Battle Rules:

12-14 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
your droping 1st

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-08-04 at 01:00 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

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skano has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 01:02 AM.

J-Will has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 01:06 AM.

this is not my verse
Leave your family in the triage, second guessin
graf artist, I'm good with sketchin weapons
Leave emancipations for lacerations
With bunks to gun a pump like...... I'm half Jamaican

J-Will

Nigga I ain't got respect for you please
You ain't sittin on dough, you fallin off like sesame seeds
Cause you can't bear pressure... if you don't wear vestes
Crime unit find you and.. I hope they got air freshners.

Im like lloyd banks im on "Fire"... u think otherwise then u'll get put in the trunk like spare "Tires"....i bit u ... pass out venom like a fucking spider....Skano more softer then some baby "Diapers".... i'll shoot atcha head like i was the "DC "Snipers".... .nigga you st8 "herb"... and I'll put ya face to the "curb" see u remind me of the wild coyote always chasin the "Bird" I never made pizza but i'll flip ur fucking head like "Bread" ...i aint a hair dresser nigga but i will put a clip in your "Forhead"... And the only time ur goin to be the best is after im..... "Dead"....

Word of Advice

Don't stop ur day job ..... cuz u garbage in "spitten"and half the shit u saying is probably "written" and not even yours ...
i leave dead in the streets ...next to the "Curb"
and.... i 'll shoot at you nigga like hunters shoot at
"birds,"....

watz good nigga u scare.




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i cant believe this nigga talk all that shit then chicken out
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stfu...your wack ass is droping 1st you dumb fuck.
drop your fucking verse then i will drop stop freeposting dumbass.

pz

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I didnt know i wasnt able to see your verse, i just found
out sorry for the wait, enjoy your lose.

ur flows wack, if u want, i'll take that chrome gat
treat ya frames like yay & bakin soda....i make bones crack
you winnin it aint happening cuz u take old rhymes
this couldnt be a close call..battlin on the same phone line
thinks hes off the wire, your right so apparently this is so
since when didnt herbs light on fire with their cherry tips smoked
yea I’m coming half-assed, fa’real this text shit bores me
plus if I exposed both cheeks, j will get too horny
You're a boring opponent..you're not favored & such..
and J tried to come sharp, but ended with a paper cut
fuck it your done with.... grace done want you no more
might as well take a leave, and no i dont mean the medicine

Voted For: J-Will

vote for j will,
had flow and he had some aight punches,
skano had the structure
open and closer was j will cuz his closer rhymed
and thats some shit him trying t read yor vese

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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SIGNED RAPPER YOU LOOKIN AT

iight good looking
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yea i need to work on my structer but thats it

wow you must be shitting me...oreo voted completly of rhyming and flow
this is one of the reasons why i dont like RV wow...

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