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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
01-21-06, 12:57 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 268
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Barr
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
01-20-06, 04:00 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 269
Posted By
Barr
ahaha just ban him for good, no reason, itd be...
ahaha just ban him for good, no reason, itd be halarious though. |
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
01-20-06, 03:46 PM
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Replies: 39
Views: 374
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Barr
my record is 329 hacks... not that great at...
my record is 329 hacks... not that great at tricks though |
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
01-20-06, 03:43 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 269
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Barr
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
01-20-06, 12:01 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 915
Posted By
Barr
This was a cool read. Structure made the entire...
This was a cool read. Structure made the entire read flawless. Provided some good metaphors with decent foreshadowing. I thought that the ending was brilliant. I got the impression that you had... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
01-19-06, 03:02 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 619
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Barr
Young Pilgrims
Young Pilgrims A cold and wet November dawn And there are no barking sparrows Just emptiness to dwell upon. I fell into a winter slide And ended up the kind of kid who goes down chutes too... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
12-14-05, 12:20 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 445
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Barr
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
12-04-05, 11:18 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 445
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Town Called Malice
You'd better stop dreaming of the quiet life cos it's the one we'll never know And quit running for that runaway bus 'cos those rosey days are few And stop apologising for the things you've never... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
11-02-05, 06:53 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 537
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Barr
Gravedigger
Cyrus Jones 1810 to 1913, made his great grandchildren believe you could live to 100 and 3 a 100 and 3, is forever when you're just a little kid so Cyrus Jones lived forever Gravedigger when you dig... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-26-05, 01:55 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 750
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Barr
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-21-05, 02:26 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 750
Posted By
Barr
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-19-05, 07:37 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 750
Posted By
Barr
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
10-18-05, 11:57 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 213
Posted By
Barr
Those kind of dungeon tarts mainly hide in the...
Those kind of dungeon tarts mainly hide in the corner of someone's basement house party. Only wheel those bitches to win a small bet... Or play a game of ringside rodeo... (Get a buddy to hide in the... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-18-05, 11:48 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 750
Posted By
Barr
thank you very much.
words you may not...
thank you very much. words you may not know bullion - fortune/gold mesa - long steep cliff |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-18-05, 03:13 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 750
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Barr
Links have been posted, lets get some feeeeeed. :)
Links have been posted, lets get some feeeeeed. :) |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-18-05, 03:12 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 653
Posted By
Barr
K ?
I thought i've seen this before, maybe on...
K ? I thought i've seen this before, maybe on rb, thought it was by you but if not then whatever.. I thought the structure and flow was real nice, set up the story beautifully. Loved the ending... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-18-05, 03:06 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 1,691
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Barr
I enjoyed the read. I was really impressed with...
I enjoyed the read. I was really impressed with your vocab multies and internals. This really made it flow smooth. I thought it could have been improved though by using more words to rhyme off.. I... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-17-05, 10:55 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 750
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Barr
The Ocean - Feed and Feed Will be Recieved
The Ocean Ocean breeze swept in off the sea, blowing a scarlet angel’s locks It freed him from the shackles attaching his empathy to single thought Her lip quivered in shock as they would grapple... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-17-05, 12:47 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 268
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Barr
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-16-05, 01:19 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 654
Posted By
Barr
So, what alias are you?
I'll be honest, this was...
So, what alias are you? I'll be honest, this was a great drop. I thought the rhyming at the start was a bit forced, like you had abit of writers block and were looking for a way to kick it off, but... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-16-05, 01:14 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 268
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Barr
Links: Walking On Water...
Links: Walking On Water (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2490337&posted=1#post2490337) I Need to be an Artist (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211621) |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-16-05, 01:12 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 842
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Barr
What can I say...
This was captivating from...
What can I say... This was captivating from start to end with real nice meaning that really hit home. The flow was felt from beggining to end with some great use of wordplay. The thing you did best... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-16-05, 01:04 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 268
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Barr
State Of The Art
Pigmated fragments of colours fracture this mixture As an anonymous tipster drains blood from these fixtures I throw paint outside the frame to create pictures It's my life, it shouldn't be written... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
10-12-05, 11:50 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 266
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Barr
Up In The Air
Up in the sky tied to a string Dancing on air Bringing thoughts by and helping to sing My worries and cares thrown Up in the air, So you’ve appeared Up in the air All of my fears are Up in the... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-02-05, 12:31 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 403
Posted By
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