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02-08-05, 08:53 PM | #16 | |||||||
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IP: A4E7 A821
Voted For: Underlined
This one is clear cut underline. This dude can't rap, and he probably wonders why He's a gay, crossdressing, wanksta, named Underlined YEA THIS ONE'S NO GOOD You can't touch me dude, it's like I'm Sound Proof I call you my son, then I'm a have to Ground You THAT ONE HAD POTENTIAL BUT FELL SHORT One rhyme will just simply wipe your crew It's like bedtime for you, lights out dude NAH TRY AGAIN When I'm around, you like to hide fo a while You scared? You ain't have a line in ya profile WAS THAT A PERSONAL? Do Rap Verse a favor, and go commit suicide Forgot to buckle up, I'm legit, you ain't true to ride BAD CLOSER BEST LINE: One rhyme will just simply wipe your crew It's like bedtime for you, lights out dude you cant be serious, ive already won this battle by far i mean cmon...look at your name...thats exactly what you are HE'S A METEOR? and i know i could take you...including your entire team cuz you made a thread in HHT askin for writing techniques... NICE PERSONAL, TAKES RESEARCH, YOUR THINKIN, I LIKE THAT but let me be brief...simply put your just a disaster when you drop your lines...the end result is just laughter SET UP SOUNDS LIKE A MULTI, DECENT PUNCH your shit is wack straight up but i aint full of hate its jus ya lines are outdated...like the black and white in your name DIDN'T QUITE RHYME AND PUNCH DIDN'T LAND when you retire...nobody would want an encore from you kid... speakin of encore, youll just fall off worse then the emcee in ya sig... NICE TRY ALTHOUGH EM DIDN'T REALLY FALL OFF v/underline no hate return the favor holla at ya boy the blackmage http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. mafia http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175459 me vs. illmatic
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02-08-05, 08:57 PM | #17 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: 8E69 B1F6
Still think im DR? You lost this straight up, get over it. px
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02-09-05, 02:50 PM | #18 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 866B 2D8E
Yeah I still think your a DRing bitch, I have my reasons
Uppin, good luck Underlined
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02-09-05, 04:26 PM | #19 | ||||
Ike
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IP: EB8D 9EAC
Voted For: Underlined
underlined........... you cant be serious, ive already won this battle by far i mean cmon...look at your name...thats exactly what you are he's a meteor?....ehh not a good opener....4/10 and i know i could take you...including your entire team cuz you made a thread in HHT askin for writing techniques... decent personal here...didnt hit all that well though...6/10 but let me be brief...simply put your just a disaster when you drop your lines...the end result is just laughter ehh ok....5/10 your shit is wack straight up but i aint full of hate its jus ya lines are outdated...like the black and white in your name decent....6/10 when you retire...nobody would want an encore from you kid... speakin of encore, youll just fall off worse then the emcee in ya sig... decent personal......7/10 overall...........28/50 Meteor.......... This dude can't rap, and he probably wonders why He's a gay, crossdressing, wanksta, named Underlined not good.....3/10 You can't touch me dude, it's like I'm Sound Proof I call you my son, then I'm a have to Ground You ok.....4/10 One rhyme will just simply wipe your crew It's like bedtime for you, lights out dude ok attempt at wordplay....5/10 When I'm around, you like to hide fo a while You scared? You ain't have a line in ya profile not too good...4/10 Do Rap Verse a favor, and go commit suicide Forgot to buckle up, I'm legit, you ain't true to ride not too great of a closer.....4/10 overall......20/50 underlined just came with harder and more complex punches......both had off structure.....no real wordplay from either....underline had an ok personal....but this basically just goes to underline for harder hitting punches throughtout the verse.....PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR UNDERLINE.....link in sig...thanks
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02-10-05, 08:29 PM | #20 | ||||
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This was feedback posted for MetEoR-K
IP: D5FE 7245
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02-10-05, 10:53 PM | #21 | ||||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Underlined
no contest, underlined takes this...........meteor K's verse was weak and terrible....i liked undelined's verse....it had a nice flow to it, and had a few multies, i also liked the personalz and punches, they killed em manye, meteor-k, bad verse mang, elevate sum and you'll have some potenital, but you need to elevate alot, espesially with word choice vocab multies and ounches.........underlined did better in every category.... v/underlined plz rtf, links in sig............................................... ......... |
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