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Old 08-12-04, 11:33 PM   #1
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Femcee4lyf vs EmerginMc07

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Old 08-12-04, 11:38 PM   #2
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Femcee4Lyf has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 11:38 PM.
 
Old 08-12-04, 11:39 PM   #3
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EmerginMc07 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 11:39 PM.
 
Old 08-12-04, 11:43 PM   #4
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ok gurl u can go now spit yo weak shit so i can crush it
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Old 08-12-04, 11:52 PM   #5
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u r just liek every otha,
they are all motha fuckas,
and u think ur betta than me,
plz bitch get on ur knees,
yo ass is fucked up,
flotain down da riva without a paddle
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Old 08-13-04, 12:07 AM   #6
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dis bithc man hahahahaha

yo yo

u is da worst Femcee i have eva battled,
yo whole rym style and vocab has ben dismantled,
u a bitch who loves da fuckin cock,
u da 1 whos sukin da shit round da clock,
bitch da guys love u , u can use yo tongue,
u jus fiesty rite now, is it that time of month?,
hoe look im sry rap jus aint yo thang slut,
let go n dont run into the bathroom n cut,
man dis was da worst verse i have eva done,
n da worst thing is i alredy won!!!!!,

ahhaha weak shit man jus vote n get this ova wit
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Old 08-13-04, 12:09 AM   #7
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yo im uppin dis shit lol, man dis is crazy, jus vote so i can get this KO, man its her first tho she picked da rong 1 to go first wit
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Old 08-13-04, 12:16 AM   #8
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Voted For: EmerginMc07

open: Emerg
close: Emerg
personals: Emerg
metas: Emerg
punches: Emerg
multis: Emerg
win: Emerg

Emerg: Yo you took this in every aspect there is in battling, great job. You did very well, but ontop of that your opponents verse was the weakest ive ever seen on this site so it made yours look that much better...

Femcee: If you wanna get some real wins on this site your gunna have to do some major elevating...no hate, just bein totally honest...You have to make your lines a lot longer than that. Plus multies are good to use...one punch thrown is nice...and vocab is very important, I can honestly say that I did not see any of these things in your verse so keep rappin and do what I said up there to elevate. GL in the future...
Win: Emerg - by far...

Please drop on this link with an honest vote as I did for you...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141141
 
Old 08-13-04, 12:21 AM   #9
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this was a weak battle emerginMC took it in all catergories
punches were better, structure was way better
personals were ight but at least he had some to begin with
Femcee needs to elevate alot her rhymes were too simple
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344
 
Old 08-13-04, 12:34 AM   #10
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Voted For: EmerginMc07

im givin this 2 emerginmc..he just had better personals..weak battle though...
hit up da prodigy vs saytin...(1 more vote)...this shit is goin on 2 long
 
Old 08-13-04, 01:15 AM   #11
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This was feedback posted for EmerginMc07

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emerg pretty much took this and ran with it... flow was better... structure was better... "last bar rhymed"... disses were harder... no personals...
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Old 08-13-04, 01:18 AM   #12
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yo den gram vote for it then dawg dont jus give me feedback lol, leme get some votes
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Old 08-13-04, 01:19 AM   #13
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sorry, wasn't finished...

ok no metas in his verse or multi's but his verse was put together better....

fem: ya style was mediocre... i know ya new but i felt you could have done way better than what you did... if you heard that on the radio you'd prolly be ready to call the station up and cuss out the deejay... if it ain't hot to you when you say it to yaself then don't spit it... work on ya structure and throw more punches... you'll get it one day
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Old 08-13-04, 01:20 AM   #14
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oh... and that was supposed to be a vote for emerg...not feedback
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Old 08-13-04, 01:33 AM   #15
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This was feedback posted for EmerginMc07

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yeah both of ya'll are pretty much garbage in this one, emrginmc you dropped better in our battle why the drop off? and femcee you need A LOT OF ELEVATION i gotta give my vote to emrginmc just cause his shit flowed and yours didnt at the end femcee

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