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Forum: Textual Releases 02-01-04, 04:28 PM

Replies: 21 Writer..(For all Writers..find your name in here..and..Good-Bye) Views: 564 Posted By SinfiC I thought it was tight but the end kinda fell off... I thought it was tight but the end kinda fell off a bit. Try a different technique when your writting so it would be easier to follow. Keep it up'

Forum: Textual Releases 02-01-04, 04:25 PM

Replies: 1 A Valentine's Thought... Views: 209 Posted By SinfiC I thought your idea's were well thought up but... I thought your idea's were well thought up but you should try writting in a different format. I'm sure if you try chosin' a different topic it could bring out some tight material. Keep writin'

Forum: Closed 01-23-04, 12:24 AM

Replies: 138 Alphabet Cypher Views: 5,756 Posted By SinfiC Origionality you lack, so much time you've... Origionality you lack, so much time you've wasted// Preparing to speak, more feeble-minded, gay shit// Quit now, you can't grasp these implacable rhymes// Realisticly weak, sending shivers down your...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-23-04, 12:11 AM

Replies: 4 Wackness(keystyle, platnumberg battle) Views: 222 Posted By SinfiC Wackness(keystyle, platnumberg battle) It's funny to see how much time you've wasted// Talkin' feeble-minded, inadequate gay shit// Can’t seem to grasp these implacable rhymes// Lyric’s get under your skin ‘ n’ send shivers down...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-22-04, 11:56 PM

Replies: 5 Disruptive Mind Views: 203 Posted By SinfiC I thought this was a really good piece man, I'd... I thought this was a really good piece man, I'd like to hear audio see what it sounds like. The only thing I would suggest is breaking up the lines more so it would be easier to read. usually written...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-22-04, 11:53 PM

Replies: 3 Death because Of You [Feat. Yaz] Views: 260 Posted By SinfiC I liked your ideas but the end could have... I liked your ideas but the end could have consisted more thought. The structure and scheme was nice, keep workin on that. Id like ta read sum more, maby on a different topic next time.

Forum: Textual Releases 01-22-04, 11:50 PM

Replies: 5 I really mean it.. Views: 151 Posted By SinfiC Yo, I liked this one. The structure was good, and... Yo, I liked this one. The structure was good, and your I like your use of words. I could really see where you were commin' from when I read this. Somthing other people would relate ta too. Anyways...

Forum: Hip-Hop Talk Archives 01-15-04, 12:07 AM

Replies: 2 New Group: The Knightz Views: 150 Posted By SinfiC New Group: The Knightz I've been talking to some music contacts and wanted let you guys know of a new group commin' up. Their album is gonna drop this summer and their style, unique. If you get a chance I suggest checkin'...

Forum: Hip-Hop Talk Archives 01-14-04, 11:57 PM

Replies: 43 Worse lines from all time Views: 612 Posted By SinfiC I do agree with the square dance line by Em' and... I do agree with the square dance line by Em' and most of the lines people come out with now are garbage. I'm tired of hearing the same words over and over, and the same concept's I didn't see any...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-11-04, 12:37 PM

Replies: 6 A Silent Scream Views: 299 Posted By SinfiC I really liked this piece for what it was, I... I really liked this piece for what it was, I wasn't sure what point was trying to be made but the flow and structure was on point. It didn't really sound like a flow tho, it sounded more like a poem...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-11-04, 12:26 PM

Replies: 6 Another freestyle (FeedBack please) Views: 139 Posted By SinfiC your rhyme sheme was tight but you might want to... your rhyme sheme was tight but you might want to try making your lines longer, I don't really like the fact your talkin' bout shootin' and shit, we've heard it all before. Some of your lines didn't...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-11-04, 02:45 AM

Replies: 7 My Lucy in tha Sky Views: 152 Posted By SinfiC This was tight, much better than alot that I have... This was tight, much better than alot that I have read on here, I like the way you discribe what you see and what you don't see...There should def, be more readers for this piece..Structure was good,...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-11-04, 02:39 AM

Replies: 3 Life Conquest (deep/thought process) Views: 174 Posted By SinfiC Life Conquest (deep/thought process) I’m on a life conquest// Trying to do my best, to overcome the stress// Musically I have been blessed// Lacking encouragement from everyone I know// Gaining the strength to succeed and...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-11-04, 01:40 AM

Replies: 4 Lyrical Villains Views: 151 Posted By SinfiC I thought this flow was tight, your structure,... I thought this flow was tight, your structure, use of words brought it all together, definatly a good read, like wormz said u might want to try another topic but other than that I thought it was...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-11-04, 01:26 AM

Replies: 6 Keystyle (hot) Views: 146 Posted By SinfiC The rhyme scheme was nice but you could have done... The rhyme scheme was nice but you could have done more with it, I personally don't like people just flowin' bout how they are the best and that they are gonna break jaws, bust caps...etc...it's...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 11:34 AM

Replies: 21 What RB...Peep the Skillz...or help me Views: 318 Posted By SinfiC It looks like your concept and flow was good but... It looks like your concept and flow was good but I couldn't really follow it because of the structure. I'm sure you've heard people say it before, how you rhyme each line... I usually write it...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 11:27 AM

Replies: 8 Poll: open mic freestyle. PEEP IT! Views: 186 Posted By SinfiC ^^need an aditude ajustment, if your looking for... ^^need an aditude ajustment, if your looking for feedback and you get feedback, what's the deal? Anyways I don't think people should talk back, even if they didn't like the feedback they are givin'...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 11:16 AM

Replies: 9 take a look(freestyle) Views: 197 Posted By SinfiC You definatly had some good ideas for this one, I... You definatly had some good ideas for this one, I liked your flow and structure, some parts I couldn't really follow, one thing I don't like tho... 15, got the game on ''lock'' like a ''prison'' I...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 11:10 AM

Replies: 7 DAYUM....written PLEASSSEEE Feedback Views: 176 Posted By SinfiC This one was hot man, everything was on top, I... This one was hot man, everything was on top, I liked the flow and your use of vocab. You're definatly spittin this on on the real. Keep writtin, definatly lookin to see more like this.

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 11:06 AM

Replies: 4 Back in the Days fah me. Views: 111 Posted By SinfiC I really liked this piece, although everyone has... I really liked this piece, although everyone has already said the structure was off, I also think that next time you could use more vocab than just the simplistic words. Your flow was great and you...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 11:00 AM

Replies: 11 Freestyle (No Subject) Views: 205 Posted By SinfiC I really liked your idea but it fell off a bit. I... I really liked your idea but it fell off a bit. I think you should practice your structure a little more, try writing longer lines and change up subjects and I'm sure it will be tight..Keep it up...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 10:54 AM

Replies: 13 The Life of a Pizza Slice Views: 176 Posted By SinfiC I really liked your concept and your use of words... I really liked your concept and your use of words was great, I agree with the fact that a pizza slice might not be the subject you want to go with, but if thats what you were feelin' I say go for...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 10:45 AM

Replies: 11 Rappers and the game (quick keystyle) Views: 180 Posted By SinfiC ^^looks like I beat you to it yo...lol ^^looks like I beat you to it yo...lol

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 10:43 AM

Replies: 11 Rappers and the game (quick keystyle) Views: 180 Posted By SinfiC Yea, the guys are right, this did sound similar... Yea, the guys are right, this did sound similar to eminems verse... [Eminem] Only learn to take, our anger and our hate Control our mental state, settle down, and just set it straight Maybe we can...

Forum: Textual Releases 01-10-04, 10:39 AM

Replies: 11 Rappers and the game (quick keystyle) Views: 180 Posted By SinfiC you shouldn't be spittin, if your spittin... you shouldn't be spittin, if your spittin bittin'....I think someone should post the verse they are talking about so we all know how similar they are....just a thought.

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