Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-02-04 at 09:46 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

QBsmasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 09:21 PM.

lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 09:22 PM.

Ill tell you in advance, my vigilance, sets minds in trance
Take a chance, and pray for a miracle, like a rain dance

Leave you depressed like a manic, with my knowledge vast as the atlantic
Cause your flows dead like its inorganic, someone call the mechanic

They sent ya to the front lines, cause like marines your a good bullet stopper
Your word wont get out, cause my verse will encase it like a truck topper

With a streamline flow, i guess you know, i tend to steal the show
You reached your plateau, you probably stole your verse from edgar allen poe

If you lose ill give you more chances, youll get lost in my minds expanses
Cause after i give you the charlie, imma hit you again like hurricane frances

My rhymes are like bench marks, before emcees embark on a new remark
Your rhymes are so simple, you bring em in pairs like noahs ark

Each drop eats emcees alive, like cancer that wont go into remission
You write so much wack shit, you need to post an entire text edition

We want this closed, the rules werent as we wanted them. Thanks

Voted For: lyricalflowz

I've Decided To Vote On This Because It's a Good Battle, Both Of Ya'll Get Mad Love From Me, So Plz Don't Take Offense.. it's all fun..


Lyricalflowz

Ayo, you got balls steppinto me I'll leave your whole head layin in ya lap,
the only way your verse will be "BIGGer" than mine is if you type it in all "caps"

OKAY, THAT WAS A NICE LINE CUZ, CREATIVE AND PRECISE, IT HIT PRETTY WELL.. 7.5/10

emcees "Run Through" you quicker than fat people run through a "Public lunchroom"
face the facts homie, cuz your like a misplanted rose, you're never gonna bloom,

MEDIOCRE, DIDN'T HIT THAT HARD, I UNDERSTAND IT THO..
5/10

Name makes since to me you sayin you "Smash" Queer Bates, aint that something?,
Its a shame that if u take away all ur recycled lines in ur verse ur left with nothing,

LMAO!!! THAT WAS HELLA FUCKIN FUNNY, 9/10, TRUE OR NOT, THAT WAS A FUNNY ASS PERSONAL..

My lines are like "Throat Spray", they'll leave ya "throat numb", so you wont "Choke"
Your similiar to Weed, your used to always being "planted underground" and "Smoked"

MEDIOCRE, I SEE WHAT U WERE TRYNA DO, BUT IT WASN'T TOO HARD, AVERAGE DISS.. 6/10

you treat me like "Stacker two" cause you always "feed off me" just to gain "energy",
I shouldn't even post, let your verse hurt yourself, and cause a fatal "self-injury",

YOUR FIRST LINE WAS PRETTY TIGHT, I LIKED IT..
7.5/10

I'll "Rap" around ur neck and choke you out like a "noose", so u'll even admit i'm "tight"
I bet when you were registering, they thought you were whack so they denied you twice,

GOOD FIRST LINE, AND NICE PERSONAL.. 8/10

u could stand in the sun, with a football helmet on and ur brain stil wouldn't "shine"
after this battle do me a favor, Look at your record, and I bet it matches mine....

FOOTBALL LINE WAS OKAY, BUT NOT THAT PRECISE, COZ MOST PEOPLE DON'T BRAG ABOUT THEIR BRAIN SHINING, NONE THE LESS, IT WAS A COO DISS STILL, SO 7/10

AVERAGE SCORE = 7.1 = 71%



QBSmasher

Ill tell you in advance, my vigilance, sets minds in trance
Take a chance, and pray for a miracle, like a rain dance

I GET THE CONCEPT, THE FACT THAT RAIN DANCERS DON'T PRAY FOR MIRACLES WHILE THEY DANCE TAKES AWAY, BUT IT WAS STILL OKAY.. 6/10

Leave you depressed like a manic, with my knowledge vast as the atlantic
Cause your flows dead like its inorganic, someone call the mechanic

YOU HAD ABOUT ONE SIMILIE ABOUT BEING DEAD LIKE THE INORGANIC, BUT IT REALLY DIDN'T HIT, IT ISN'T PLAYED, BUT NOT THAT ORIGINAL EITHER.. 6/10

They sent ya to the front lines, cause like marines your a good bullet stopper
Your word wont get out, cause my verse will encase it like a truck topper

OKAY, EVEN THOUGH IT WASN'T A PUNCH, I LIKED THE FIRST LINE BETTER THAN THE 2ND, I'LL GIVE THAT A 7/10

With a streamline flow, i guess you know, i tend to steal the show
You reached your plateau, you probably stole your verse from edgar allen poe

I DON'T KNOW MAN, IT JUST DIDN'T HIT, I CAN'T EXPLAIN IT.. I MEAN IT AIN'T LAME, BUT IT'S EASY TO COME UP WITH, BUT IT IS A PERSONAL THO, SO.. 7/10

If you lose ill give you more chances, youll get lost in my minds expanses
Cause after i give you the charlie, imma hit you again like hurricane frances

PRETTY OKAY, DECENT PUNCH AND SET UP.. 8/10

My rhymes are like bench marks, before emcees embark on a new remark
Your rhymes are so simple, you bring em in pairs like noahs ark

NICE, 7.5

Each drop eats emcees alive, like cancer that wont go into remission
You write so much wack shit, you need to post an entire text edition

7.5/10.. PRETTY GOOD, NICE PERSONAL AT THE END..

AVERAGE SCORE = 7.0 = 70%

I SWEAR TO GOD THAT JUDGED THIS WITH OUT BIAS, AND IT BEING THAT CLOSE ISN'T ME, I HONESTLY THINK THAT THIS WAS ACTUALLY THAT CLOSE, DOWN TO LIKE ONE CREATIVE LINE OR SOMETHING, BUT LYRICALFLOW JUS HAD BETTER PUNCHES, EVEN THOUGH YOUR STRUCTURE IS USUALLY HORRIBLE, YOU NEED TO STOP THAT, BUT YOU TOOK THIS BY A HAIR IN MY EYES.. QBSMASHER, I'VE SEEN WAAAAAAY BETTER FROM YOU, YOU PROLLY WASN'T EVEN TRYING TO MERK HIM COZ YA'LL ARE COO, SO I FEEL IT.. BUT YOUR VERSE WAS NICE TOO, I JUS THINK THAT LYRICALFLOW TOOK ADVANTAGE WITH THE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES, SO HE GETS THIS VOTE. DON'T TRIP, OTHERS MIGHT FEEL DIFFERENTLY, ONE..

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Oh My God, I Spent All That Time Writing For Nothing???? Damn!!

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

ima give it ta lyricalflow cuz he had a longer hotta verse n he had a nice flow goin to. his vocab n punchlines were pretty hot 2 so my vote goes to
vote=lyricalflow

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