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Forum: Closed Battles 03-25-09, 12:39 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 725
Posted By Graphik
Jon- Eh, decent story. Nothing creative on the...

Jon- Eh, decent story. Nothing creative on the topic. Predictable. Basic rhymes, thought it lacked in imagery but you set the scenes and it stayed on topic.

Bob- Diff. approach, thought you tried...
Forum: Closed Battles 03-25-09, 12:30 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,097
Posted By Graphik
Topic Use- Tie Imagery- Alpha Emotion-...

Topic Use- Tie
Imagery- Alpha
Emotion- Alpha
Readability- Tie
Complexity- Tie
Literary Elements- Alpha
Enjoyment- Alpha

Vote- Alpha.
Forum: Textual Releases 03-24-09, 10:06 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,491
Posted By Graphik
yeah it wasnt a bad drop. simple storyline....

yeah it wasnt a bad drop. simple storyline. nothing to complex about it. emotion was felt though. i wont critique it too much, just try to amp up ya imagery a bit.
Forum: Textual Releases 03-19-09, 10:41 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 600
Posted By Graphik
Fix the structure, hate that paragraph writing....

Fix the structure, hate that paragraph writing. Flows could use some work, course u prolly have it suited for audio. Lyrically its okay, pretty str8 forward. do you man.
Forum: Graphical Assistance 03-19-09, 12:15 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 73,568
Posted By Graphik
www.blacksungfx.com is a great site for beginners...

www.blacksungfx.com is a great site for beginners to experts.
Forum: Textual Releases 03-19-09, 12:05 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 871
Posted By Graphik
....A Sages Alchemy...

See he who marches alone thru marshes unknown..
Practicing magic of the darkest hardest part of any art to be honed..
The alchemist scars earths decor with boiling tar that he owns..
Bottled close to...
Forum: Textual Releases 03-19-09, 12:04 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,308
Posted By Graphik
not bad. i liked the hook. nice topic. stayed...

not bad. i liked the hook. nice topic. stayed pretty consistent throughout. Vocab use was decent. Imagery was presented nicely, though could be more vivid. Still, an interesting read to say the least.
Forum: Textual Releases 03-18-09, 11:59 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 879
Posted By Graphik
eh. its decent. Mom shit got old. some forced...

eh. its decent. Mom shit got old. some forced lines. similies and metaphors werent hittin as hard as they could have, work on ya wording.
Forum: Graphic Arts 03-18-09, 11:47 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,950
Posted By Graphik
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Forum: Graphic Arts 03-18-09, 11:47 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,950
Posted By Graphik
Forum: Graphic Arts 03-18-09, 11:44 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,569
Posted By Graphik
pic quality is bad. i never did like working with...

pic quality is bad. i never did like working with peoples personal photos for that reason. the overall look of the tag isnt all that great, but your hearts in the right place.
Forum: Graphic Arts 03-18-09, 11:41 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 5,614
Posted By Graphik
as i stated on previous site. blending is a lil...

as i stated on previous site. blending is a lil harsh, lighting could use improvement. brush work takes over focal in some..so just some tips to work on. other then that. not bad work.
Forum: Graphic Arts 03-18-09, 11:37 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,274
Posted By Graphik
Simple and effective. real nice. i like it.

Simple and effective. real nice. i like it.
Forum: Introduce Yourself 03-18-09, 11:34 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 3,000
Posted By Graphik
Graphik here

Referred by EazyBoy...im his graphic designer. Orderly Disruptive is the crew! get to know it. Im from VA and 22. site looks promising.
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