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Forum: Textual Releases 09-03-06, 06:48 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 654
Posted By
Pakaveli
Don't mind me saying this Wiley, but your...
Don't mind me saying this Wiley, but your contradicting yourself.....your saying you didn't understand half the stuff i said but then go on to call me/ my writing illeterate. Seriously, think before... |
Forum: Textual Releases 08-31-06, 03:14 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 654
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Pakaveli
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2881856&posted=1#post2881856 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2881857&posted=1#post2881857 |
Forum: Textual Releases 08-31-06, 03:13 PM |
Replies: 10
Views: 1,020
Posted By
Pakaveli
the concept of this was good and is quite true as...
the concept of this was good and is quite true as most commercial rappers get out of their hood by rapping but then brag about the roots. I liked how you used first person as the 1st person dialogue... |
Forum: Closed Threads 08-31-06, 03:08 PM |
Replies: 6
Views: 962
Posted By
Pakaveli
This was aight, for a first or a series of first...
This was aight, for a first or a series of first dorps it's aight, your probably new to the depth game and you basically need to start using metaphors, personification and intense description at... |
Forum: Textual Releases 08-31-06, 03:05 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 654
Posted By
Pakaveli
The 7 Sins: Lust
The Seven Sins: Lust http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9820/lustactivell8.jpg Ta2 Tears as Lionel Lust, Verse 2 Pakaveli as narrator, verses 1 & 3 “Look over there” Sumptuous fruits that grow... |
Forum: Closed 07-22-06, 10:05 PM |
Replies: 78
Views: 4,685
Posted By
Pakaveli
You too broke to be rectified
Gettin Shox only by...
You too broke to be rectified Gettin Shox only by being electrified.............(Shox=Nike Shox) In one hand gun and in another a rose |
Forum: Closed 07-22-06, 05:05 PM |
Replies: 78
Views: 4,685
Posted By
Pakaveli
Lik playin soccer in the summer my kick is...
Lik playin soccer in the summer my kick is hot Your coming up with played concepts like a google bot i fly and watch you cower down |
Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-20-06, 12:49 AM |
Replies: 9
Views: 8,262
Posted By
Pakaveli
Sorted it out, he won't be able to drop....Close...
Sorted it out, he won't be able to drop....Close this. |
Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-20-06, 12:23 AM |
Replies: 9
Views: 8,262
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Pakaveli
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Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-19-06, 11:21 PM |
Replies: 9
Views: 8,262
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Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-19-06, 10:06 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 3,228
Posted By
Pakaveli
Both the drops were very good.
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T- your drop was...
Both the drops were very good. . T- your drop was good but the vocabulary wasn't at your usual standard and the flow got awkard at a point as well. . M-your verse was good too, the flow was good and... |
Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-19-06, 08:48 PM |
Replies: 9
Views: 8,262
Posted By
Pakaveli
Don't tell me this is a no show....or was thier...
Don't tell me this is a no show....or was thier another extension. |
Forum: Album Reviews 07-19-06, 02:58 PM |
Replies: 17
Views: 3,497
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-19-06, 08:22 AM |
Replies: 6
Views: 749
Posted By
Pakaveli
Preciate your pointer...I have put imagery...
Preciate your pointer...I have put imagery in....i do make stuff basic at times. |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 04:32 PM |
Replies: 6
Views: 749
Posted By
Pakaveli
theres multiples....the whole thing is...
theres multiples....the whole thing is practically a metaphor...if you don't know metaphors than don't leave comments...tell me the meaning of my metaphors and then critique and lastly let me clear... |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 04:29 PM |
Replies: 31
Views: 1,473
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 04:28 PM |
Replies: 20
Views: 1,578
Posted By
Pakaveli
I never look dpown on anyones work na mean..i...
I never look dpown on anyones work na mean..i want you to drop something that will make me go Damn na eman...G/L for your writing and flow eazy i'm not a beef taker or giver ...Stay up |
Forum: Provocative Thoughts 07-18-06, 10:08 AM |
Replies: 10
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Views: 3,301
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Pakaveli
Yes this should happen....it'll be interesting to...
Yes this should happen....it'll be interesting to see how many no shows there will be after this. |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 10:05 AM |
Replies: 31
Views: 1,473
Posted By
Pakaveli
RAp is a subsiduary of poetry.
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Critic if ya...
RAp is a subsiduary of poetry. . . Critic if ya wanna colab, holla at silent and discuss the topic and verse line amount hen silent will tell me and we'll get it rollin' |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:51 AM |
Replies: 6
Views: 749
Posted By
Pakaveli
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2796217&posted=1#post2796217 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2796219&posted=1#post2796219 |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:50 AM |
Replies: 20
Views: 1,578
Posted By
Pakaveli
This wasn't great there were amusing parts in it...
This wasn't great there were amusing parts in it that kept my attention for a while but as an overall piece it lacks in imagery sicamore multies and basically is at a novie stage, try delving into... |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:47 AM |
Replies: 25
Views: 1,680
Posted By
Pakaveli
This was aight, flow was good and multies were...
This was aight, flow was good and multies were there, just up the imagery and vocab and it's all good..Stay up |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:46 AM |
Replies: 6
Views: 749
Posted By
Pakaveli
2 days too Early
2 Days Early The consequences of hurrying a creation The infested inhabitants lurched at tit bits of informal information The pedantic placation sued who grew the strew called population The... |
Forum: Textual Releases 07-18-06, 02:45 AM |
Replies: 31
Views: 1,473
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Forum: Textual Releases 07-17-06, 05:27 PM |
Replies: 31
Views: 1,473
Posted By
Pakaveli
See by putting an S at then end of collidies you...
See by putting an S at then end of collidies you sentence won't make sense yet if you take it awya your rhymescheme would be diminished. Basicall,y next time you give an example do it right. |
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