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01-25-05, 07:29 AM
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: CD98 49E3
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
nice verses peeps but Wicked definately took this. Wickedclown: Ya verse flowed so good man, it was looking like a fuckin topical. That fat - mcdonalds thing was going at start, middle and end. Your punches were real good, some nice metas, nice vocab and decent structure. Easy to read and enjoyable too. -Long and full of quality. Best bar: "ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls" -Liking this for some reason loads. Pop Lotty: Nice verse bro, with some real good punches. Only reason you lost this is cos he had the volume of quality wen yours was in moderation. Ya opener was good and your close was sublime! Well done for making this red hot verse but oyu should have extended it. best bar: "Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine" -This is good, and your closer too. No hate Poppy, keep doing ya thing
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01-25-05, 10:41 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 7B25 12F1
Voted For: Pop Lotty
wicked ya verse was ok...but nothin hit hard......nothin at all, werk on ya drops son n rematch this cuz you have potential with ya punches but you lost... ,...lotty easily put your last 2 bars won you this battle ...nice perrsonal play n punch but overall ya drop was weak n infant like in complexity....... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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01-26-05, 06:29 PM
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#33
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Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN
IP: 5043 32F4
just checkin polls....uppin for these two cats.....
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01-26-05, 09:28 PM
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Straight From Da Lab!
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IP: 9605 F333
Voted For: Pop Lotty
Wack battle... Wicked Clown....your lines are too stretched, wack punches are here and there, and flow is wack. Are you actually dissing your opponent? Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state ^^^omg... but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale ^^^you've got to be kidding me... Pop Lotty, this is nothing like the shit you dropped in the final, you got some wack lines, but you took this because you're actually dissing your opponent. Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog.... ...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall ^^^kid that's just played But at least you're dissing him, and your punches, even though some are wack, but they're more direct... vote: Pop Lotty
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01-28-05, 11:28 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
WickedClown you had an aight verse there were some good parts in it a few good punches & personals however the flow and structure weren't as good as they normally are and that effected ya verse in a way...i felt it on the lyrics side of it and thats most important at the end of the day...it was a good verse bars i liked best were Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale ^ liked the repetition of the opener and closer not many prolly picked up on that though Pop better flow and structure definitely i'll give you that but punchwise wasn't really dope material a lot of bars were weak rhymes and they only work best in audio because of accentation and that harms ya verse i learned...also it was very unorthodox the layout which wasn't equal so some bars didn't flow well but it only happened in one bar real badly and it was this one Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence And also ya best punch which was good...but i think WC got this coz more was put into it than you...so he gets the vote. No open battles...therefore no 3 day limit 
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01-28-05, 12:06 PM
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IP: 34D2 D886
Voted For: Pop Lotty
@ wicked clown- some of your lines were really stretched, you had too many fat jokes, it was funny tho.. so here we go: Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state ^nice opener.. the chris rock and head of the state part was a filler to close the rhyme, not too hot for that part.. but eh, not bad for an opener its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game ^^hella stretched, not a good punch.. aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same u missed the other half of your bar.. but not bad first half full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky ^seen where u were going wit this, but u didn't deliver right.. so it turned out as a bad punch to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba again coulda been worded better, but a good attempt to name play.. stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug ^^aight nice personal.. not hard hittin tho ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls ^not a bad personal.. kinda funny too.. lol askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail ^^not a good bar, period.. wack fa real comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale ^wtf? where's the other half, and repeatin McDonalds again is not a good idea.. not creative Pop Lotty: came with str8 punches some were just decent.. but anywayz, here's the critique-- I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping ^aight opener, not hard hittin tho.. Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine ^LOL good personal and punch.. *dies* lmao He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it ^another good personal, coulda been worded betta Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence LMFAO another good personal.. second half nice meta good connection lol.. Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog.... ...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall closer kinda played.. so blah Aight, It's pretty clear who took this battle, Pop Lotty, took this almost by a landslide, if it wasn't for his closer which was played.. WickedClown, ur lines are too stretched and your content for your punches were still not worded right.. Pop Lotty took this.. good luck.. 1
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