you are far from a philosopher if...

Im sorry, but you are far from a philosopher if all you take is the rational path... Not to mention your closing statement here.. Jeez.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-05-04, 09:42 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 480
Posted By Tourniquet
Re: This is a thinker

1. Then you wouldnt be asking this one.
2. Popularity only exists, as opposed to those who are not popular.
3. No, because they are sychronized by individual choice.
4. Maybe, the vacuum is on...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-05-04, 09:21 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 206
Posted By Tourniquet
I agree, I love the repetition of the word dare...

I agree, I love the repetition of the word dare also. It was almost like a voice getting louder in my ears.. Becoming more frenzied and feverous in its pitch.. Actually Daring the reader to do these...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-05-04, 09:16 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 285
Posted By Tourniquet
Not sure I should interrupt what seems to be a...

Not sure I should interrupt what seems to be a 'private moment'.. but pfft, I will anyway because I want to tell you this is beautifully written. Using the thunder and rain, and writing them...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-05-04, 09:00 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 273
Posted By Tourniquet
The somewhat original content here while creative...

The somewhat original content here while creative and actually brilliantly written in some places, was overthrown by the use of '2' and 'B4' etc.. Using abbreviations like this really does your...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-05-04, 08:47 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 485
Posted By Tourniquet
Have to agree with the above reply.. Sorry to say...

Have to agree with the above reply..
Sorry to say I didnt get very far into it either.
You are missing entire words and shortening others. Not to mention the incorrections. All this means the reader...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-05-04, 08:38 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 284
Posted By Tourniquet
I had to come and read this again...and after...

I had to come and read this again...and after reading your reply I thought about what you said.. and wanted to offer a suggestion. Maybe you could continue the piece from the daughters side of...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-03-04, 12:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 402
Posted By Tourniquet
Astonishingly good. I concur with all that filed...

Astonishingly good. I concur with all that filed has said, you do indeed possess a very personalized style to your writing. True originality that holds so much meaning in so few words and little...
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