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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
05-21-04, 01:10 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 381
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personnaly i dont find the rhyme scheme all that...
personnaly i dont find the rhyme scheme all that attractive, it gets really old really fast. i liked the one line at the end of each stanza it made it strong and bold, stood out and made you take in... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
05-21-04, 12:42 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 266
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man im dissapointed in the sort of replies on...
man im dissapointed in the sort of replies on this side of rb. babes i thought this was more of a piece written just to get a story/message/feelings out. it didnt seem to focus around structure,... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
05-21-04, 12:32 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 284
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Stares fill the hallways of the lost minds in...
Stares fill the hallways of the lost minds in compromise So stand tall, tell your thoughts and grasp hold your prize Its there, it’s for you, your name is engraved in the thickening gold So reach... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
05-17-04, 02:50 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 284
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wrong color walkways
Stares fill the hallways of the lost minds in compromise So stand tall, tell your thoughts and grasp hold your prize Its there, it’s for you, your name is engraved in the thickening gold So reach... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-17-04, 03:39 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 368
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humankind's home
just something quick Humankind’s home At last the drainy run down day finally reaches the night fall Where the sky darkens to a drifting blue with hints of red throu out & sailor’s delight... |
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Forum: Sacred Scriptures
02-15-04, 11:03 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 2,588
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all i say is you need to work on your 6th sense...
all i say is you need to work on your 6th sense checking in good luck ~Tera~ DONT HATE |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-13-04, 03:46 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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mid 30s! ahhh no! im only 16
k who is liza...
mid 30s! ahhh no! im only 16 k who is liza manelli? ~Tera~ |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-11-04, 06:46 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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if i wasnt having fun, i think i would rather...
if i wasnt having fun, i think i would rather die, im always having fun and goofing off, its just me. yes i can speak french real well actaully, been in french since grade 1, and my dad is... |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-10-04, 07:00 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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never heard before that i looked like tha tatu...
never heard before that i looked like tha tatu girl, but thanks, and yeah im not quiet a lez, not at all actually. and thanks for the bone structure compliment, lol the end- all femcees's big... |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-10-04, 04:07 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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ya i was just goofin when babes took that pic (...
ya i was just goofin when babes took that pic ( the 2nd one ) ive got other better ones i coulda put like hmmm but im not smiling so i tend to not post it |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-10-04, 04:04 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-10-04, 03:46 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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whats a manga comic?
its so close, because the...
whats a manga comic? its so close, because the pic sizr was on like big ass pic size, so i had to cut it down some, so i just took my face so it was huge. the tatu girl? thats a first. ive had... |
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-10-04, 03:36 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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^ sticking up for me now End are you? just like...
^ sticking up for me now End are you? just like the big brother i never had, awsome! thanks ppl i love ppl's eyes the most out of any feature so lol thanks for liking mine! lol that sounded gay but... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-10-04, 03:27 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 457
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-10-04, 02:47 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-10-04, 02:44 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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Forum: Member Mugshots
02-10-04, 02:38 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,462
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-10-04, 01:40 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 356
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i found that the slang writting took away from...
i found that the slang writting took away from the piece also a bit, its alright once and awhile throu a piece, but every second word gets to be a bit much. i too found you were holding yourself... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-10-04, 01:35 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 286
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i dont know why this is getting slept on, its a...
i dont know why this is getting slept on, its a pretty good piece. i dont think ive read anything else from you before, but after reading this im going to make sure i do. your detail and descriptions... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-10-04, 01:28 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 269
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you grabbed my attention with the first line. you...
you grabbed my attention with the first line. you gave this piece a strong opener, with a great flow, awsome vocab, and good structure.it read smoothly and sounds good outloud. i like the way you... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-10-04, 01:11 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 297
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its cool how this reads as if it were the drug...
its cool how this reads as if it were the drug taking. you got your thoughts across very strong in this piece i think, and made it interesting. i liked the whole idea of how you approached this... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-10-04, 01:04 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 571
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when i started reading this i thought i had the...
when i started reading this i thought i had the idea of where you were going to take it, but that i was wrong. and really im not sure where you did take it, i have so many different thoughts now... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-10-04, 12:59 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 269
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at first when i started reading this the...
at first when i started reading this the structure and rhyme scheme threw me off, it was forced and choppy, but you sorta made up for that with the story, kept it interesting, and used pretty good... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-10-04, 12:53 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 265
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ok this is a topic that gets done over and over...
ok this is a topic that gets done over and over again, and most of the time, they are all about the same. and even thou you used some phrases in your piece that you see alot, you still put in some... |
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Forum: Poetic Scriptures
02-08-04, 09:03 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 268
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man that was a different ending, i liked it, it...
man that was a different ending, i liked it, it ended the whole thing off very nicely. the structure of this was basic, the flow was alright, vocab was pretty good, the conten and detail were well... |
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