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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
07-03-05, 08:12 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 479
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Prolific
Good piece, enjoyed your vocab and use of...
Good piece, enjoyed your vocab and use of words...you played well into the metaphor...flow was on point and you established it in the first few lines 9/10 |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
07-03-05, 06:57 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 389
Posted By
Prolific
Drink With The Devil
DRINK WITH THE DEVIL “Let’s make a deal,” he told me “I know ya pockets hurt.” But for the work he could conceal the lonely Put a few bills on me, but I know most of the real be phony He... |
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Forum: Audio Bitch Slapped
06-27-05, 12:03 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 174
Posted By
Prolific
I been looking for a battle to get into...whats...
I been looking for a battle to get into...whats ya rules...set it up |
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Forum: Graphical Requests
06-26-05, 08:32 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 111
Posted By
Prolific
MIXTAPE COVER...Can You Do It?
My cousin just dropped a few hot tracks for his mixtape this summer and we were working on the cover for it. I just took some pics with my cam phone that are pretty decent but just ordinary. I was... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-25-05, 02:37 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 407
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Prolific
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Forum: Audio Talk
06-24-05, 09:15 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 275
Posted By
Prolific
Punchlines is me kid...peep the sc...
Punchlines is me kid...peep the sc page http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/prolificdapoet_music.htm |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-24-05, 04:16 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 233
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Prolific
Really right now I feel speechless...I don't know...
Really right now I feel speechless...I don't know the words to say that will do this poem justice. Any compliment I could come up with now would be an understatement. It was beautiful, the imagery,... |
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Forum: Bitch Slapped
06-24-05, 04:06 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 223
Posted By
Prolific
Y not accept my challenge Sabotage? I know I...
Y not accept my challenge Sabotage? I know I don't have the 5 wins but I'm willing to be I'd be just as good as anybody else if not better. I dropped a verse I did for a topical tournament in the... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-24-05, 04:01 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 407
Posted By
Prolific
The Gauntlet
THE GAUNTLET I been abandoned by the hordes, stranded by shores Branded by the wars, just a man and his sword Dripping the blood of a victim, but no remorse in me It wasn’t my choice to be…I too... |
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Forum: Bitch Slapped
06-23-05, 11:22 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 223
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Prolific
LOL ay thats funny, how do you guys get to own...
LOL ay thats funny, how do you guys get to own and sell other ppl? |
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Forum: Bitch Slapped
06-23-05, 10:32 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 223
Posted By
Prolific
I'll do a topical wit u...i just joined this site...
I'll do a topical wit u...i just joined this site a couple days ago so I don't have any wins but I got alot of text experience, including topicals. I been in tournaments for it and all that good... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-23-05, 08:53 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 257
Posted By
Prolific
^^^ You didn't have to write me instructions ma,...
^^^ You didn't have to write me instructions ma, I was already planning to do all that LOL J/P No seriously, this a good piece. It was written to be very sensual, and thats the impression it gives.... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-23-05, 08:12 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 222
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Prolific
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-23-05, 08:09 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 215
Posted By
Prolific
I know I hate when they look but no comment....
I know I hate when they look but no comment. Having like 30 views and 2 comments is annoying, say something dammit, anything(related to the poem of course) LOL ^^^let me start by saying, those few... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-23-05, 07:59 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 753
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Prolific
Interesting...thats a creative way to present a...
Interesting...thats a creative way to present a piece. Your choice of words was brilliant and painted a clear image in my head, especially in the first stanza "Idealism". Its almost not just a poem... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-23-05, 07:54 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 188
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Prolific
I'm feelin it. Its real true to heart. Structure...
I'm feelin it. Its real true to heart. Structure or not it was a nice drop. Your ending kinda fell off for me, the rest of the piece made me feel like it was leading to something more, not just what... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-23-05, 07:47 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 196
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Prolific
That was dope, I feel the same way about writing....
That was dope, I feel the same way about writing. You put yours and other poets thoughts into words in a way we all can understand, and hopefully relate to. |
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Forum: New Release Songs
06-22-05, 11:12 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 323
Posted By
Prolific
I was listening to this earlier but I had to run...
I was listening to this earlier but I had to run out before I could reply. I'm feelin that beat...first guy has a smooth laid back flow, sounds good over this instrumental...flow and rhyme scheme is... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-22-05, 10:59 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 157
Posted By
Prolific
I like that, it gives you the vivid image of a...
I like that, it gives you the vivid image of a love story you want to see happen. Maybe you should do a part 2 where he gets closer to finding his mystery poet. I'd like to see thier story play out. |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-22-05, 10:56 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 222
Posted By
Prolific
It may seem all over the place because I wrote...
It may seem all over the place because I wrote that piece for a poetry tournament and the topic was my beliefs, so instead of just being real remedial and simple by saying I believe this each line, I... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-22-05, 05:58 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 222
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Prolific
Beliefs
BELIEFS When they say it gets better, wait for that promise to come Sometimes you’ll be waiting a while That just means every handshake and a smile isn’t a honest one Blight is the night’s... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-22-05, 05:50 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 231
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Prolific
Yea I'm feelin that piece, you put the emotion...
Yea I'm feelin that piece, you put the emotion into that and it paid off. The ending was great. Well written piece. |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
06-22-05, 05:47 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 233
Posted By
Prolific
I thought it was okay, nothing really struck me...
I thought it was okay, nothing really struck me as spectacular. You used alot of simple wordplay and metaphors. It could've been worded better, maybe then you're better lines would've stuck out more.... |
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Forum: New Release Songs
06-22-05, 04:21 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 327
Posted By
Prolific
ok thanks, i will take all of this into account...
ok thanks, i will take all of this into account the next time i record and see if ppl begin to notice the difference. The mic is from radio shack but its not the silver one, its that $20 mic. |
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Forum: New Release Songs
06-22-05, 12:34 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 327
Posted By
Prolific
If he ever decides to post I'll link you to his...
If he ever decides to post I'll link you to his page |
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