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Old 02-03-06, 08:30 PM   #16
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^^ WTF!?!?!

Vocabs and structure have fuck all to do with a battle, and our structures were both sorta the same. And what the fuck, complexity only comes into play if it is a topical battle. And how did he have more personals, he didn't have a single one apart from that fake shit about me biting in the closer, which I never did. And I had at least 4 personals in there. Get the fuck outta here with that faggot vote.
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Old 02-03-06, 09:25 PM   #17
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

Okay now THIS is a battle. It was hard to pick a winner but I think I got one. Journey with me.

King Solo



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Gimme unlimited lines… but I won’t take long to put ya in ure place
Cuz nobody wants to see ya ugly mug……………
……they just wanna smash it in ure face!!

Decent opener. Took me a while to get it but afterwards it was cool.

Kid’s a disgrace… really, this battle should be a doozy
I’ll fuck Steel up, without cutting Shaq from the movie *

Funny. Nice.

I don’t care what planet ya from, this shit won’t be painless
Ya say ya from Earth huh, I’ll still put my foot up Uranus

Pretty basic

I’m a fuck ya CPU… and ya bars, see how I killed ‘em
Cuz I modem down so hard, I crashed ure entire system

Not the greatest punch.

See the quote in ya sig, yea.. it’s a sad thing, right ?
But the real sadness is……
……it’s the most attention u’ve had on this site

Haha. Got me laughin with this one.

Don’t sweat this, I’ll wreck ya defences... this’ll be a shut out
I’ll leave voters hangin’ by a thread, to see ya get knocked the fuck out

Meh.

Ya girl can get it to… I’ll fuck that bitch real fast..
..and make her bedrock so hard… the flintstones’ll sue my ass!!

Bedrock and Flintstones is kinda played as a punch but this was decent.

I’m sending you to fame… so ColdSTEEL can live the dream
..cuz I’ll put ya face on TV… nah, I’ll just smash it through the screen

lol Nice one there.

Man up sucka… fuck it, this broke ass bitch can just get bent
I mean hell, ColdSTEEL’s…………just so he can pay his rent

Nice. Nice.

I said I wouldn’t take long, so now I’m gonna take the goods
Now I’m done draggin shit on, I can bury Cold in the woods

Not a good closer.

ColdSTEEL

King's Respectable Head With Street Cred?,Nope,He Dreams It Up Here!
I Told Em"Pack His Shit!",But The Fag Said "Bring It Up The Rear!"

Hahaha. Funny shit.

Seen Enough Queers,But His Drops The Sweetest.
See I Got a Twin Personality....
...King Would Have To Drop From The Womb To De~Fetus!

Ill wordplay ther. Nice punch.

He Not The Weakest,But Its De~Grading How Ur Left Behind.
I'll Say Outtah 1 Threw 10....
..........................................Your Ratings Be~Nign To Mine!

Wow that's some deep thought lol.

Im Shootin Bee-Lines This Time,Just To Stop His Drive.
Come On Solo Was Meant To Get Ripped,Look! His Drop Just A~Rive!

Though the tense of the verb is fucked it works. lol Nice.

Really,King's A Hero On This Site,Im A Villian Tryna Snicker..
..At the Fact That...
..His Bars Are Fantastic 4 Being Curt,Which Will Make Me Victor!

Hmm. I see where you were goin. Word it better.

I'll End This Quick with Swift Hits That'll Knock Him Off The Feet.
I Thought JTR was A Cheater..
...Until King Bit Off-ice And Choose To Take De~Ceit.

Pretty good closer.

Overall: I felt this was a raw battle. Both had nice wordplay and punches, I think Cold came more technical, which tipped me to him. KS still came raw but CS was just more technically sound here. Word.

v/ ColdSTEEL
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Old 02-03-06, 09:31 PM   #18
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This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL

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Old 02-04-06, 10:34 AM   #19
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Wow @ these votes. Amazing!!
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Old 02-04-06, 10:24 PM   #20
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Uppin.

An Dont Get Mad King...Cuz The Votes aint in Ur Favor...2-2..Lol....You Thought Ez win Didnt it?

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Swaying an shit..You Make Me laugh..Ur Childish....Upp This Bitch...An I'll Rtf a Lil Later..Gotta lot of Work ahead of me..so sorry bout tha time going by...
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Old 02-05-06, 03:21 PM   #21
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Votes fuckers.
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Old 02-05-06, 03:22 PM   #22
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How the fuck can I be swaying retard. Nobody can see the posts until after they vote you stupid motherfucker.
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Old 02-07-06, 02:04 AM   #23
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Voted For: King Solo

i voted for solo his rymes flowed better, punches were better and rymes were better
cold steel u rymes sometimes didnt ryme and thats wat cost u

hey its my 200th post yeah kool

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Old 02-07-06, 02:15 AM   #24
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The voting on RV is ill.
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Old 02-08-06, 08:55 AM   #25
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How the fuck can I be swaying retard. Nobody can see the posts until after they vote you stupid motherfucker.



^Sensitive?...Hah.

Who Cares...An I Loss a Vote Cuz I Didnt Rhyme Well...PSssh...Funny Guy...King,No Hate Tho'...You Cool...
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Old 02-18-06, 01:36 PM   #26
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Uppin This Dead Ass Battle...Lol...J/p......YURP!!
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Old 02-21-06, 04:00 PM   #27
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Man up sucka… fuck it, this broke ass bitch can just get bent
I mean hell, ColdSTEEL’s…………just so he can pay his rent
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I said I wouldn’t take long, so now I’m gonna take the goods
Now I’m done draggin shit on, I can bury Cold in the woods
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coldsteel your wordplay was way too forced and that made the punch not work like that benign line and de-fetus. i didn't like those at all
king those two i posted are good quotables and very easy to understand and very witty punches. so word up with the win

someone please return the favor with a vote; link is in my sig
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