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Forum: Textual Releases
06-17-07, 05:32 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 217
Posted By
adamjace
You talk shit in my thread and then you drop SHIT...
You talk shit in my thread and then you drop SHIT like this? Stop talking so much shit to everyone and actually work on you material. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
06-17-07, 05:28 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 870
Posted By
adamjace
shorten the lines up a little bit and this comes...
shorten the lines up a little bit and this comes out a very nice piece. good drop |
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Forum: Textual Releases
06-04-07, 03:57 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 241
Posted By
adamjace
This one wasn't as good as the others... Some of...
This one wasn't as good as the others... Some of the punches were cheesy imo... keep elevating ya dig? |
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Forum: Textual Releases
06-04-07, 03:45 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 364
Posted By
adamjace
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Forum: Bitch Slapped
05-27-07, 12:43 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 218
Posted By
adamjace
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Forum: Textual Releases
05-18-07, 03:42 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 670
Posted By
adamjace
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Forum: Textual Releases
05-12-07, 06:21 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 670
Posted By
adamjace
Good looks on the feedback... I think I'm going...
Good looks on the feedback... I think I'm going to record this to show everyone kind of how I would flow it... I understand its not very complex but it goes really well with the beat I wrote it to.... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
05-09-07, 06:32 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 670
Posted By
adamjace
Track 10
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242130 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241859 Wrote this piece today to track 10 ovbiously lol... trackrunner? Imma a track... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
05-09-07, 06:28 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 472
Posted By
adamjace
yeah man there were some creative lines on this...
yeah man there were some creative lines on this piece.. I also like your ability to tell a story and stay on topic on this certian verse... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
05-09-07, 06:26 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 376
Posted By
adamjace
I didn't really like how its all crammed.. But I...
I didn't really like how its all crammed.. But I can't front this piece is hot... you had some pretty dope bars... Keep elevating |
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Forum: Bitch Slapped
04-25-07, 06:25 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 210
Posted By
adamjace
I Got you... Setup and drop... I'll respond in...
I Got you... Setup and drop... I'll respond in 24hrs... |
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Forum: Text Cyphers
04-19-07, 04:33 PM
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Replies: 571
Views: 30,517
Posted By
adamjace
errr... I posted for a previous page... metaphor...
errr... I posted for a previous page... metaphor shootout is pretty tough.. I'll sit this one out for now |
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
04-19-07, 04:20 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 802
Posted By
adamjace
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Forum: Textual Releases
04-14-07, 01:56 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 385
Posted By
adamjace
White Trash I want to thank you for that in depth...
White Trash I want to thank you for that in depth post. All of what you said made sense, I'll feel what ya said about writing more original. I'm going to start making a conscious effort to be more... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
04-13-07, 04:00 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 219
Posted By
adamjace
your bars are stereched... You need to take out...
your bars are stereched... You need to take out some words... For example... so ive been at this rap thing for 5 months and 3 days, and im comin up faster than the cars drive on the free ways, it... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
04-12-07, 02:37 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 385
Posted By
adamjace
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Forum: Member Mugshots
04-10-07, 02:58 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 628
Posted By
adamjace
I know I could of... Its the starting of a huge...
I know I could of... Its the starting of a huge project as said before. |
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge
04-10-07, 02:03 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 477
Posted By
adamjace
Yo on the real this is some funny shit. Where did...
Yo on the real this is some funny shit. Where did ya find this shit? |
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Forum: Textual Releases
04-09-07, 09:54 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 230
Posted By
adamjace
overall I could follow the story... But you need...
overall I could follow the story... But you need to work on not using such basic rhymes.. dead/head dam/cam route/out it just makes the verse too basic... It flows/sounds a lot better when u use... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
04-09-07, 09:43 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 385
Posted By
adamjace
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240775 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241282 |
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Forum: Textual Releases
04-09-07, 09:41 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 385
Posted By
adamjace
evening
This is something I just key'd up... I'm not bitin "Throw some d's on that bitch" either I'm just using it because its well known by everyone. I mean...... I gotta get paid, ta get all my lady... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
04-09-07, 09:27 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 628
Posted By
adamjace
Damn man, this was a big read! overall I would...
Damn man, this was a big read! overall I would give it all 7/10 there were some pretty good parts in there but then there were a few parts that dragged on in my opinnion. Keep writing homey your mos... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
04-09-07, 09:25 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 239
Posted By
adamjace
Yo,
I thought this was ok... It seemed pretty...
Yo, I thought this was ok... It seemed pretty basic but for the most part flowed well.. keep elevatin and try using more multi's and metas.. Maybe peep some of the tutorials on rhyme schemes in the... |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
04-07-07, 07:02 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 628
Posted By
adamjace
nice tat... Here's mine Its a work in...
nice tat... Here's mine Its a work in progress. http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9416/mypictureqf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us) |
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Forum: New Release Songs
04-07-07, 04:28 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 412
Posted By
adamjace
Yo,
Just peeped the track... I can't help but...
Yo, Just peeped the track... I can't help but think the conecpt is borrowed... No biggie though. as far as your flow it sounded pretty good. I also agree that you could of did a bit more on the... |
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