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Old 08-21-05, 09:06 PM   #16
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This was feedback posted for Drakel

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Old 08-21-05, 10:26 PM   #17
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lmlo, please don't think your verse was good....please.
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Old 08-21-05, 10:30 PM   #18
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lmlo, please don't think your verse was good....please.

lmao n u actually think yours was you have a d/r crew but w/e ima let u be cocky in let u think you on some illmatic shit
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Old 08-21-05, 11:03 PM   #19
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Voted For: Mysteri

u get my vote...the text for dummy line then followed up by the sex to money line was was ended it for me...both were good..but that line made the decision for me good shit both of u drakel jus got knocked out wit sum bangin word play no hate
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Old 08-22-05, 12:26 AM   #20
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lmao n u actually think yours was you have a d/r crew but w/e ima let u be cocky in let u think you on some illmatic shit


1. you had no personals
2. you talked about my dick inaccurately
3. d/r....well i see you brought your pussy riders, yvonne, who hasn't been active in ages, and sucks
4. im not saying mine was amazing, but its hella better than yours.
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Old 08-22-05, 12:41 AM   #21
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1. you had no personals
2. you talked about my dick inaccurately
3. d/r....well i see you brought your pussy riders, yvonne, who hasn't been active in ages, and sucks
4. im not saying mine was amazing, but its hella better than yours.

ok the jokes on mah pic hella played the old quote wow n i said the word dick twice i wasnt talkin about ya dick da whole time y wud i nothin that impress me
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Old 08-22-05, 01:19 AM   #22
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Voted For: Mysteri

Alright Mysteri pretty much took this battle with ease. Due to the fact i think Drakel underestimated Mysteri and was clownin around. Mysteri Basicly came harder in all categories espcial punches. Drakels Lines were stretched in my POV and his structure in some parts were way off.

Punches-Mysteri
Struture-Mysteri
Content-Mysteri
Personals-Drakle

Aint much to say Just Drakle give it ya all in every battle and dont sleep on people. Mysteri just keep doin ya thang and da both of yall just keep elevatin

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Old 08-22-05, 01:24 AM   #23
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Old 08-22-05, 10:24 AM   #24
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this is probly the gayest battle i've ever seen...
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Old 08-22-05, 10:44 AM   #25
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BQ:
Not a good verse here, alot of your rhymes were horribly worded and lacked a good solid personal, punches were OK in some places, nuthin spectacular in my opinnon.....Creativly you could of been alot more solid with your concepts, overrall i wasnt feeling your verse like i thought i would, I know you can do better.

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Good verse man...Personals were alot stronger and more hard hitting than BQ's...creativity cant be faulted, and your complex wordplay got the better of her, Each bar was worded alot better, so it flowed alot easier as you are reading, a good drop man....

Punches=Drakel
Striucture=both of y'all (besides BQ's wording of a few bars)
Mettas= none really
Personals=Drakel

Highlight of the battle was Drakels ''Hauling ass'' line, that was real nice.

My vote goes too drakel for a more consistant verse.

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Old 08-22-05, 01:29 PM   #26
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Highlight of the battle was Drakels ''Hauling ass'' line, that was real nice.

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ha the line i used in a battle the line is played be serious
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Old 08-22-05, 01:47 PM   #27
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n den ur tephlon ur on mah blacklist u cant vote on mah battles
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Old 08-22-05, 02:27 PM   #28
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Voted For: Mysteri

im gonna have to go wit Mysteri on this one basically because i thought drakel was came basic wit the punches just focusin' on the fact that shes a girl/woman (i aint sure! LOOOL). a few of your lines were quite stretched aswell drakel which also messed up your flow a little bit, whereas mysteri kept a nice flow goin for her verse.
there wasn't actually that much wrong wit your verse though drakel its just you mostly had quite non-creative punches.
aswell, mysteri i i thought you came weak in the 5th bar (the scrabble thing)

nice battle overall, but mysteri took this i rekon
 
Old 08-22-05, 06:13 PM   #29
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Old 08-22-05, 06:42 PM   #30
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Lmao at the voters on this. Obviously either PM'd or asked to vote for on AIM, they are all newbs and don't know what punches are. Drakel whored this battle. Easily.
 
 


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