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Voted For: Golden Dayz

hmmm, this was a cool battle

i was feeling golden's more though...although he lacked a little in emotion, the imagery was awesome and i really like the originality of the topic he chose, really had me involved with his verse....lady, yours was good, thought you had better emotion, tough idea to make work effectively i think, because i think it kinda took away from the overall enjoyment of the piece, jumping back and forth, it was neat and creative....but i think if you had more lines you coulda made it work better....just too short of a piece to do that idea with....

so yeah, both had nice verses, original..but im going with golden for overall enjoyment.....keep up to both though

v/The Revalation

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Voted For: Golden Dayz

Aii This Is what I Think

The Revelation
Aii Man Your Images that you paint With Your words where off The chain it was The shit forreal Man You stayed on Topic The full 100% way of the time and your drop was so intellegent man Th evocabulary was fine no words that i havent heard of LOL but the way that you combine certain words with such feelings is amazing man so all i can say is that you have a really intellegent drop man thats why ima give you the vote
RTF In The Link In My Sig

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Voted For: Golden Dayz

this battle was tight

Lady Fiya.....
i thought you had a real nice way of approaching this battle, the topic wasn't all too difficult and yet you managed to drop a verse that had a complex way of lookin at it.....i liked how the verse also had a sort of relaxed feel about it, the imagery of the verse was nice, you really brought the topic to life....ya flow was on point throughout and the vocabs in there was nice to........overall i give it 8/10


Golden Dayz.....
you had a decent take on the topic to, your structure was pretty much flawless and it was nice how you split it into the three different sections.......you went the way of describing an event in ya verse, you did it well and i was feelin the verse, a nice piece of imagery......your vocabs was nice to and your flow was near perfect.....the thoughts you put into the verse to go with the whole event was a nice touch, not like some who just try to tell a story about sumthin....overall i give this an 8.5/10


yes, it was that close.......
overall i didn't expect either of these drops based on the topic, both took an original way of approaching the battle and they twisted the topic with complex pieces that stayed on the topic....both had nice vocabs and feeling in their verses but overall i think Golden barely edged it out.

V/ - Golden Dayz

RTF!! on this battle!!! don't and i will have my vote removed!!! cuz ya know how sum ppl dont both returnin the favour!!!

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Voted For: Golden Dayz


The Rev
Nice Verse Man Alot Of Meta's Here Some Decent Shit Hommie Came Good, Structure Was Good You Had Nice Vocabulary In here Which Was Dope, No Rhyme Scheme But It Was Aiight Man, You Had Good Wordplay Here Alot Of Shit In Here Was Dope Strong Closer Man You Had A Good Ammount Of Vocabulary That Shit's Nice, Personally This Is One Of Your Best

Lady F
Nice Shit Shorty You Had Some Good Vocabualr yAs Wll Alot Of Meta's Which Was Good To Find, Structure Was Decent, Close Battle Girl I Didn't Know Yo uWas Topical Wow, You Had Alot Of Good Menaing In Your Verse Deep Shit On The Real This Was A Good Piece, Girl Close Battle But Shit Nice Dro pFrom Both

My Vote Is To-The Rev

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Um T.T.I

good looks.. good job, rev. you did very well. if you want you can get this close. you got this by KO, congratulations. Damn topicals lol

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upping for you......... so we can close this for your sake.. so you can shut up about it, i tried to be a good sport, you just getting on my nerves now. so uppin..........................

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