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Forum: Poetic Scriptures 02-07-04, 03:36 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 279
Posted By krakajack
i don't understand, y doesn't anyone like to read...

i don't understand, y doesn't anyone like to read my poetry? i feel sad :(
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 02-05-04, 10:42 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 279
Posted By krakajack
hello out there, anyone home?

hello out there, anyone home?
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 02-03-04, 08:20 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 279
Posted By krakajack
alright, thanks for the feed man. unfortunetlly...

alright, thanks for the feed man. unfortunetlly this is still gettin slept on pretty hard. uppin once again.
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 02-01-04, 11:40 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 279
Posted By krakajack
FEED? PLEASE? up. i'll reply to anyone who...

FEED? PLEASE? up. i'll reply to anyone who replies to mine, jus drop a link.
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 02-01-04, 12:45 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 279
Posted By krakajack
damn, people must not like reading my poems. up.

damn, people must not like reading my poems. up.
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 02-01-04, 02:41 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 279
Posted By krakajack
Stay and Remain

why do you chose to stay and remain?
with the field a heap of your comrades slain
and the insturment with blood's fresh stain
while the roots of memory grow insane

despatch ur kin with thrust and...
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-31-04, 03:36 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
damn, this is gettin slept on pretty hard....

damn, this is gettin slept on pretty hard. please, take 2 seconds to vote. uppin final..............
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-30-04, 10:34 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
like i said i think this should be an easy battle...

like i said i think this should be an easy battle to jusge. comeon, it won't take more than 3 secconds. uppin 4
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-30-04, 06:38 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
uppin 3. comeon, this should take 2 seconds....

uppin 3. comeon, this should take 2 seconds. uppin 3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-29-04, 07:24 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
thanks for the votes. sorry, i can't really vote...

thanks for the votes. sorry, i can't really vote on other battles yet. regasdless, im uppin for the second time right now. hit it up real quick. like i said, should be an easy choice.
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-29-04, 04:51 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
yea, sorry, i don't have 100 posts so i can't...

yea, sorry, i don't have 100 posts so i can't vote on ur battle, otherwise i would. anyway, uppin for votes. no offense, but this shouldn't be that hard to vote on. uppin 1.
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-27-04, 12:38 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
uppin for ur verse again kid. come on, don't be a...

uppin for ur verse again kid. come on, don't be a no show. jus get ur shit up here and let the best verse win.
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-26-04, 11:50 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
uppi for ur verse again. lets get it up there so...

uppi for ur verse again. lets get it up there so we can get some votes here finaly. uppin, lets go man.
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-26-04, 07:00 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
word, uppin for u to spit man. not impatient, jus...

word, uppin for u to spit man. not impatient, jus don't want this to go to like the 4th page and be forgotten about. so, anyway, uppin for retard 101
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-26-04, 04:08 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
this battle will leave u covered in hives so u...

this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cuz i'll leave u cover in gore, but u couldn't win in a re-count
like face paint for maverik's games, i'll leave ya head...
Forum: Front Lines Battles 01-26-04, 03:25 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,364
Posted By krakajack
check, i'll be spitting shortly. g' luck man....

check, i'll be spitting shortly. g' luck man. ......................................................
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-26-04, 02:41 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 508
Posted By krakajack
thanks a lot girl, thanks for really taking the...

thanks a lot girl, thanks for really taking the time to read this shit. much respect for being able to see the emotion and the meaning. still uppin i guess.
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-24-04, 05:02 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 508
Posted By krakajack
yea man, go ahead and do it. i'll give u foll...

yea man, go ahead and do it. i'll give u foll recrutin powers. do ya thing man......................
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-18-04, 07:38 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 508
Posted By krakajack
thanks a lot for really taking the time to read...

thanks a lot for really taking the time to read this. i was begining to wonder if anyone would understand wat i was tryin to say, or if i had just screwed up. thanks to u and also fanta zee for...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-18-04, 02:50 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 202
Posted By krakajack
i liked it. it had tha stream of consciousness...

i liked it. it had tha stream of consciousness technique i like to use. it still was kinda simple though. u need more metaphores, similies and all those other poetic techniques. it kinda jumped...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-18-04, 02:41 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 220
Posted By krakajack
it wasn't bad. it kinda dragged, cuz u were...

it wasn't bad. it kinda dragged, cuz u were basicly saying the same thing, just in different words. it was kinda simple, but this didn't really need to be complex, the only thing is u need to give...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-18-04, 02:36 PM
Replies: 7
Poll: Two Seconds
Views: 295
Posted By krakajack
it was ite. that begining, where it kept on...

it was ite. that begining, where it kept on saying it takes one second to do w/e, has been done a few times. it kinda dragged in the middle, but it came on strong at the end. the bigest problem with...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-18-04, 02:27 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 508
Posted By krakajack
no, there is plenty of meaning to it, just look a...

no, there is plenty of meaning to it, just look a lil deeper than the surface. u actually gotta think to get it, not just read it. thats y its a poem.
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-17-04, 11:15 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 263
Posted By krakajack
that bragging stuff is not really poetic, don't...

that bragging stuff is not really poetic, don't do it. anyway, ur imagry was good, stories were good (althugh u choped em up with that bragging garbage) but u still got work in other areas. i suggest...
Forum: Poetic Scriptures 01-17-04, 10:16 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 508
Posted By krakajack
uppin...

uppin please........................................................................................
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