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Forum: Textual Releases 09-03-06, 06:48 PM

Replies: 7 The 7 Sins: Lust Views: 499 Posted By Pakaveli Don't mind me saying this Wiley, but your... Don't mind me saying this Wiley, but your contradicting yourself.....your saying you didn't understand half the stuff i said but then go on to call me/ my writing illeterate. Seriously, think before...

Forum: Textual Releases 08-31-06, 03:14 PM

Replies: 7 The 7 Sins: Lust Views: 499 Posted By Pakaveli ... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2881856&posted=1#post2881856 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2881857&posted=1#post2881857

Forum: Textual Releases 08-31-06, 03:13 PM

Replies: 10 Reminisce Views: 891 Posted By Pakaveli the concept of this was good and is quite true as... the concept of this was good and is quite true as most commercial rappers get out of their hood by rapping but then brag about the roots. I liked how you used first person as the 1st person dialogue...

Forum: Closed Threads 08-31-06, 03:08 PM

Replies: 6 the kidd. Views: 687 Posted By Pakaveli This was aight, for a first or a series of first... This was aight, for a first or a series of first dorps it's aight, your probably new to the depth game and you basically need to start using metaphors, personification and intense description at...

Forum: Textual Releases 08-31-06, 03:05 PM

Replies: 7 The 7 Sins: Lust Views: 499 Posted By Pakaveli The 7 Sins: Lust The Seven Sins: Lust http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9820/lustactivell8.jpg Ta2 Tears as Lionel Lust, Verse 2 Pakaveli as narrator, verses 1 & 3 “Look over there” Sumptuous fruits that grow...

Forum: Closed 07-22-06, 10:05 PM

Replies: 78 Set yourself up Views: 4,134 Posted By Pakaveli You too broke to be rectified Gettin Shox only by... You too broke to be rectified Gettin Shox only by being electrified.............(Shox=Nike Shox) In one hand gun and in another a rose

Forum: Closed 07-22-06, 05:05 PM

Replies: 78 Set yourself up Views: 4,134 Posted By Pakaveli Lik playin soccer in the summer my kick is... Lik playin soccer in the summer my kick is hot Your coming up with played concepts like a google bot i fly and watch you cower down

Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-20-06, 12:49 AM

Replies: 9 Sticky: Contendership Match: Wireless (3-0) vs Pakavelli (1-0) Views: 5,055 Posted By Pakaveli Sorted it out, he won't be able to drop....Close... Sorted it out, he won't be able to drop....Close this.

Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-20-06, 12:23 AM

Replies: 9 Sticky: Contendership Match: Wireless (3-0) vs Pakavelli (1-0) Views: 5,055 Posted By Pakaveli Have another 2 hours....or drop tommorow... Have another 2 hours....or drop tommorow...

Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-19-06, 11:21 PM

Replies: 9 Sticky: Contendership Match: Wireless (3-0) vs Pakavelli (1-0) Views: 5,055 Posted By Pakaveli no probs..................................... no probs.....................................

Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-19-06, 10:06 PM

Replies: 7 Tim (2-0) vs Malicious (0-1) Views: 2,473 Posted By Pakaveli Both the drops were very good. . T- your drop was... Both the drops were very good. . T- your drop was good but the vocabulary wasn't at your usual standard and the flow got awkard at a point as well. . M-your verse was good too, the flow was good and...

Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-19-06, 08:48 PM

Replies: 9 Sticky: Contendership Match: Wireless (3-0) vs Pakavelli (1-0) Views: 5,055 Posted By Pakaveli Don't tell me this is a no show....or was thier... Don't tell me this is a no show....or was thier another extension.

Forum: Album Reviews 07-19-06, 02:58 PM

Replies: 17 2Pac: Duets Views: 2,551 Posted By Pakaveli Dope Mixtape.........kills biggie duets anyday. Dope Mixtape.........kills biggie duets anyday.

Forum: Textual Releases 07-19-06, 08:22 AM

Replies: 6 2 days too Early Views: 577 Posted By Pakaveli Preciate your pointer...I have put imagery... Preciate your pointer...I have put imagery in....i do make stuff basic at times.

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 04:32 PM

Replies: 6 2 days too Early Views: 577 Posted By Pakaveli theres multiples....the whole thing is... theres multiples....the whole thing is practically a metaphor...if you don't know metaphors than don't leave comments...tell me the meaning of my metaphors and then critique and lastly let me clear...

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 04:29 PM

Replies: 31 Cremation Of Souls Views: 1,215 Posted By Pakaveli That eneds it cause i always rhyme my words. That eneds it cause i always rhyme my words.

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 04:28 PM

Replies: 20 This is How my Girlfriend's Friend Got Pregnant Views: 1,364 Posted By Pakaveli I never look dpown on anyones work na mean..i... I never look dpown on anyones work na mean..i want you to drop something that will make me go Damn na eman...G/L for your writing and flow eazy i'm not a beef taker or giver ...Stay up

Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-18-06, 10:08 AM

Replies: 10 Sticky: Poll: .:PT on your Record?:. Views: 2,549 Posted By Pakaveli Yes this should happen....it'll be interesting to... Yes this should happen....it'll be interesting to see how many no shows there will be after this.

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 10:05 AM

Replies: 31 Cremation Of Souls Views: 1,215 Posted By Pakaveli RAp is a subsiduary of poetry. . . Critic if ya... RAp is a subsiduary of poetry. . . Critic if ya wanna colab, holla at silent and discuss the topic and verse line amount hen silent will tell me and we'll get it rollin'

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:51 AM

Replies: 6 2 days too Early Views: 577 Posted By Pakaveli ... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2796217&posted=1#post2796217 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2796219&posted=1#post2796219

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:50 AM

Replies: 20 This is How my Girlfriend's Friend Got Pregnant Views: 1,364 Posted By Pakaveli This wasn't great there were amusing parts in it... This wasn't great there were amusing parts in it that kept my attention for a while but as an overall piece it lacks in imagery sicamore multies and basically is at a novie stage, try delving into...

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:47 AM

Replies: 25 rapverses illest f/sick. Views: 1,395 Posted By Pakaveli This was aight, flow was good and multies were... This was aight, flow was good and multies were there, just up the imagery and vocab and it's all good..Stay up

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:46 AM

Replies: 6 2 days too Early Views: 577 Posted By Pakaveli 2 days too Early 2 Days Early The consequences of hurrying a creation The infested inhabitants lurched at tit bits of informal information The pedantic placation sued who grew the strew called population The...

Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:45 AM

Replies: 31 Cremation Of Souls Views: 1,215 Posted By Pakaveli WEll thansk for the constructive criticsm. WEll thansk for the constructive criticsm.

Forum: Textual Releases 07-17-06, 05:27 PM

Replies: 31 Cremation Of Souls Views: 1,215 Posted By Pakaveli See by putting an S at then end of collidies you... See by putting an S at then end of collidies you sentence won't make sense yet if you take it awya your rhymescheme would be diminished. Basicall,y next time you give an example do it right.

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