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06-17-05, 10:23 AM | #1 | |||
Skadoosh!
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King Solo vs Wayne
IP: 477B D81A
Battle Rules:
14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No Dickriding No Bullshit 3-0 = TKO Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 06-17-05 at 11:23 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. DQ'ed.. went over line limit by 2 lines This Battle Is Now Closed
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06-17-05, 10:25 AM | #2 | ||||||
Guest
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IP: 477B D81A
King Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 10:25 AM.
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06-17-05, 10:26 AM | #3 | ||||||
Guest
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IP: 3631 0E72
Wayne has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 10:26 AM.
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06-17-05, 10:56 AM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
...SPILL-NINES And CHILL-SPINES With ILL-RHYMES! What You THINK-IM-FAKIN'? Your Spinal LINK-IS-BREAKIN' Will My INK-IS-MAKIN' Even The Toughest SHRINK-TO-SHAKIN'!...
...Your The King? Well Your Gettin' Your THROWN-JACKED! Listen, My TONES-FACT So Get Your OWN-ACT Before I Rip Your Cartilage Out And Call Myself BONE-STACKED!... ...This Coward can't EFFECT-MY-VEINS, Blow Gats To COLLECT-YOUR-BRAINS And Attack Untell RESPECT-REMAINS So EXPECT-SOME-PAIN!... ...I'm BLASTIN'-YOU-QUICK While I'm PASSIN'-THIS-TRICK, You Just ASKIN'-FOR-DICK So No Ones ACTIN'-ON-SHIT!... ...I PACK-MACKS And RACK-RAPS To ATTACK,-PERHAPS My MACK-CAPS At These WACK-CATS Untell I Have "World Domination" Like I Was To JACK-MAPS!... I've agreed-TO mislead-you To A Path Were You bleed-blue And I feed-you Glocks Tell Your "Sick Of BLOWIN" Like YOU Had The weed-FLU/ ...If You No-Show Then Dats Ya ASS-IGNORIN'-FATE, Cause Your Gettin Fuked Unwillingly Like SAJITORY-RAPE!... ...How Many Victums? I'll Make You STALL-AT-THE-MATH, Shoot Your Feet And Make You CRAWL-THREW-THE-PATH So 'witness' The 'sickness' FALL-TO-MY-WRATH!... Finisher: .My War PASSION-STAYS With A Heat To Leave Ya RATIONS-BLAZED, PASS-THE-BLABE! And Slap 'Thesickness{my dick}' Across The Face Like AFTER-SHAVE!... |
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06-17-05, 12:02 PM | #5 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
* 6 bars but still 14 lines, count 'em....i didn't break the rules*
This battle ain’t nuthin personal, call it a friendly exhibition.. (1) Cuz why erase ya name, its already fucked beyond recognition.. Ya lyrics lack flavour, cud be there’s no ‘hot sauce’ in ya lines.. Dude’s still a ‘jedi rap master’ though, the way he ‘forces his rhymes’.. ‘Gets his lines for cheap’..but herb ghost writerz don’t ask for much cash.. But ya still make ‘Detroit Stand Up’……………………………………… ………………………so they got better aim when hittin you with trash.. Wayne don’t throw punches, he already hung up his gloves.. Now he’s full into masochism cuz gettin’ beat down is his one true love.. Askin to spit ’32 lines’…come on, are you seriously trying to bore me.. I mean why give me 32 lines, I only need one word to tell ya life story..(WACK) Wayne you’re a herb…even my basic vocabulary gets ya mind clouded.. “When ya on top people take shots’…………………………………… …… ………………….maybe that’s why wayne has to make his bars crowded.. * (14) ---------------------------- - there is a personal in every bar, you moan about explanations, so if ya want to see how it is a personal just look at all the shit it shows when he posts something. * one explanation – people down shots of liquor at bars, I’m basically sayin no one takes shots at wayne’s bars so he aint on top. |
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06-17-05, 12:09 PM | #6 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin good shit no hate
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06-18-05, 10:13 AM | #7 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
uppin this shit..................lets get some votes ppl..........
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06-18-05, 01:29 PM | #8 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
...........................vote fuckaz........................
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06-19-05, 05:17 PM | #9 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
vote you lazy fuckaz.....................................
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06-20-05, 10:43 AM | #10 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
...............fucking vote now bitchez...................
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06-20-05, 12:20 PM | #11 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: King Solo
Explanation Flow- Solo Only bcuz I could Read what Was typed LOL Punchez- Solo ......His Punchez def toke over this battle Wayne You lackd Good concept & Wordplay in Yo Punchez Personals- Althjough Both of you used personals Im gonna give This one to solo Bcuz his personals Was Intellegently Worded and used from My piont of view Multies- None really used If i gave it to anyone itd be Wayne Vocab- Noone Originality- Aii Originality Goes to solo he Really Kept it real in His verse he didnt use any played concept and he didnt use any played Wordplay so .... my v./Solo RTF In any battle link in my sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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06-20-05, 12:43 PM | #12 | ||||
B.I.G.
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IP: F2F7 D6F2
Voted For: King Solo
GOOD: Flow - Tie Structure - King Solo Punchlines - Tie vocab - Tie Wordplay - Wayne Nameplay - Tie BAD: forced Rhymes - no Forced Multis - Wayne Non Sence - No CREATIVITY Theme Battle - no Creative Punches - King Solo creative multi's - Tie PERSONALS: Both personals were hard hittin, very good shit from both, i'm impressed, but in this case King Solo's wuz more creative... OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: King Solo Closing: Tie COMMENT: Both battles wuz good, almost a tie but on here Wayne's Structure wuz fucked up... personals and punchlines I gotta say its a tie.... mutli's and wordplay tied but again King Solo had more creativity... Wayne forced some multi's so there goes the battle: King Solo 9/10 Wayne 8/10 V/ King Solo RTF!!!! for more honest votes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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06-20-05, 03:24 PM | #13 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
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06-21-05, 08:49 AM | #14 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppppppppin
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06-21-05, 10:30 AM | #15 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: A6B3 421B
i am wayne and i am a bitch
i cry becuz ppl vote against me i have not realised yet that i suck ass and couldn't win a battle if i tried |
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