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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-24-04, 05:30 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 650
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Twizted Ayngel
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-20-04, 11:08 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 182
Posted By
Twizted Ayngel
Very emotional, but basic...
Very emotional, but basic rhyme&flow&vocabulary. Could've been better in those aspects, but the emotion was there & was good. |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-20-04, 11:07 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 218
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Twizted Ayngel
yeah
some more feed would be nice.. it aint a...
yeah some more feed would be nice.. it aint a long piece, iont see why nobodys resondin. |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-19-04, 01:35 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 218
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Twizted Ayngel
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Forum: Member Mugshots
08-19-04, 01:32 AM
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Replies: 126
Views: 6,476
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Twizted Ayngel
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-19-04, 12:00 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 218
Posted By
Twizted Ayngel
Reminds me of a piece I once wrote, maybe I'll...
Reminds me of a piece I once wrote, maybe I'll post it soon. Anyway, a lot of emotion in this. Kind of makes you think about the way you think about things, huh? Nice flow, aswell. I liked this. A... |
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Forum: Front Lines Battles
08-18-04, 10:34 PM
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Replies: 21
BATTLE: **FLEx** vs ¥D's Money¥
Views: 937
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Twizted Ayngel
Voted For: **FLEx**
Uh, at least you attempted...
Voted For: **FLEx** Uh, at least you attempted punches and whatnot. The other guy didn't. Yours also had a better flow, and structure. This battle was pretty weak, but you definitely came... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 10:29 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 218
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Twizted Ayngel
& if you leave links, or names to pieces -...
& if you leave links, or names to pieces - i'll leave some feedback in return - as long as you drop good feed. |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 09:00 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 218
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Twizted Ayngel
Aborted ChiLd.
Little child, you'll never smile, wont have a life to make worthwhile, Your mom is wild, couldn't handle the piled up stress of bein fertile, No funds, or a house to live in, Could it be? A better... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 08:46 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 156
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Twizted Ayngel
AMAZING imagery. People are sleepin on this but...
AMAZING imagery. People are sleepin on this but its a real good read. A nice flow to it, a good topic. I like how you repeated the word smooth as much as you did. It worked in nicely. I really like... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 08:42 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 222
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Twizted Ayngel
^The only reason you have 2O1 posts, is because...
^The only reason you have 2O1 posts, is because you post gay responses like that. You're annoying. Anyway - I was feelin this. Had a nice flow, a good topic - its kind of played but not in the... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 08:41 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 135
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Twizted Ayngel
Personally, I really was feelin this. The topic...
Personally, I really was feelin this. The topic was a very good one, and you did it well. The only problem, though, as ...God... said, is the flow is off. Some of the bars seem stretched. Work on... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 08:40 PM
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Replies: 14
Poll: Prayer
Views: 167
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Twizted Ayngel
If you give shitty responses, you're gunna get...
If you give shitty responses, you're gunna get them back. Or else, you're just not going to get them. It was plain, btw. Could've been much better. |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 08:38 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 269
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Twizted Ayngel
'It Sucked' was the gayest response I've ever...
'It Sucked' was the gayest response I've ever read. I hope no one ever responds to your pieces. Anyway, For a freeverse it was good, it had a little flow to it, in its own. Okay topic. I liked it.... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 03:09 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 358
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Twizted Ayngel
^LOL @ That Sig & response. *Sighs* Some...
^LOL @ That Sig & response. *Sighs* Some girls will just never learn. Anyway, The flow and the emotion in this was nice. Seemed pretty angry. This was one of the better flowing and emotional pieces... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 03:07 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 239
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Twizted Ayngel
Pretty played topic, pretty basic rhyme &...
Pretty played topic, pretty basic rhyme & flow. Very basic vocabulary. Alright emotion & remotely boring imagery. Keep elevatin. Try to make your pieces a little longer, add some multi's or higher... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
08-18-04, 03:00 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 650
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Twizted Ayngel
Yeah & you definitely aint write that...
Yeah & you definitely aint write that shit. But since you're going with this whole illusion of you writing it: Too short, basic, not as much emotion as there could be. K. |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
12-24-03, 04:47 PM
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Replies: 192
Views: 4,786
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Twizted Ayngel
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Forum: Text Battling
12-21-03, 10:50 PM
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Replies: 26
BATTLE: AyngeL VS babycat05
Views: 591
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Twizted Ayngel
erm.. lets get a few more votes before the end of...
erm.. lets get a few more votes before the end of the year.. *yawns*................................................................. |
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Forum: Text Battling
12-18-03, 06:52 PM
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Replies: 26
BATTLE: AyngeL VS babycat05
Views: 591
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Twizted Ayngel
lol TRUUUUUUUUE this shit was up for a month n...
lol TRUUUUUUUUE this shit was up for a month n thas all she came up wit. shit if was you i'd be straight embarassed.. at least mine was a like 5 minute verse. |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
12-10-03, 05:57 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 327
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Twizted Ayngel
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Forum: Member Mugshots
12-10-03, 06:32 AM
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Replies: 192
Views: 4,786
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Twizted Ayngel
lol y'all can diss me.. u act like lil wannabe...
lol y'all can diss me.. u act like lil wannabe net-gangsters' opinions bother me. |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
12-09-03, 06:10 PM
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Replies: 192
Views: 4,786
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Twizted Ayngel
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Forum: Member Mugshots
12-09-03, 05:30 PM
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Replies: 192
Views: 4,786
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Forum: Member Mugshots
12-09-03, 06:26 AM
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Replies: 192
Views: 4,786
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