Voted For: rooq

rooq had tha cleaner verse, came wit punches that connected pretty good on this dude here
other dude's verse:self-glorification, we tryin' to shame tha other nigga, not sit here an' make ya self look like a king

rooq had them nice multi's w/ internal rhyme, hard hits, an' personals
Hold-a-tec to mah neck and you'd still not be a threat/
this bitch Chasin-Respect by tryin to Slay-me-in-Text?/
fav line^^^

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Lyrical Crook

thanks for tha votes/feedback...armada do you mean it'd be easier to read if i put spaces between each pair of lines?

e.g.

i'll fill this fool With-Holes Imposed by Lead-Prose/
wid Deft-Flows, i'm known to have Left-Foes in their Death-Throes/

Phive knows he couldn't step to me with his Best-Shows/
so lay low bitch and stick to gettin yer dick blown by Text-Hoes/

Phives lines Ain't-Tight, they tha most stretched on this site/
i'll have you Take-Flight, then snipe you down from Great-Heights/

....or are mah multis punctuation confusin?? let me know bro..

also.."personals gonna give it ti phive he dropped the name routine on rooq n rooq didnt seem to focus on personals"...i didn't get what ya meant by that cos phive didn't mention me once in his verse...

anywayz..its all good...thanks for takin tha time to vote and give us feedback!

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yo fuck this man th9is is bull shit

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Phive Is standing Tall

Voted For: rooq

Aii Im Not gonna say alot but .....

Phive

I Dont Like ya structure at all I think You should jus post a regular verse and leave all the phancy spacinga out of ya verse .....To me You came Weak ....You hade some line where i was like ,,,,,..Damn he couldve done way betta than that Like your fiirst Bar was a big mistake becuase automatically ppl are gonna stop reading bcuz you didnt open up strong enough But Still Like i said ya verse jus wasnt on target it shouldve been alot more betta than that But ......
So you Dont get my vote

Rooq
I Like ya style You hade some very good lines that made me Laugh .....Scared lol All : and alot of other emotions I Think My favorite bar was
who'd want to "lay phive" when dudes got No-Penis?/
gift-wrap this battle and bitch still Won't-Seize-This
Jus one of my fav bars but you did very well and thats why u Take this battle With Much Ease

HEY!

RTf In The link in My sig i Only Have one battle please rtf

Thanx

whats up with you...you got a vote didn't yer?

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vote yer bastads......................................

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noby ever votes on this fuckin site upppppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn this battle n MINE BELOW MY SIGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin fo some votesssssssssssssss playas

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Phive Is standing Tall

Voted For: phive



lyrics like yours might leave people gaspin,

thats cuz they cant breath when theyre laughin,

gay shit u took that line from wanadieniga

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: rooq

rooq

i'll fill this fool With-Holes Imposed by Lead-Prose/
wid Deft-Flows, i'm known to have Left-Foes in their Death-Throes/
Phive knows he couldn't step to me with his Best-Shows/
so lay low bitch and stick to gettin yer dick blown by Text-Hoes/<< NICE OPENER, GOOD FLOW
Phives lines Ain't-Tight, they tha most stretched on this site/
i'll have you Take-Flight, then snipe you down from Great-Heights/<<DECENT
beatin me won't happen like nymphos sayin No-to-Sex/
Hold-a-tec to mah neck and you'd still not be a threat/<<HEARD B4
this bitch Chasin-Respect by tryin to Slay-me-in-Text?/
i'll strike tha Nape-of-his-Neck n leave this kid wrecked/<<IIGHT
cos i thrive on fryin snide bitches like phive alive/
saliva drippin as i drive knives through his sides/<<NICE PUNCH
who'd want to "lay phive" when dudes got No-Penis?/
gift-wrap this battle and bitch still Won't-Seize-This/
Fact-Is you well Practiced at tha art of tha Crap-Dis/
you only unchallenged at forumalating Wackness/
this Phive-is-Fakin, actin like he's No-Counterfeit/
mah Rhymes-will-Break-Him, fact is he's Now-Found-Defeat.<< IIGHT CLOSURE

LIKED UR PUNCHES
GOOD STRUCTURE
EASY 2 READ
PRETTY GOOD ELEVATION
OVERALL NICE VERSE
8.5/10

phive

lyrics like yours might leave people gaspin,

thats cuz they cant breath when theyre laughin,<< MEH OPENER

you dont even have enuf battles to be called a has been,

Why battle g, why not rap in open mic

you beatin me is like tryin ta fuck a dyke,<<DYKE AND GAY PUNCHES R PLAYED

its not happenin its just too hard,

clean up ya structure kid, and put on some right guard,<<ATTEMPTED PUNCH

yo shit stinks worse than mexicans and toe tags,

when you walk by people, they say look at those fags,<<PLAYED

i lyrically make mince meat outta ya brain,

when i spit its toxic like acid rain,<<OK

makin niggaz fear me cuz theyre little bitches,

i hit harder than kamikazis in an aiplane,<<ABOVE LINE DOESNT EVEN RHYME

my lyrics are hard ta chew like beef jerky,

this kids name sounds like he fled from turkey,<<NO!

time ta close ya dream, and freeze ya brain like ice cream,

make ya blood green, hit with precision, nice and clean

its over kid Quit starin at the screen,<<AVERAGE CLOSURE


overall weak verse
not 2 many punches
work on elevatin more
try 2 get many more punches at him
pretty weak
6/10

no hate
my v/rooq


ay yall cud u please check out my battle vs. thekid523 and showtime
please we bof need feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
please rtf on da battles
holla back!

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man i been away for 3 weeks and this still aint finished

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wooo...got mah comp back....now...erm...what now??

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some day i'll get bored of uppin this wack shit...

Voted For: rooq

Aiyyo, lol Da Fuck Wuz Dat Phive?

Letz C Here Yall..

i'll fill this fool With-Holes Imposed by Lead-Prose/
wid Deft-Flows, i'm known to have Left-Foes in their Death-Throes/
Phive knows he couldn't step to me with his Best-Shows/
so lay low bitch and stick to gettin yer dick blown by Text-Hoes/
Phives lines Ain't-Tight, they tha most stretched on this site/
i'll have you Take-Flight, then snipe you down from Great-Heights/
beatin me won't happen like nymphos sayin No-to-Sex/
Hold-a-tec to mah neck and you'd still not be a threat/
this bitch Chasin-Respect by tryin to Slay-me-in-Text?/
i'll strike tha Nape-of-his-Neck n leave this kid wrecked/
cos i thrive on fryin snide bitches like phive alive/
saliva drippin as i drive knives through his sides/
who'd want to "lay phive" when dudes got No-Penis?/
gift-wrap this battle and bitch still Won't-Seize-This/
Fact-Is you well Practiced at tha art of tha Crap-Dis/
you only unchallenged at forumalating Wackness/
this Phive-is-Fakin, actin like he's No-Counterfeit/
mah Rhymes-will-Break-Him, fact is he's Now-Found-Defeat

Dat, Vs.....

lyrics like yours might leave people gaspin,

thats cuz they cant breath when theyre laughin,

you dont even have enuf battles to be called a has been,

Why battle g, why not rap in open mic

you beatin me is like tryin ta fuck a dyke,

its not happenin its just too hard,

clean up ya structure kid, and put on some right guard,

yo shit stinks worse than mexicans and toe tags,

when you walk by people, they say look at those fags,

i lyrically make mince meat outta ya brain,

when i spit its toxic like acid rain,

makin niggaz fear me cuz theyre little bitches,

i hit harder than kamikazis in an aiplane,

my lyrics are hard ta chew like beef jerky,

this kids name sounds like he fled from turkey,

time ta close ya dream, and freeze ya brain like ice cream,

make ya blood green, hit with precision, nice and clean,

its over kid Quit starin at the screen!!!


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Shitz A No Contest, Punchez, Creativity, Wordplay, Disses, The Shit Wuz On Point An Goez 2 Da Homeboy Rooq, Holla At Me Rooq, Good Lookin' Out Bro'

Hit Up Da Battlez In Mah Signature, Peace!

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