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06-02-05, 06:48 AM | #16 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
Voted For: M-Eazy
When RV decides whose hot you at the bottom of the pot I’ll kill you before I son you, like my name was Scott * .... lo decent opener with the wordplay and meta, but its alil SG U couldn’t spit hotshh, if you were tha man himself** And you comfortable with failing, cause you defend ya self ..... aight, ok Dissin you is too easy, like slut hoes on tha corner You could be a vet, I’ll take ya spot like u was Kurt Warner*** ... this bar was decent but not all that funny or hard hittin Saying you could win me. Spf…that’s a PROBABLY NOT I’ll shove a gat down ya throat so you could really down shots ..lol. nice line, funny, but i dont really feel that gangsta shit... but u only used it to get that punch out This guys a wanksta…white witta du rag cap? Even if yo knee-grows (negros), you still wont be black ... ehhh not reallu feelin this...... ive seen that "knee-grows" shit, and im not talkin about in another battle, just in general So run and tell tha site, how quick my 5 votes coming I’m tha bully in this verse, and I’m taking ya lunch money .......weaknesss u had a decent verse but i think u fell of at the end......... decent use of wordplay to make for a harder punch at the end. but u had a few that werer just thrown in there with no good setups or anythin, and some was a lil self-glorification, altho thats not too bad... Brains You Dont Have...Either 'Jeans Onya Mind'...Or Ya Thoughts Jus Sag M Suffers From Jet-Lag...Mad? His Pussies Ancient...Keep Fuckin Old Hags! ...... fake personal, ur shits alil stretched but good flow Told Him He Stupid...He Cried 4 A 'Shot Of Genius'...Got Einstein From Cupid When Niggas Hear His Music.....They Cotton-Swab.....Ears Filled Wit Q-Tips! ..... lol, thios was decent, i see potential M-Eazy aka Dickhead...Been Lame! Couldnt 'BEE-SMART' Wit A 'Buzz Brain' He Lost His Senses Last Yr??.....No Wonder Ya Raps Dont FEEL Ashamed! ...... nah, not feelin this bar, coulda been worded better M I'm Serious!...Shits Dead Real....Compared 2 Me, You Really Have No Skill! Eazy Your Diseased...If U Think U Signed....Must Be A Hypochondriac Deal! ..... lol, this was pretty creative and decent Give Me A Reason Not To Smoke This Ho......Blatantly Dispose His Photos Shit..I Drop Loads....Like 'Throat Submission'....Dis Fagget CHOKE-HOLDS! ok closer..... it was the best worded bar of ur verse i see some potential for u to be real good but u needa find some personals and harder punches to throw in there to get that "ohhhhh!" effect from ur verse........ right not u just have bars with alotta metas and shit, but with no hard hittin punch or personal to finish it off V/M-Eazy |
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06-02-05, 10:12 AM | #17 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
3-0=KO...this shit is ova...Good battle ack..Stay up homie!
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