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Forum: Textual Releases 02-17-04, 12:14 AM |
Replies: 8
Views: 546
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this was pretty dope, excpet it's a topic from...
this was pretty dope, excpet it's a topic from the Raven by Poe. I think you did that on purpose though, just kidna like a remake. i wish you added maybe a different twist at the end, just not like... |
Forum: Closed Battles 01-31-04, 11:18 PM |
Replies: 18
Views: 3,607
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lethargic: your beginnings were nice and i was...
lethargic: your beginnings were nice and i was really feeling some of hte wordplay, but near the end few bars i wasn't feling it was much rhode: pretty nice, but not as many peaks or hard hitting... |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 09:29 AM |
Replies: 6
Views: 337
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Abotizer
you obviously didn't read it, cuz there was like...
you obviously didn't read it, cuz there was like zero religous message |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 12:57 AM |
Replies: 6
Views: 337
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Forum: Textual Releases 01-25-04, 07:12 PM |
Replies: 6
Views: 337
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i supposed, but who ever said rhymescheme had to...
i supposed, but who ever said rhymescheme had to have internals to make it less boring? |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-25-04, 07:11 PM |
Replies: 8
Views: 250
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Abotizer
not bad, some of the mesages were a little...
not bad, some of the mesages were a little cliche'ish. overall it was pretyt good. you had some good thoughts and nice messages. the overall writer's voice and wirting was what shined the most |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-25-04, 06:04 PM |
Replies: 6
Views: 337
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Abotizer
touched by an angel
. . . I was raised as a christaian, I went to church everyday I always folded my hands and bowed my knees when I prayed My parents were strict Catholics, made me learn their ways life wasn't easy,... |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-19-04, 04:21 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 305
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the rhymescheme's a litlte different
and the...
the rhymescheme's a litlte different and the transition between me and my partner's a bit rough, but yeah |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:25 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 305
Posted By
Abotizer
yeah, seriously, just cause i'm not known on this...
yeah, seriously, just cause i'm not known on this site, you guys ain't responding.... i responded to 5 open mics just right now, so i'm gonna up this |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:24 PM |
Replies: 21
Views: 600
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Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:23 PM |
Replies: 14
Views: 277
Posted By
Abotizer
there was a lot of emotion, but you could've...
there was a lot of emotion, but you could've worked on some of your vocabulary. the flow was off at times, and i really wished you made it more detailed and gave us more examples |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:22 PM |
Replies: 9
Views: 258
Posted By
Abotizer
no , not really
the topic was cruddy and your...
no , not really the topic was cruddy and your flow was nothing like water |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:21 PM |
Replies: 4
Views: 211
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Abotizer
not bad, you had some nice iamgery
the ender was...
not bad, you had some nice iamgery the ender was alright, but you oculd've made yourself a little more clear and added a better flow |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:20 PM |
Replies: 37
Views: 781
Posted By
Abotizer
it's an alright diss
but this isn't too topical...
it's an alright diss but this isn't too topical or anything. it's alright structur'e's basic , could use a few more internals |
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 12:40 AM |
Replies: 7
Views: 305
Posted By
Abotizer
A picture in my wallet by Abotizer & NuM LuCK
I keep this picture, …In my wallet to remind me, Of this person know. So that any time, ….I get lost in the world`s shit, I can grip it & remember to Grow. This person keeps pushing, …Me closer... |
Forum: Closed Battles 01-17-04, 05:04 PM |
Replies: 69
Views: 3,956
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Forum: Topical 101 01-15-04, 10:22 PM |
Replies: 13
Views: 6,916
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Forum: Topical 101 01-15-04, 10:21 PM |
Replies: 16
Views: 4,261
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Abotizer
i was relaly feeilng aisle's verse more, the...
i was relaly feeilng aisle's verse more, the story seemed more put together and it had more of a story to it. both of them had interesting stories, but aisle five's was better v/aisle five |
Forum: Topical 101 01-15-04, 10:14 PM |
Replies: 13
Views: 3,051
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Abotizer
status,not bad, i was really feeling your iamgery...
status,not bad, i was really feeling your iamgery more than mavens. maven's seemed a little more topical while yours seemed really storytellinga nd had some deep meanings. maven most def had the... |
Forum: Topical 101 01-15-04, 10:09 PM |
Replies: 15
Views: 3,790
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peepers:
nice iamgery, you had some really nice...
peepers: nice iamgery, you had some really nice wirter's voice and topical writing. ending was just nice, had a little twist at the end, sorta walter: not bad, not as much writer's voice or as... |
Forum: Tag'd 01-14-04, 08:30 AM |
Replies: 8
Sticky: Team Names
Views: 2,503
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Forum: Tag'd 01-13-04, 08:40 AM |
Replies: 11
Views: 3,472
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Forum: Tag'd 01-08-04, 10:20 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 3,472
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Forum: Topical 101 01-06-04, 12:06 AM |
Replies: 5
Views: 3,335
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Abotizer
these times are troubling, the pain is rubbin'...
these times are troubling, the pain is rubbin' in the stress just makes me want to huddle in to my bed these thoughts in my head just destroying me, i'm full of grief everyday feels like someone's... |
Forum: Tag'd 01-04-04, 07:04 PM |
Replies: 18
Views: 6,783
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