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Voted For: Kesse

ok this battle was cool....better then some of the others i've read......

keese - u didnt have any multeis bu your shit flowed...and had good struct......and your punches were good there was played one...the flinstones line....but i like the ko'd so manytimes they have to click the next page shit that was tight.....


pictureperfect - u had a ok verse too.....you had good multies...and it flowed good...and had good structer.....you didnt really have any good punches just average shit but still coo.....


so this was hard to pick cause.....it was so close...but i have to give it to keese for the better punches...cause i'll always take punches over multies.....

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Voted For: Kesse

Kesse:
look at this guy's name and wonder, whats so "perfect"
shit, with that many losses, all i can "picture" is a reject
could've been worded better, and I say this mainly because it didn't rhyme
you couldnt make a dope verse, if you were smoking pure gold
been here over a year.....winning, still dont have a secure hold
decent personal
been in 45 matches, and you have more losses than your age
if i wrote down how many times you be KO'D...voters be clickin 'next page'
another decent personal, but didn't hit very hard
i'll rip this guy apart, literally leave him picking up his bones
and i dont need to worry, his rhymes more stoneage than the flinstones
blah, setup was good, 2nd line could've been worded better
so let me give you some adive, just stop, quit while your ahead
cause if your record gets any worse, this name should be but to be
what in the world?

pictureperfect2:
Homey you done, everyone’s level’s beyond you son
That’s why we have to look backwards to see where your from
decent opener
Kesse can’t ever do audio… it’s the trueth but never hurts
Cuz nothings beatin, I just hear boo’s accompany his verse
didn't hit hard, could've been worded better
Keep your lines they aint worth biting so, I never rob’em
Not seein light at the end of your tunnel isn’t just a minor problem
weak
U fat fuck don’t fight me like im a fuckin riot
This chubby bitch needs to learn im rapper and not a diet
ok, well this isn't a weight-loss forum...
Ya you sad bitch, looking back only time I’d check your status
You’ve showed ya crew lets in faggets, ya that’s the only thing established
decent personal, decent closer overall

Winner: Kesse, but neither of your drops were that good. You 2 know that this was honest, so there's not much need for me to explain this anymore.

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^ werd, it twas a perdy shitty drop, i made alot of spellin errors .......thanks for input, but upppin fo mo feed

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

Kesse
structure is good.. flow is good for the most part.. what is up with your rhyme scheme?.. perfect and reject dont rhyme.. ahead and but to be dont rhyme.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but most of it was played.. maybe one of your punches connected.. no good personals..

pictureperfect2
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. some of your punches connected.. your closer was tight as hell.. that was a good personal..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. pictureperfect2 had the better rhyme scheme.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. pictureperfect2 gets my vote..

VOTE - PICTUREPERFECT2

Voted For: Kesse

even tho u aint rhyme at times....4 some reason i was feelin ur verse more....the punches you had hit harder than pictures.....the next page line waz nice.....good battle
picture....ive seen u come better than this.....add some understandibility(makin up words) because we wont know what your talkin about unless we saw him before...you were talkin about his appearence when the voters may have not seen him...but vote goes to kesse 1

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