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Old 08-13-05, 10:05 PM   #1
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Batman vs shadow_

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Old 08-13-05, 10:07 PM   #2
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Old 08-13-05, 10:23 PM   #3
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ayo...im the only one here thats icy cool,with ma rymes im gonna murder this fool

i dont know what gave you the idea u could match up to me,all the producers think that to their success im the key

ayo i got this bitch on lock down,his pops wouldnt give head so he had to frown

im like the Muhommad Ali of rappin,i could merk this bitch while im nappin

"i float like a butterfly and sting like a bee,"man u shouldve never tried to battle me

ill have u runnin home to mother pissin ur pants,even she laughs at ur wannabe rymes and how u try to dance

you should go back to workin ur stret corner every night and day,i dont mean hustlin i mean bein gay

every man that walks by u would give a long gaze,yur about to go down in a fiery blaze

u should just quit while u got the chance,ill go easy on ya since i got in ya girls pants

woops u werent suppose to know,my bad/now u gonna have ya period and pms,heres a maxxi pad

gathom is already dark so we dont need no shadow,sorry to dissapoint u but all u can say is "oh"

i got u so frustated u knock ur head off the wall,be careful playin pocket pool u might knock in the 8 ball
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Old 08-14-05, 12:19 AM   #5
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i drop my shit here its time for you to panic
when im finished your diminished you sink like titanic

if you need sum help why don you call robin?
get his head out from your cock n make him stop bobbin

you steroided up but ill crush you like ecstacy
what i drop now aint even the best of me

ye im white but all i need is 1 mic
1 light 1 fight you think you won right

wel you aint cuz you kno shadows cant be hurt
so fuck the main course im givin just deserts

why waste the legend on the likes of justice
your lack of talant will just make us all disgusted

so dont hurt yourself tryna make me look dumb
cuz your shits some gay shit while my shits succumb

so while you drop your shit to a kid thas thirteen
keep reminding yourself that im the beta emcee
 
Old 08-14-05, 12:42 AM   #6
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ight somone vote.. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease dam 8 more.... there
 
Old 08-14-05, 01:21 AM   #7
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uhm easiest vote ever? yes.

Batman: you had no personals. your flow and strucutre was horribly streched. Keep it simple. You gotta bring at least something that disses the opponet. You had self glory too. If you need help go read some tutorals or something. Or listen to some diss tracks by rappers and shit. I appreciate you battling though.

Shadow. Well you had pretty good flow. The titanic line was eh. The robbin like was meh ok it was a personal which I like. the one mic line was just confusing lol The desert line was self glory. The following line was bad. The last line was sorta ok it was an authentic battle verse I'll give you that but nothing special that made me go OOO and shit.

But you still win for being better.
 
 


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