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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-17-04, 10:51 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 371
Posted By
rule
This was dope...you really write good...
This was dope...you really write good topicals...very emotional and creative piece i thought. the way you put forth the imagery and base of this poem/song was awesome. vocab was good as was the... |
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Forum: Poetry Tournament
02-17-04, 10:30 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 2,021
Posted By
rule
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-04, 10:28 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 332
Posted By
rule
You started off with a similer line from 8...
You started off with a similer line from 8 mile...you're dope eminem |
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Forum: Elevated Front Lines Battles
02-17-04, 07:27 PM
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Replies: 11
BATTLE: Topical-SyaNidal \v/S. Rule
Views: 738
Posted By
rule
Okie Synz upped this lots of times for people to...
Okie Synz upped this lots of times for people to see this but still nothing....drop some votes...both verses are enjoyable reads hopefully so take 10 minutes and vote honestly |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-04, 07:10 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 416
Posted By
rule
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-17-04, 06:42 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 483
Posted By
rule
This was a good piece, needs work but for a first...
This was a good piece, needs work but for a first piece definitly decent. I think you should make it bigger give the reader more of a visual of situations you've been through. the emotion was good... |
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Forum: New Release Songs
02-17-04, 05:26 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 481
Posted By
rule
Very creative beat. Good flow. The Delivery was...
Very creative beat. Good flow. The Delivery was very good. i liked the lyrics. very complex drop. I gotta go or i'd leave more feedback but for a first listen from you...you have a lot of talent. ... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-04, 05:10 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 339
Posted By
rule
Good collab a lot of deatil from both of you....
Good collab a lot of deatil from both of you. emotionly very well rounded good concept. you both fit well together with your styles. keep it up...i think you's should do a part 2...very good dope... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-17-04, 05:07 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 368
Posted By
rule
this was great filed.
a lot of good thoughts...
this was great filed. a lot of good thoughts and metaphores, very well rounded emotional poem. liked the out line and base of this good concept. very well done...quick and dope as ferris... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-04, 04:42 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 515
Posted By
rule
Creative piece. But on a good level to most...
Creative piece. But on a good level to most people. Because a lot of people may feel this way, you wrote well on this topic. For writters block you really excelled still. I enjoyed the picture of... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-04, 04:37 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 685
Posted By
rule
^^nice pic lol
Good piece topic. i enjoyed the...
^^nice pic lol Good piece topic. i enjoyed the read. very unique I enjoyed the line about sinking through the land. very accademic and unique. a lot of good vocab good flow and a good consistant... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-17-04, 04:33 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 395
Posted By
rule
Wow...this was incredible..I can really feel this...
Wow...this was incredible..I can really feel this piece i've wanted to write something on this type of situation for a long time but I could never pull it off...but you did it very well. the... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-04, 04:16 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 416
Posted By
rule
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-17-04, 02:43 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 306
Posted By
rule
Heavon On Earth
..Mountains of people die each and every year from diseases But to where they end up after death we have no reasons Do they come back as a different person or creature The same person in a different... |
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Forum: Sacred Scriptures
02-17-04, 02:39 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 2,807
Posted By
rule
The past few years of my life I drew pictures...
The past few years of my life I drew pictures with a pen Made the sky the limite & the paper my best friend Drew pictures with words put my thoughts in phrases Writter block to writting hot it's all... |
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Forum: Front Lines Battles
02-17-04, 02:21 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 2,425
Posted By
rule
Vote Token...better over all verse even if it was...
Vote Token...better over all verse even if it was weak lol...good job tok other guy...elavate and take that help spit offered... |
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Forum: Front Lines Battles
02-17-04, 02:05 PM
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Replies: 15
BATTLE: Mc Aines vs True Blue
Views: 1,277
Posted By
rule
Not a bad battle but aines took it for...
Not a bad battle but aines took it for sure... First Verse...wasn't bad but didn't really stay to complex or hold to many hard consistant punches try to grasp more personals they help Second... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-04, 02:00 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 416
Posted By
rule
Heavon On Earth
..Mountains of people die each and every year from diseases But to where they end up after death we have no reasons Do they come back as a different person or creature The same person in a different... |
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Forum: Elevated Front Lines Battles
02-17-04, 01:55 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 647
Posted By
rule
..Mountains of people die each and every year...
..Mountains of people die each and every year from diseases But to where they end up after death we have no reasons Do they come back as a different person or creature The same person in a different... |
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Forum: Elevated Front Lines Battles
02-16-04, 05:07 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 647
Posted By
rule
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Forum: Front Lines Battles
02-15-04, 10:54 AM
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Replies: 19
BATTLE: Brethren vs. Rule
Views: 899
Posted By
rule
uppen.............................................
uppen............................................. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-15-04, 10:49 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 417
Posted By
rule
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-14-04, 11:47 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 417
Posted By
rule
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-14-04, 11:45 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 679
Posted By
rule
Good song,,,I really enjoyed this piece it had a...
Good song,,,I really enjoyed this piece it had a lot of good detailed emotion with a good sence of power in your words...pretty concrete....i liked it...keep up the good work I center my things now... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-14-04, 11:43 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 455
Posted By
rule
I liked this piece a lot...the way you described...
I liked this piece a lot...the way you described emotion and had a constant vision for the reader...very well done..good vocab structure and all that...keep it up very good work |
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