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11-24-04, 06:33 PM
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Limited Edition vs hipnoticz
IP: 5CC1 C246
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16 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 200 Posts to Vote Topic: The World ~Good Luck~ Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 11-27-04 at 06:33 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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11-24-04, 06:58 PM
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#2
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IP: 29FE 5E1A
hipnoticz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 06:58 PM.
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11-24-04, 09:46 PM
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IP: 29FE 5E1A
we aint here to start a revolution...
just maybe come up wit a solution... to ride tha planet of tha violent polution... an make time for ya fellow man... we all a part of gods big plan... through tha doom an gloom an poverty... human kinds gonna be come a aminority... we all lost souls trapped in hell hole as violent... escalates ten fold so dear mr blair i ahm traumatised... all i need is for you to authorise my freedom so dear mr blair dont you realy care about us cuz you always say jack this cuz you cant hack this young muthers no future for tha baby will we survive maybe maybe not our lifes flash befor our eyez this war we livin camera shots of tha news to do or to do not choose what to say couse we all wit this fucked up world... |
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11-25-04, 03:09 PM
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-04 03:09 PM.
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11-25-04, 03:51 PM
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
...Yo...the world is dark...just gotta take time to notice it... Full of spite...everynight...was this world God's image, His sight? Yeah right, even I despite I haven't seen half of it, people everywhere fight... Who is to blame? Who's name? Who targeted the plain into the World Trade? The son that God gave? Or was it Bush who sent those people to the grave? Let's point them out...the dictators of violence who know what tryanny's about... Witout a doubt, Bush is the number one tryant...no reason to even bout... The world is black...who is launching the attack for no reason in Iraq? No just reason it's wack...people hate this crap, Bush is just a handicap... Don't tell me I'm off topic...'cause it's far to late to even attempt to stop it... This is what the world's like...about this shit people everywhere pop shit... Greatness...comes in many different flavors...no difference against it... People go through the same shit everyday after the fuckin' plain hit... Many kids have no parents, and do they blame it on the terroists..? If I was in the position, I would blame it on Bush and not be embarrased... So is this the world we live in? Was this God's creation in the beginnin'? The point you're missin' my mission is to stop Bush from takin' women and children.... ...Quick... |
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11-25-04, 07:47 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 29FE 5E1A
.::uppin on this bicth to get some votes in plz::.
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11-29-04, 02:32 PM
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IP: 5CC1 C246
Uppin'...fuck this has been slept on haven't been on for 5 days and still no votes...
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11-29-04, 05:15 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 1AFC 52D0
.::uppin on this bicth to get some votes in plz::.
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11-29-04, 08:18 PM
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L.E
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IP: 5CC1 C246
Uppin' for fuckin votes on this...holy shit so fuckin slept on...
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11-29-04, 08:31 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
IP: 6A42 C334
we aint here to start a revolution...
just maybe come up wit a solution... to ride tha planet of tha violent polution... an make time for ya fellow man... we all a part of gods big plan... through tha doom an gloom an poverty... human kinds gonna be come a aminority... we all lost souls trapped in hell hole as violent... escalates ten fold so dear mr blair i ahm traumatised... all i need is for you to authorise my freedom so dear mr blair dont you realy care about us cuz you always say jack this cuz you cant hack this young muthers no future for tha baby will we survive maybe maybe not our lifes flash befor our eyez this war we livin camera shots of tha news to do or to do not choose what to say couse we all wit this fucked up world... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT FAM WORK ON DA FLOW AIIIGHT BUT....U NEED TO ELEVATE ON IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY I DIDNT SENSE THAT IN YA TOPICAL VERSE BUT U HAD DA FEELINGS AND EMOTIONS BUT IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY......U NEED THEM 2 THINGS ITS AN MUST FAM Full of spite...everynight...was this world God's image, His sight? Yeah right, even I despite I haven't seen half of it, people everywhere fight... Who is to blame? Who's name? Who targeted the plain into the World Trade? The son that God gave? Or was it Bush who sent those people to the grave? Let's point them out...the dictators of violence who know what tryanny's about... Witout a doubt, Bush is the number one tryant...no reason to even bout... The world is black...who is launching the attack for no reason in Iraq? No just reason it's wack...people hate this crap, Bush is just a handicap... Don't tell me I'm off topic...'cause it's far to late to even attempt to stop it... This is what the world's like...about this shit people everywhere pop shit... Greatness...comes in many different flavors...no difference against it... People go through the same shit everyday after the fuckin' plain hit... Many kids have no parents, and do they blame it on the terroists..? If I was in the position, I would blame it on Bush and not be embarrased... So is this the world we live in? Was this God's creation in the beginnin'? The point you're missin' my mission is to stop Bush from takin' women and children.... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA U HAD SOME MULTI'Z AND GOOD IMAGINARY....VERY CREATIVE ON THIS PART Many kids have no parents, and do they blame it on the terroists..? If I was in the position, I would blame it on Bush and not be embarrased... So is this the world we live in? Was this God's creation in the beginnin'? The point you're missin' my mission is to stop Bush from takin' women and children.... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA CLOSA I LIKED IT.........U HAD VOCAB........IMAGINARY..........CREATIVITY........ ....AND GOOD FLOW CONCLUSION- I THINK DIS GOES HANDS DOWN TO LIMIT EDITOIN WHICH HE HAD EVERY THING IN AN TOPICAL CATERGORY.......HIP U NEED TO WORK ON EVERY TOPICAL CATERGORY.INCLUDING...IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY....... THIS IS AN FEEDBACK IAM SORRY I DONT HAVE 200 POST
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12-10-04, 02:04 PM
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Uppin' for some fuckin' votes on this shit...this is the most slept on battle I have ever had.
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12-11-04, 08:00 PM
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
UPPIN' FOR FUCKIN VOTES! Fuck this is slept on like hell...FAVORS WILL BE RETURNED! VOTE FOR FUCK SAKES!
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12-11-04, 09:40 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
Voted For: Limited Edition
wow, this was a dope contest here, seriously I felt you both alot... Hypnotikz-- first shit Im seein from you, definately on point with it, i assume you from britain, and I think its cool you both hate the leaders of ur respective countries cuz they both suck  ... but yeah anyway I felt the way each went in the topic on a similar tip, and I think you both had a nice style in doing so, but I think Limited Edition had a more descriptive verse, he tied events to it that really got me feelin his shit... maybe its cuz I'm U.S but I just felt like included more in his verse descriptively... Vote L.E
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12-11-04, 09:44 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Limited Edition
well this was a one sided topical battle... hipnoticz came real weak your structure wasnt very good and your wordplay and imagery were horrible the only thing that was good about your verse was the vocabulary and it wasnt great just mediocre... limited edition i didnt know you were this dope at topicals this was pretty good... your imagery was on point decent structure some lines were a little stretched but nonetheless your verse was better than hip's so you got my vote.. your verse kinda reminded me of mosh by eminem pretty dope lol
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12-12-04, 12:23 AM
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
^^Honored by Flow's Mosh words.
Uppin' for some more votes on this...favors will be returned. |
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