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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-28-05, 03:31 AM
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Replies: 608
Views: 10,691
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Whyte Ave.
it'd be cool if we got new poetry battles...
like...
it'd be cool if we got new poetry battles... like shit |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-19-05, 10:21 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 787
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
vote/ Dizee
Reasoning: It was a poem, with lots...
vote/ Dizee Reasoning: It was a poem, with lots of imagery which is one of the two main aspects of poetry (other being emotion), and the many different forms you used together worked great in your... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-19-05, 10:13 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 586
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
vote/ Lyrical
Reasoning: Both poems were...
vote/ Lyrical Reasoning: Both poems were good...Lyrical had strong emotion and imagery in his and I liked the base idea of the poem, it was really cool, just an all round nice drop. Os1ris, I think... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-19-05, 10:04 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 996
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Whyte Ave.
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-18-05, 04:17 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 996
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
Stalked, Sighted, Scoped
Eye twitching, nerves...
Stalked, Sighted, Scoped Eye twitching, nerves and excitement Begin to build Flick of the finger Unleashes a heard of lead Towards the unsuspecting victim Painful Piercing Pressure Skin Succumbs As... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-14-05, 05:37 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 996
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Whyte Ave.
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-11-05, 04:53 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 999
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
sorry guys for not showing...had a bunch of shit...
sorry guys for not showing...had a bunch of shit come up on friday nice drop |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-07-05, 07:41 PM
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Replies: 608
Views: 10,691
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
CALI I'm 3-1 in the Poetry league
and we still...
CALI I'm 3-1 in the Poetry league and we still need a topic |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-07-05, 03:58 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 999
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Whyte Ave.
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-03-05, 06:37 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 187
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
Confessions of a Dieing Athiest
An eerily calm winter night, Stars light up the dance floor Ice slips into dance, Looking for a partner Tires begin to roll in, Trying to slide past the dance Grabbed, No way to let go Twirled,... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-03-05, 05:09 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 873
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
i dont like how you use a piece you wrote...but...
i dont like how you use a piece you wrote...but whatever... An eerily calm winter night, Stars light up the dance floor Ice slips into dance, Looking for a partner Tires begin to roll in, Trying to... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
06-01-05, 05:52 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 873
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Whyte Ave.
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-30-05, 04:05 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 528
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
I'm just going to assume Bond isn't showing...
I'm just going to assume Bond isn't showing up... vote/Khatharis Stanza: Nice drop here, had some good emotion to it and a storyline that didn't sway, however its an overused concept. I did like... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-27-05, 11:46 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 654
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Whyte Ave.
not the greatest...
Glimmering Hope
Defeated...
not the greatest... Glimmering Hope Defeated and Drown An army has fallen Territory once owned Has been claimed The mist shrouds the future |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-26-05, 07:12 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,025
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Whyte Ave.
You don't hit rock bottom until your 6 feet...
You don't hit rock bottom until your 6 feet under -me |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-23-05, 05:46 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 654
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
check check check it out...what what whats it all...
check check check it out...what what whats it all about I dunno |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-23-05, 03:08 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,975
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
^^ no hate...just fact
I know you can write...
^^ no hate...just fact I know you can write better topicals then the one you did |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-22-05, 10:09 PM
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Replies: 608
Views: 10,691
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
well i knew most people wouldn't drop...
and no...
well i knew most people wouldn't drop... and no one is voting...garbage |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-22-05, 08:56 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 560
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Whyte Ave.
vote/Judicial
Both verses were pretty weak, but...
vote/Judicial Both verses were pretty weak, but Judicial had more detail and imagery and flow in his verse. Concept goes to MC Iggy, but just couldn't put it all together, if you added more you... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-22-05, 08:50 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 560
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Whyte Ave.
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-22-05, 08:50 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 802
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Whyte Ave.
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-22-05, 08:49 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,975
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Whyte Ave.
vote/Kein Witz
Neon: A bright Light
When born,...
vote/Kein Witz Neon: A bright Light When born, the light you see is incredibly bright compared to what you are used too in the womb...Witz had such great detail and imagery of the whole birth and... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-22-05, 08:36 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 670
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Whyte Ave.
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-20-05, 04:24 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 777
Posted By
Whyte Ave.
My Dream
The Sun beams down upon my face Sweat boils on my forehead One last sip of fluid And I again move on The path has turned rough Skin peels back on my feet Blood drips, leaving my mark Glance... |
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Forum: Higher Thinking
05-16-05, 09:32 PM
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Replies: 608
Views: 10,691
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