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Forum: Textual Releases 08-06-04, 03:30 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 210
Posted By pappa glock
ok well here other than wordplay hows the story...

ok well here other than wordplay hows the story line
Forum: Textual Releases 07-26-04, 12:05 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 210
Posted By pappa glock
thanks, ill have to work on that

thanks, ill have to work on that
Forum: Textual Releases 07-24-04, 04:27 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 210
Posted By pappa glock
uppin for feedback

uppin for feedback
Forum: Textual Releases 07-24-04, 04:26 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 176
Posted By pappa glock
in the beginning, especially line 2 is stretched,...

in the beginning, especially line 2 is stretched, but other than that i like it

i dunno what id give it, mabe a 7.5 out of 10 or better
Forum: Textual Releases 07-23-04, 12:31 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 210
Posted By pappa glock
anyone willing to go into detail, id really like...

anyone willing to go into detail, id really like to know what i need to improve on
Forum: Textual Releases 07-21-04, 04:29 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 210
Posted By pappa glock
uppin for more comments

uppin for more comments
Forum: Textual Releases 07-20-04, 08:46 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 210
Posted By pappa glock
uppin for comments

uppin for comments
Forum: Textual Releases 07-20-04, 05:07 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,167
Posted By pappa glock
ok i liked everything on here, except one...

ok i liked everything on here, except one thing
its not just a problem with you, but a lot of people who rite without a beat or just rite down on paper, is that your lines are stretched, urs...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-20-04, 04:59 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 207
Posted By pappa glock
wasnt feelin it, ur punches werent all that...

wasnt feelin it, ur punches werent all that great, and ur rhyming words were too simple
Forum: Textual Releases 07-20-04, 04:35 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 210
Posted By pappa glock
MY story

i hang on to this peice, cuz its a part of me
i shoot blindly cuz i feel im drowning in a sea
of a pool of my own blood i can hardly breathe
i try so hard but its like a useless seige
but for me...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-19-04, 12:03 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 266
Posted By pappa glock
sickest shit

Im sick of people worryin about what you say
when eminems shit is overplayed
and luda cant get no better today
and juve still sellin multiple bricks a day
and still no one feels my shit anyway
it...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-04, 11:42 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 573
Posted By pappa glock
hey ive got 1 reply on this shit and i myself am...

hey ive got 1 reply on this shit and i myself am feelin it, and usually hate my own shit
tell me how it is
Forum: Textual Releases 07-17-04, 04:21 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 573
Posted By pappa glock
hey can anyone else help me out on this one?

hey can anyone else help me out on this one?
Forum: Textual Releases 07-17-04, 04:17 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 217
Posted By pappa glock
ok ok its cool, i dotn mind just caught me off...

ok ok its cool, i dotn mind just caught me off guard
Forum: Textual Releases 07-16-04, 10:41 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 217
Posted By pappa glock
what the hell was that supposed to be?

what the hell was that supposed to be?
Forum: Textual Releases 07-16-04, 01:26 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 217
Posted By pappa glock
throw it up

everybody on the floor throw your cris up(cris up)
throw your cris up
throw your cris up
everybody on the block throw your dro up(dro)
throw your dro up
throw your dro up
everybody in this bitch...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-15-04, 07:04 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 573
Posted By pappa glock
can i get some input on this itd be much...

can i get some input on this itd be much appreciated
Forum: Textual Releases 07-14-04, 05:01 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 573
Posted By pappa glock
i think this is my best rhyme yet so tell me how...

i think this is my best rhyme yet so tell me how it is, i can always improve if you tell me how
Forum: Textual Releases 07-14-04, 01:50 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 573
Posted By pappa glock
just my words of wisdom

another day on these streets, gotta sell these bricks
gotta stay to take one last breath but the airs too thick
i scream louder than i ever could on a mic
but made no progress, like a guy with a...
Forum: Textual Releases 07-14-04, 12:53 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 232
Posted By pappa glock
ok thats cool that works anymore help for me

ok thats cool that works anymore help for me
Forum: Textual Releases 07-13-04, 10:24 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 232
Posted By pappa glock
id really like another reply on this , tell me...

id really like another reply on this , tell me what needs to be fixed
Forum: Textual Releases 07-13-04, 01:49 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 232
Posted By pappa glock
just a rhyme

fuck rappin and rymin, im the biggest murderer
cant stop me, im like a fuckin power surger
drop better rhymes than dre on the chronic
knock you on your ass quicker than gin and tonic
dont put up ur...
Forum: Textual Releases 06-29-04, 01:22 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 161
Posted By pappa glock
bump help me how is my shit

bump help me how is my shit
Forum: Front Lines Battles 06-24-04, 09:10 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,134
Posted By pappa glock
and to my previous message i would but i cant...

and to my previous message i would but i cant vote yet so go on and use that as a tip
Forum: Front Lines Battles 06-24-04, 09:08 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,134
Posted By pappa glock
i gotta say willnova will did not have the...

i gotta say willnova
will did not have the greatest of punchlines all the time, but i felt some of them.
his structure was better adn it flowed better
wonders was still a decent verse, i liked a few...
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