Battle Rules:

6 lines
no crew votes
no hate
no recycling
no biting..

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 07-22-05 at 12:03 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Porn identity has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-05 11:37 AM.

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-05 11:43 AM.

Fuck 30 minutes,

Its played to say your shit’s hot, but even if your farts warm?..
And how can you be above me, when even you admit you arent bourne!!
Ima swallow PI, and I aint talking about me eating, he’s justa victim..
But ya must be good, greatminds think alike & ya sigs exactly what im thinking!!
Your spits can be solid like moving houses, thats no prob il leave you evicted..
It don’t matta man, you can chainge ya average post, youll still be adicktied!!

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Meh was quick,

If needed:

Bar 1: Porn identity instead or Bourne in his name, arent bourne / air borne.
Bar 2: Should get it.
Bar 3: a dick tied / addicted. His average posts is 50+

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Daubs MySpace

Be quick, i already droppe a quick 6..............

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Daubs MySpace

* ahem *..
you're such a bitch. i mean i'll stomp you dude.
& like bad songs, everyone wants daubs on mute.
you know you wack, & we all know daubs will swallow fora vote.
so hang your head in shame, fuck i'll even give you the rope.
i'll twist your fate, you're a waste so i'll rape you w/ a belt.
since the only time you're hot, is when i hand your arson L.

2nd line - daubs as in dubs. get it?
last line - arson L/arse an lol.

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Nice, good luck mate..............................

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Daubs MySpace

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Voted For: Daubs

aight man daubs easily got this on man
his punches and personals were better other dude needs to elevate more
vote for daubs

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Authentik Intelligence

good job on the unexplained vote . i'll get that removed.

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Voted For: Porn identity

lol pron idenitity got this....



IP:

* ahem *..
you're such a bitch. i mean i'll stomp you dude.
& like bad songs, everyone wants daubs on mute.
you know you wack, & we all know daubs will swallow fora vote.
so hang your head in shame, fuck i'll even give you the rope.
i'll twist your fate, you're a waste so i'll rape you w/ a belt.
since the only time you're hot, is when i hand your arson L.

vs.

Ima swallow PI, and I aint talking about me eating, he’s justa victim..
But ya must be good, greatminds think alike & ya sigs exactly what im thinking!!

basically PI had more witty and creative lines....his wordplay was a lot better...so for a better verse harder punches

v/ porn identity

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Voted For: Daubs

Hmm...not a very good battle...

Daubs...nice personals and punches...flow was off a bit, and your structure is a little fucked...but you came decent, nice play on his name...decent verse...

Porn Identity...it was okay...the rope thing was played...your flow was off as well, and your structure is a little messed as well...

A'ight Daubs gets this for an overall better verse...

No hate...

I owe Daubs one, so I wont post my link for a return the favor...

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Soundclick
NEW Myspace

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=201108

retturn the favor

damn . i'm losing. oh no it's 1-1. good verse daubs..

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