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Forum: Textual Releases 09-03-08, 04:36 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 802
Posted By Critic
Scanz it's good to see you still writing, you...

Scanz it's good to see you still writing, you have improved at lot since
I was last on.

my world unique, man i wish i was there.
as my finger tips glide across this keyboards stare.
this keyboards...
Forum: Textual Releases 09-03-08, 04:32 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,351
Posted By Critic
I agree with In-Vision you need to add more...

I agree with In-Vision you need to add more multis and you rhyming seemed
forced at times.. I didn't think it was a bad verse nice drop.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 10-19-07, 05:55 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 466
Posted By Critic
I have a six month old some called Ashton, I...

I have a six month old some called Ashton, I don't need anymore one will do.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 04-15-07, 06:31 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 611
Posted By Critic
It's only gay coz you're shit at it!!! and...

It's only gay coz you're shit at it!!! and besides what the fucks soccer
its clearly called football.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 03-15-07, 08:25 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 279
Posted By Critic
I saw them in concert last summer, they have some...

I saw them in concert last summer, they have some decent songs but you
need to be high to listen to them.
Forum: Textual Releases 03-14-07, 09:01 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 641
Posted By Critic
What's good scanz,.. this was a decent drop,......

What's good scanz,.. this was a decent drop,... decent flow,. alright vocab
liking the way your getting more complex with your wordplay.

Keep writing fams and stay up,.

I'm gonna drop something...
Forum: Textual Releases 03-14-07, 08:53 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 462
Posted By Critic
This was alright decent drop,... need to work on...

This was alright decent drop,... need to work on a few things, elevate you
mind.

Stay up
Forum: Textual Releases 03-14-07, 08:48 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 685
Posted By Critic
That was so bad my eye's hurt !!! you didn't have...

That was so bad my eye's hurt !!! you didn't have anything that showed a little bit of potential...

Your rhyming is weak, lines are weak and played,.. it was just boring I see why
you call...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-23-07, 01:16 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 499
Posted By Critic
It was ok,........ bit boring and played,......

It was ok,........ bit boring and played,... still writing the same way as last
year haven't evevated like I thought you would.

Flow was alright but basic,... no real vocab,.... topic too...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-23-07, 01:08 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,722
Posted By Critic
We’re all aliens and this is just one of many...

We’re all aliens and this is just one of many stations
Religion was invented to stop the population questioning creations
But fossils made it possible to see the ancients
The last of a dying breed,...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-23-07, 08:59 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 463
Posted By Critic
Look: i look at it's powdery presence on the...

Look:

i look at it's powdery presence on the table/
one line then another this shits making me unstable/
============================================
Dazed at it's powdery substance alluring from...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-23-07, 08:33 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 463
Posted By Critic
Just coz he's new to RV don't mean he's new to...

Just coz he's new to RV don't mean he's new to the game!

It was alright I guess,.... everything rhymed,... u had basic flow, basic vocab
and the subject's played.

Other then that it was ok!
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-25-07, 03:27 AM
Replies: 56
Views: 764
Posted By Critic
I have been with my wifey for 9 years and 1...

I have been with my wifey for 9 years and 1 month!!!! been married for 4 years
in July.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-24-07, 07:28 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 330
Posted By Critic
Like Tech would say money or the message!!! what...

Like Tech would say money or the message!!! what do you have^

Fuck Ja I can't stand him but let him do his thing.

1~
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-22-07, 08:09 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 533
Posted By Critic
The most popular sport in the world is ass!!!!!...

The most popular sport in the world is ass!!!!! lol OK....

Adu may have more skills then Beckham, which isn't that hard btw
considering that isn't part of his game, but you wouldn't understand...
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-22-07, 07:44 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 286
Posted By Critic
Like u said you don't find big men attractive so...

Like u said you don't find big men attractive so why should you lower your
standards to get with a fat girl!! That could turn you off women completely.

Tell em she's not your type simple as, look...
Forum: Closed Threads 01-16-07, 07:48 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 829
Posted By Critic
Yeah it's alright a bit predictable,... could...

Yeah it's alright a bit predictable,... could come a lot doper to be fair!!
now how about you go and post feed on some other open mics.

C
Forum: Bitch Slapped 01-16-07, 07:44 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 232
Posted By Critic
Why have you posted in here T!! didn't bother...

Why have you posted in here T!! didn't bother reading this to be fair sorry
post it in Open Mic.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-16-07, 07:35 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 225
Posted By Critic
~ Text Is Dead ~ R.I.P. Text

~ Text Is Dead ~

R.I.P.
Text
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-16-07, 07:25 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 371
Posted By Critic
I thought one of the reasons why the US & UK...

I thought one of the reasons why the US & UK invaded
Iraq was to stop breaches of humanity such as hanging…
but you know Bush ordered the puppets to do the dirty work.
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-15-07, 07:52 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 431
Posted By Critic
Pop Idol, not a big fan of 24, I watch all the...

Pop Idol, not a big fan of 24, I watch all the shit people and lose interest when
the comp hots up!
Forum: Textual Releases 12-29-06, 05:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 991
Posted By Critic
I want to stab my eyeballs out with a blunt...

I want to stab my eyeballs out with a blunt knife.

:(
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 12-12-06, 07:32 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 320
Posted By Critic
In London mainly the gay clubs they take GHB...

In London mainly the gay clubs they take GHB & mix it with another
durg for fun. But recently a couple of people have died due to this
so I wouldn't advise taking that shit for fun.

This is true...
Forum: Crews n' Collaborations 10-19-06, 08:58 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 479
Posted By Critic
^thats what I was thinking !!! He's 14 with his...

^thats what I was thinking !!!

He's 14 with his own cadalac, escalade with velvet intetior & 24 inch rims !!
Forum: Crews n' Collaborations 10-19-06, 07:37 AM
Replies: 488
Views: 9,332
Posted By Critic
I say yes to Cocaine ! No to Poetic ! We are...

I say yes to Cocaine ! No to Poetic !

We are inactive right now, so I guess u will join for a day and decided to leave
again sorry your just wasting your our time trying out for A.I. now.
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