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09-28-04, 05:05 PM
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IP: CCE9 E517
Voted For: *lyrical madnes*
ill vote for lyrical madnes he voted for me and will again in bradley_thomas vs NewKid vote of r me man i need. and me he wooped th other guys ass as i thought he would man i hope he wins buy a mile Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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09-29-04, 08:36 PM
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#22
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IP: CEDE 005F
Voted For: Lyriclesolja
i step up to da myk ur ryhmes r shit they leave me without a hit ur face is wack it looks lyk a piece of shit// u lyk a nit so anoyin my rhymes os hard they distroyin i bet ur mams ashamed to look at u ill push u donw tha pit// ^ Weak punch, terrible structure and stretched im suprised strobe anit kicked u of u anit a rapper ur ryhmes r craper mine r **dapper**// man u so despret u need to become a rapper to get ppl to lyk u witch will never happen u kid napper// ^ Weak Punch again, nothing man u cunt u need to get ur 1st **grunt** i bet ur still a virgincoz ur face is wack// my rhymes that reality opps there gose gravity,ill kick u in da face so go pack ur bags go on pack// ^ What the FUCK is wrong with you? u cant rhyme my nick is lyrical madnes ill drive u crazy my rhymes hit u like **mazey**// my rhymes r ill so go take a pill ill stress u out without a dout man im drivin u crazy// ^ Okay terrible terrible terrible Now for solja Yo you wanna be 'high' but you not 'dope', you wanna be 'fly' but you dont have any 'hope', ^ okay, not really a punch you a wanna be 'dog' butt you a 'mutt',(1) ^ Um, kinda weak i saw your battles those dudes 'choped' you up like 'cattle', ^ Very whack punch and it seemed like you stiched it up but you still got bitched up, you a 'pussy' i saw those battles you ducked, sewed a 'clit' to your dick and now your a slut, you wont win this battle if you had irish luck, my word play fuckes you up, worse than a "Night In Paris" homie you gettin fucked. ^ Okay, the Paris line was the only good thing here. Kinda played though Wow, this battle was ass. Both MC's were horrible. Lyriclesolja won this because of his closer. Even though it was played it was the only real punch in this entire battle. Both of you need some serious elevation.
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09-29-04, 08:50 PM
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#23
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This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja
IP: E7CA 0AA7
Straight forward blatant attacks, very good metaphorical phrase as well.
"i saw your battles those dudes 'choped' you up like 'cattle', and it seemed like you stiched it up but you still got bitched up,you a 'pussy' i saw those battles you ducked," why: lyricalmadness just didn't do it for me, because the rhyme scheme wasn't very creative or rhythm like, didn't really come off as battle like, in a battle i like to hear hard smashmouth lyrics that don't take a long timt to get to the point
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09-30-04, 11:18 AM
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#25
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Flyweight
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IP: A142 3783
Voted For: Lyriclesolja
You get this but not by that much. Both of you could use some elevation(no beef). This wasn't one of the best battles i've read on RV. You win because you had alittle bit more punches and your structure was better. |
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09-30-04, 11:20 AM
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#26
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Flyweight
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IP: A142 3783
Return da favor and vote on this!
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147476 |
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09-30-04, 01:27 PM
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Dope.
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IP: CEB9 829E
Voted For: Lyriclesolja
Lyriclesolja took this but both were seriously wack as fuck. *lyrical madnes* structure? flow? you ever heard of them? if not ask for help off vets. pz.
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