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Forum: Textual Releases 02-17-04, 12:14 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 500
Posted By Abotizer
this was pretty dope, excpet it's a topic from...

this was pretty dope, excpet it's a topic from the Raven by Poe. I think you did that on purpose though, just kidna like a remake. i wish you added maybe a different twist at the end, just not like...
Forum: Closed Battles 01-31-04, 11:18 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,578
Posted By Abotizer
lethargic: your beginnings were nice and i was...

lethargic: your beginnings were nice and i was really feeling some of hte wordplay, but near the end few bars i wasn't feling it was much

rhode: pretty nice, but not as many peaks or hard hitting...
Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 09:29 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 316
Posted By Abotizer
you obviously didn't read it, cuz there was like...

you obviously didn't read it, cuz there was like zero religous message
Forum: Textual Releases 01-26-04, 12:57 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 316
Posted By Abotizer
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6
Forum: Textual Releases 01-25-04, 07:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 316
Posted By Abotizer
i supposed, but who ever said rhymescheme had to...

i supposed, but who ever said rhymescheme had to have internals to make it less boring?
Forum: Textual Releases 01-25-04, 07:11 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 242
Posted By Abotizer
not bad, some of the mesages were a little...

not bad, some of the mesages were a little cliche'ish. overall it was pretyt good. you had some good thoughts and nice messages. the overall writer's voice and wirting was what shined the most
Forum: Textual Releases 01-25-04, 06:04 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 316
Posted By Abotizer
touched by an angel

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I was raised as a christaian, I went to church everyday
I always folded my hands and bowed my knees when I prayed
My parents were strict Catholics, made me learn their ways
life wasn't easy,...
Forum: Textual Releases 01-19-04, 04:21 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 293
Posted By Abotizer
the rhymescheme's a litlte different and the...

the rhymescheme's a litlte different

and the transition between me and my partner's a bit rough, but yeah
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:25 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 293
Posted By Abotizer
yeah, seriously, just cause i'm not known on this...

yeah, seriously, just cause i'm not known on this site, you guys ain't responding....

i responded to 5 open mics just right now, so i'm gonna up this
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:24 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 591
Posted By Abotizer
get these lame disses out of this forum

get these lame disses out of this forum
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:23 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 265
Posted By Abotizer
there was a lot of emotion, but you could've...

there was a lot of emotion, but you could've worked on some of your vocabulary. the flow was off at times, and i really wished you made it more detailed and gave us more examples
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:22 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 250
Posted By Abotizer
no , not really the topic was cruddy and your...

no , not really
the topic was cruddy and your flow was nothing like water
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:21 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 202
Posted By Abotizer
not bad, you had some nice iamgery the ender was...

not bad, you had some nice iamgery

the ender was alright, but you oculd've made yourself a little more clear and added a better flow
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 06:20 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 763
Posted By Abotizer
it's an alright diss but this isn't too topical...

it's an alright diss

but this isn't too topical or anything. it's alright

structur'e's basic , could use a few more internals
Forum: Textual Releases 01-18-04, 12:40 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 293
Posted By Abotizer
A picture in my wallet by Abotizer & NuM LuCK

I keep this picture,
…In my wallet to remind me,
Of this person know.
So that any time,
….I get lost in the world`s shit,
I can grip it & remember to Grow.
This person keeps pushing,
…Me closer...
Forum: Closed Battles 01-17-04, 05:04 PM
Replies: 69
Views: 3,939
Posted By Abotizer
aim-...

aim- mgfuzhead

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=102723
Forum: Topical 101 01-15-04, 10:22 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 5,517
Posted By Abotizer
u bums

u bums
Forum: Topical 101 01-15-04, 10:21 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 4,051
Posted By Abotizer
i was relaly feeilng aisle's verse more, the...

i was relaly feeilng aisle's verse more, the story seemed more put together and it had more of a story to it. both of them had interesting stories, but aisle five's was better

v/aisle five
Forum: Topical 101 01-15-04, 10:14 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,872
Posted By Abotizer
status,not bad, i was really feeling your iamgery...

status,not bad, i was really feeling your iamgery more than mavens. maven's seemed a little more topical while yours seemed really storytellinga nd had some deep meanings. maven most def had the...
Forum: Topical 101 01-15-04, 10:09 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,604
Posted By Abotizer
peepers: nice iamgery, you had some really nice...

peepers:
nice iamgery, you had some really nice wirter's voice and topical writing.



ending was just nice, had a little twist at the end, sorta

walter:
not bad, not as much writer's voice or as...
Forum: Tag'd 01-14-04, 08:30 AM
Replies: 8
Sticky: Team Names
Views: 2,339
Posted By Abotizer
Abotizer and Baron Mynd = We Took Your Girl

Abotizer and Baron Mynd = We Took Your Girl
Forum: Tag'd 01-13-04, 08:40 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,230
Posted By Abotizer
noooooooooooo shows

noooooooooooo shows
Forum: Tag'd 01-08-04, 10:20 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,230
Posted By Abotizer
hihi

hihi
Forum: Topical 101 01-06-04, 12:06 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 3,143
Posted By Abotizer
these times are troubling, the pain is rubbin'...

these times are troubling, the pain is rubbin' in
the stress just makes me want to huddle in
to my bed
these thoughts in my head
just destroying me, i'm full of grief
everyday feels like someone's...
Forum: Tag'd 01-04-04, 07:04 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 6,583
Posted By Abotizer
vote, kiddies

vote, kiddies
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