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Old 08-12-05, 12:13 AM   #1
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PhreeNapdizzle vs S.P

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Old 08-12-05, 12:14 AM   #2
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S.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-05 12:14 AM.
 
Old 08-12-05, 12:32 AM   #3
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Old 08-12-05, 12:33 AM   #4
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Welcome to my battle stage, ya name is S.P?/
Im phree, im in rattled raged so quick! inter-est me/
You come to reverse my verse and hurts no doubt/
not that it works, but the fact that you straight jerk-in out/
if you really were the best, you should be resistant /
u like a bird in a nest, who needs assistance/
for instance.. i noticed u bawl out to get votes/
u probly travel the distance and crawl around to take notes!/
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Old 08-12-05, 01:41 AM   #5
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ayo nigga from chi-town where niggas like you would get shot and laided down*
i'll bury u in da ground cause dats we chicagoians get down cause will put u so deep u wont be found*
u dont punch or cut cause dat ma style but i will put .9 pound slug in ya ass and have u say ow*
now u wine'n like a lil bitch cuz ya ass got hit then ya pass out and ya and wakes and look around*
guess where ya ass at bitch........... ya in motha fuck'n clouds*
now dead and u on da milk carton miss'n and ya family ya is now bitch'n they cant find u chopped in ma kitcken*
now dat ya life has ended cause god aint give u a second chance cause life has ben suspended*

aight start ta vote
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Old 08-12-05, 01:46 AM   #6
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If my verse insnt understood.. ill explain here cuz i forgot to do that..

You come to reverse my verse and hurts no doubt/
not that it works, but the fact that you straight jerk-in out/
(hes gonna try to make his verse better than mine, and it hurts to see that its not working, hes just making an ass (or jerk) out of himself..)

if you really were the best, you should be resistant /
u like a bird in a nest, who needs assistance/
(the best people are resistant.. nothing can hurt them or beat them.. baby birds that live in their nests need constant attention and assistance from there mother (in this case, from n e 1)..)

for instance.. i noticed u bawl out to get votes/
u probly travel the distance and crawl around to take notes!/
(when i say bawl out to get votes, its more like when he says return the favor.. i voted for u.. do the same for me.. his sig is changed nowadays.. he probly crawls around (or snoops around) to other emcees to take notes on how to rap)


Uneeded explanations but they are there if u need them..
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Old 08-12-05, 01:48 AM   #7
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good verse.. good luck on the votes.. LEts see them comming Poeple!!
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Old 08-12-05, 03:37 AM   #8
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drop us some votes ya'll uppin
if u dont understand some shit dont fuckin vote
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Old 08-12-05, 03:58 AM   #9
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o yea by the way nice drop yoself
let da best man win and i did extend ma lines
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Old 08-12-05, 04:04 AM   #10
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Lets get this battle started.. get some votes in with reall feedback
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Old 08-12-05, 12:34 PM   #11
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Voted For: S.P

S.P stop using ya so much lol. Both of u guys need to punch first of all, but my vote went to S.P cuz he punched a lil, and tried to punch more. Battles need punches, remember that. Please vote on my battles in my sig..thanks
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Old 08-12-05, 01:31 PM   #12
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Thanx fo da vote
uppin ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 08-12-05, 06:37 PM   #13
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uppin dis !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
S.p uppin
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Old 08-12-05, 10:08 PM   #14
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uppinn ya'll need da votes help me out
and also 3 ko
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Old 08-13-05, 12:05 AM   #15
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Voted For: S.P

Phree-OK...bad.All your bars were simplistic.No complexity whatsoever.FLow was meh...nothing special about it.get rid of the "/"...just makes it look newbish.And in the interest line and jerkinit out lines...why did you put hypens for?If it was wordplay..then ya...but it wasn't.And get some decent personals to ridicule your oppenent..don't just use generic punches.

S.P.-Man...flow was way better than Phree's...but you also lacked punches.You were also basic and lacked complexity.And why did you put the stars(*) when you didn't explain anything?..Anyways..you get my vote for actually seeming to diss and having a non-newb structure.

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