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Old 02-04-06, 09:25 AM   #16
Adam
 
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Voted For: AITZ

twenty9
It aint nothin to battle a g-unit toy soldier
like the artic his rhymes are much colder/
Whack as fuck..
ya rhymes is weak boy, so don’t gloat,
ya battles like an election, no one votes/
Shitty..
u a bitch, just bein promotional
get u a razor, cuz u emotional/
Lmao...so gay..


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AITZ
Step to this and get your brain equipped,
With more silicone then fuckin porn star tits
Dumb...
This Mcs Nonsense and surely twisted,
detection of ejecting the skill that’s purely gifted
Cool Flow..
MY thermo scope shows the "ill" that’s leaven this patient,
breaths last-and-choke, I collect-skill and leave him vacant
Meh...not bad..


Vote:AITZ

Weak battle boys.
 
Old 02-04-06, 10:48 AM   #17
dazy
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This was feedback posted for twenty9

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u a bitch, just bein promotional
get u a razor, cuz u emotional/
that line sucked i didnt like it but that wasa the tone of the battle
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Old 02-04-06, 03:09 PM   #18
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Vote - AITZ

AITZ took Flow, He had some multis and inner multis that structured his flows well. Twenty9 had alright flow, and some alright multis, but his flow was as complex. Punches were weak from both sides, but AITZ took punches because his punches seemed like they weren't forced. Twenty9 took Personals, cuz, well, he had the only personal in the whole battle...it wasn't a great one, but atleast he was thinkin' about it. AITZ took wordplay, with his line in his last bar, otherwise there was no attempt at wordplay in this battle. AITZ took Multis as well, because he had inner multis, and had more complex multis than twenty9.

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