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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
05-23-04, 12:57 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 158
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shawty"B"
The Right WordI've been doin' this for years now And everytime Ive put my all into it somehow If you were to see all my rhymes You would go through so many times Times of life...., so many my own youd be amazed... |
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
02-15-04, 10:39 AM
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Replies: 45
Views: 895
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shawty"B"
<<~~~~~~~ im corupted but then i read ace's...
<<~~~~~~~ im corupted but then i read ace's reply then i found tha dolphins!! |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-15-04, 10:07 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 525
Posted By
shawty"B"
hey this is a gud poem..... the topic is a reel...
hey this is a gud poem..... the topic is a reel one. the imagery was reel gud. the word wernt expressed in a complete matter but it was there an i i get tha jest of it ........fav part......... But... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-15-04, 09:52 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 236
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shawty"B"
hey this was a great peice. the words were so...
hey this was a great peice. the words were so well chosen. the topic was a reely gud 1 that alot of people choose but i havnt seen any as gud as this, the vocab was gud, and the imagery... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-15-04, 09:31 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 293
Posted By
shawty"B"
this was a reel gud story but i cudnt find tha...
this was a reel gud story but i cudnt find tha poem in it at all, although the imagery was gud and the vocab was gud 2........ i think that this cud b made in2 a poem but it wud take sum wurk cuz nun... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-15-04, 09:21 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 192
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shawty"B"
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
02-13-04, 11:16 PM
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Replies: 69
Views: 897
Posted By
shawty"B"
i 4got
drumline
bruce almighty
save the last...
i 4got drumline bruce almighty save the last dance league of extrodinary gentalmen happy gilmore black hawk down willy wonka and the chocolate factory |
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
02-13-04, 10:59 PM
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Replies: 69
Views: 897
Posted By
shawty"B"
finding nemo
8 mile
coyote ugly
the fast and the...
finding nemo 8 mile coyote ugly the fast and the furious bringin down the house triple X |
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
02-13-04, 10:16 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 427
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shawty"B"
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-13-04, 09:31 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 192
Posted By
shawty"B"
me amabu
when i see you face there is no other place now i can be showered with grace some people say that your just a dream my love is pure evidence of things unseen for you my love is infanant for you i'll... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-12-04, 05:54 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 469
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shawty"B"
tha topic is gud, the imagery is mild and theres...
tha topic is gud, the imagery is mild and theres not alotta feelin here, but it however was a gud read .......fav part...... A white-man's tale over a blackman's kingdom decay Tailored mind filled... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-12-04, 05:23 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 171
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shawty"B"
perfect imagery!!!!!!!!!!! nice vocab, gud...
perfect imagery!!!!!!!!!!! nice vocab, gud structure ..........fav part........... Sunset... The Sun collides with the horizon.. Releasing a magnificent array of beams Such a sight is... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-12-04, 05:11 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 235
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shawty"B"
hehehe.........i liked this 1..... specially the...
hehehe.........i liked this 1..... specially the endin..... it kinda ties in with the month too.... it gives off good imagery of what the world was like bout 50 years ago ..............fav... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-12-04, 04:28 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 187
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shawty"B"
the imagery in this poem was absolutely amazing!!...
the imagery in this poem was absolutely amazing!! i liked the way the poem was expressed also!! like fanta zee sed it came at the exact rite tyme.... ..........fav parts............... The last... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-12-04, 04:15 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 150
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shawty"B"
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-11-04, 06:36 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 211
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shawty"B"
yo this is reely gud, ive actually put alotta...
yo this is reely gud, ive actually put alotta thought into this topic in perticular, wat if the entire world is jusst imaginary, and its all there for you, like some one else is ona different planet... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-11-04, 06:27 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 176
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shawty"B"
hey, this 1 makes alotta sense iff u read can u...
hey, this 1 makes alotta sense iff u read can u tell me 1st. i kno how heart breakin this is, if i get a chance ill send u a private message mayb i can help u understand sumn bout it if u want me... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-11-04, 06:12 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 237
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shawty"B"
ok since i can understnd this entierly i like...
ok since i can understnd this entierly i like this cuz it a point that ive thought about alot thats the only reason im still living this is a gud topic 2 write about........sry bout ur brutha, hope... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-11-04, 05:59 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 308
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shawty"B"
hey yo this pretty gud, its got gud...
hey yo this pretty gud, its got gud imagery....... keep droppin ..........fav part......... Let your life be ran by a man. Who don't even respect you enough to give you his hand. Damn what should... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-11-04, 05:49 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 189
Posted By
shawty"B"
yo this was deep!!! i lyk this 1 a...
yo this was deep!!! i lyk this 1 a lot!!!!!! ..........fav part............ let my words become his eyes to the point he tilts his eyebrows showing surprise and puts his face in his hands and... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-11-04, 05:34 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 150
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shawty"B"
Where I GoOn a lake in the middle of the sea thats where i go so no one can find me on a peice of paper on a pad of pages i share with myself the many stages the stages that the scenes are set some stages... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-11-04, 05:24 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 174
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shawty"B"
yo this is a reel gud poem it reely duz show that...
yo this is a reel gud poem it reely duz show that u love her.... keep droppin .............fav part.............. I'll never get tired of staring into your eyes I'll never be to busy to tend to... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-08-04, 04:45 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 301
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shawty"B"
this is a gud peice...you kud add a lil bit more...
this is a gud peice...you kud add a lil bit more to it tho bcuz there waz very little imagery in this ............fav part............ Lost in the abyss missing familiar feelings I thought I had... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-07-04, 04:05 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 192
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shawty"B"
i think this is a gud poem but it is also a huge...
i think this is a gud poem but it is also a huge political discussion that some people cud fight about, it also brings many things to the atention of people who don't know it. |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-07-04, 04:01 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 216
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shawty"B"
shooting magnolias- thats a nice peice, gud...
shooting magnolias- thats a nice peice, gud imagery and it kep me interseted distant memories- this 1 has alotta imagery and sounds reel gud out loud ........fav part......... Ink seeps from my... |
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