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Forum: Textual Releases 07-29-07, 06:15 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 534
Posted By deluzional
thanx for all da feeds cuhzes appreciate it

thanx for all da feeds cuhzes appreciate it
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 04:31 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 336
Posted By deluzional
comments go there l leave sum peeps ...

comments go there
l leave sum peeps
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 04:18 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 336
Posted By deluzional
links go...

links go here

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=3175991&posted=1#post3175991

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243131
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 04:17 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 336
Posted By deluzional
JULY-shittiest month of the year

JULY----the symbol of americas freedom- americas pride
JULY--- the time that his soul withered and died
for he is going to prison, locked up in one of those blocks
faceless people lookin out wishin...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 04:06 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 412
Posted By deluzional
i liked it mann good piece. nice flow and good...

i liked it mann good piece. nice flow and good word choice. keep it up man lookin forward to sum more pices frm u
Forum: Rhetorical Insights 07-18-07, 02:18 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 8,958
Posted By deluzional
oh shyt i thought this was supposed to be about...

oh shyt i thought this was supposed to be about july
haha
oops
Forum: Rhetorical Insights 07-18-07, 01:45 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 8,958
Posted By deluzional
JULY, the symbol of americas freedom- americas...

JULY, the symbol of americas freedom- americas pride
JUly the time that my soul withers and died
for i am going to prison, locked up in one of those blocks
faceless people lookin out wishin for that...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-07, 01:30 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 291
Posted By deluzional
wtf hella funny shyt hahah

wtf hella funny shyt
hahah
Forum: Textual Releases 07-17-07, 03:32 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 578
Posted By deluzional
damm dis shyt right hurr is fire man, dope...

damm dis shyt right hurr is fire man, dope wordplay dope everything basically, disone of my favorits now!!
9.7/10
lol i dont give ten outta ten lol
Forum: Textual Releases 07-13-07, 05:50 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 605
Posted By deluzional
still uppin peepz

still uppin peepz
Forum: Textual Releases 07-13-07, 11:48 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 605
Posted By deluzional
uppin for sum feed..

uppin for sum feed..
Forum: Textual Releases 07-12-07, 11:57 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 605
Posted By deluzional
uppin for feed i kno its not wat ur useed to but...

uppin for feed i kno its not wat ur useed to but peep dis peepz
Forum: Textual Releases 07-12-07, 11:16 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 605
Posted By deluzional
it was suppose to be like DEF JAM POETRY i guess...

it was suppose to be like DEF JAM POETRY i guess your not familiar with it watever tho
different styles homy
Forum: Textual Releases 07-12-07, 10:25 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 605
Posted By deluzional
did it in like couple of minutes so its not...

did it in like couple of minutes so its not thought out just free versing
links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243132...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-12-07, 10:23 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 605
Posted By deluzional
had to get shyt off my chest

i dont give a fuk
here it is
(the criticizing part isnt abot this piece its about life alotogether)
by the way this is supposed to be like DEF JAM so if ur not familiar with it ur not gunna get the...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 07-07-07, 12:16 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 667
Posted By deluzional
dats pretty good man. but if u want sum feedbak u...

dats pretty good man. but if u want sum feedbak u gotta drop two links. how about commenting on mine? angel of mine by deluzional and ill be sure to return the favor. peace
Forum: Textual Releases 07-06-07, 06:10 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 534
Posted By deluzional
dang yall dont like leavin feedbak do yall

dang yall dont like leavin feedbak do yall
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 07-06-07, 12:45 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 736
Posted By deluzional
wow yall cant even leave any feed?? forget yall....

wow yall cant even leave any feed?? forget yall. come on mangs
Forum: Textual Releases 07-05-07, 02:45 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 305
Posted By deluzional
damm nice one mangg. sum parts are kinda idk, but...

damm nice one mangg. sum parts are kinda idk, but mostly it was really good. you had really nice wordplay i think. im feelin dis alot man 7/10. keep writing homboi. youl be really good.
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 07-04-07, 03:13 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 589
Posted By deluzional
this was good mang. i liked your way of writin...

this was good mang. i liked your way of writin this. favorite line-all i get is the darkness of clouds
for no Sun will shine in our fate
thats deep mang...
if u get the chance peep mine n give me...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 07-04-07, 10:59 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 736
Posted By deluzional
look at dis mangs, and leve sum feed peeps.

look at dis mangs, and leve sum feed peeps.
Forum: Textual Releases 07-03-07, 10:15 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 698
Posted By deluzional
i can feel dis, you did good mang. u coulda used...

i can feel dis, you did good mang. u coulda used more vocab but its a flow so its pretty good. keep it up mang
Forum: Textual Releases 07-03-07, 09:51 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 534
Posted By deluzional
i tried to make the rhyme scheme kinda...

i tried to make the rhyme scheme kinda complicated at first den finished off with another scheme to symbolizes how simple the solution is but yeh i dont know if thats a really good idea.... lol uppin...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-03-07, 09:47 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 534
Posted By deluzional
thankz peeps askin for more feed mangs

thankz peeps askin for more feed mangs
Forum: Textual Releases 07-02-07, 04:19 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 534
Posted By deluzional
uppin for sum feed

uppin for sum feed
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