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Forum: Textual Releases 07-29-07, 06:15 PM |
Replies: 11
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 04:31 PM |
Replies: 3
Views: 597
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 04:18 PM |
Replies: 3
Views: 597
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links go...
links go here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=3175991&posted=1#post3175991 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243131 |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 04:17 PM |
Replies: 3
Views: 597
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JULY-shittiest month of the year
JULY----the symbol of americas freedom- americas pride JULY--- the time that his soul withered and died for he is going to prison, locked up in one of those blocks faceless people lookin out wishin... |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 04:06 PM |
Replies: 10
Views: 618
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i liked it mann good piece. nice flow and good...
i liked it mann good piece. nice flow and good word choice. keep it up man lookin forward to sum more pices frm u |
Forum: Rhetorical Insights 07-18-07, 02:18 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 19,740
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oh shyt i thought this was supposed to be about...
oh shyt i thought this was supposed to be about july haha oops |
Forum: Rhetorical Insights 07-18-07, 01:45 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 19,740
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JULY, the symbol of americas freedom- americas...
JULY, the symbol of americas freedom- americas pride JUly the time that my soul withers and died for i am going to prison, locked up in one of those blocks faceless people lookin out wishin for that... |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 01:30 PM |
Replies: 5
Views: 449
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-17-07, 03:32 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 749
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damm dis shyt right hurr is fire man, dope...
damm dis shyt right hurr is fire man, dope wordplay dope everything basically, disone of my favorits now!! 9.7/10 lol i dont give ten outta ten lol |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-13-07, 05:50 PM |
Replies: 8
Views: 1,007
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-13-07, 11:48 AM |
Replies: 8
Views: 1,007
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-12-07, 11:57 PM |
Replies: 8
Views: 1,007
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uppin for feed i kno its not wat ur useed to but...
uppin for feed i kno its not wat ur useed to but peep dis peepz |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-12-07, 11:16 PM |
Replies: 8
Views: 1,007
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it was suppose to be like DEF JAM POETRY i guess...
it was suppose to be like DEF JAM POETRY i guess your not familiar with it watever tho different styles homy |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-12-07, 10:25 PM |
Replies: 8
Views: 1,007
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did it in like couple of minutes so its not...
did it in like couple of minutes so its not thought out just free versing links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243132... |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-12-07, 10:23 PM |
Replies: 8
Views: 1,007
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had to get shyt off my chest
i dont give a fuk here it is (the criticizing part isnt abot this piece its about life alotogether) by the way this is supposed to be like DEF JAM so if ur not familiar with it ur not gunna get the... |
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 07-07-07, 12:16 AM |
Replies: 5
Views: 1,232
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deluzional
dats pretty good man. but if u want sum feedbak u...
dats pretty good man. but if u want sum feedbak u gotta drop two links. how about commenting on mine? angel of mine by deluzional and ill be sure to return the favor. peace |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-06-07, 06:10 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 873
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures 07-06-07, 12:45 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 1,107
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wow yall cant even leave any feed?? forget yall....
wow yall cant even leave any feed?? forget yall. come on mangs |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-05-07, 02:45 AM |
Replies: 5
Views: 469
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deluzional
damm nice one mangg. sum parts are kinda idk, but...
damm nice one mangg. sum parts are kinda idk, but mostly it was really good. you had really nice wordplay i think. im feelin dis alot man 7/10. keep writing homboi. youl be really good. |
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 07-04-07, 03:13 PM |
Replies: 3
Views: 822
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this was good mang. i liked your way of writin...
this was good mang. i liked your way of writin this. favorite line-all i get is the darkness of clouds for no Sun will shine in our fate thats deep mang... if u get the chance peep mine n give me... |
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 07-04-07, 10:59 AM |
Replies: 7
Views: 1,107
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-03-07, 10:15 PM |
Replies: 23
Views: 920
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i can feel dis, you did good mang. u coulda used...
i can feel dis, you did good mang. u coulda used more vocab but its a flow so its pretty good. keep it up mang |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-03-07, 09:51 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 873
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i tried to make the rhyme scheme kinda...
i tried to make the rhyme scheme kinda complicated at first den finished off with another scheme to symbolizes how simple the solution is but yeh i dont know if thats a really good idea.... lol uppin... |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-03-07, 09:47 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 873
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-02-07, 04:19 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 873
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